From 08215a7b2358c8e328bc79178e7b1d8075851dda Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: George Schena <george.schena@education.gov.uk>
Date: Tue, 24 Sep 2024 13:39:47 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Update personal statement section

---
 .../candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb     | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb b/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb
index 657cec8b206..066db3e874e 100644
--- a/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb
@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@
 <%= render 'guidance' %>
 
 <% if adviser_sign_up.available? %>
-  <p class="govuk-body">Get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to('teacher training advisers', new_candidate_interface_adviser_sign_up_path) %>.</p>
+  <p class="govuk-body">If you have a bachelor's degree, you can get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to('teacher training advisers', new_candidate_interface_adviser_sign_up_path) %>.</p>
 <% elsif adviser_sign_up.waiting_to_be_assigned_to_an_adviser? || adviser_sign_up.already_assigned_to_an_adviser? %>
   <p class="govuk-body">Ask your teacher training adviser for help with your personal statement.</p>
 <% else %>
-  <p class="govuk-body">Get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to_with_utm_params('teacher training advisers', t('get_into_teaching.url_get_an_adviser_start'), utm_campaign(params), current_application.phase) %>.</p>
+  <p class="govuk-body">If you have a bachelor's degree, you can get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to_with_utm_params('teacher training advisers', t('get_into_teaching.url_get_an_adviser_start'), utm_campaign(params), current_application.phase) %>.</p>
 <% end %>
 
 <%= f.govuk_text_area :becoming_a_teacher, label: { text: 'Your personal statement', size: 'm' }, rows: 25, max_words: 1000 %>

From 7d1e9983be2d63423b210ccd93d383f035e3915f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: George Schena <george.schena@education.gov.uk>
Date: Tue, 24 Sep 2024 15:48:11 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Use smart quotes

---
 .../candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb     | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb b/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb
index 066db3e874e..3d46a845e3d 100644
--- a/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/candidate_interface/personal_statement/_form.html.erb
@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@
 <%= render 'guidance' %>
 
 <% if adviser_sign_up.available? %>
-  <p class="govuk-body">If you have a bachelor's degree, you can get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to('teacher training advisers', new_candidate_interface_adviser_sign_up_path) %>.</p>
+  <p class="govuk-body">If you have a bachelor’s degree, you can get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to('teacher training advisers', new_candidate_interface_adviser_sign_up_path) %>.</p>
 <% elsif adviser_sign_up.waiting_to_be_assigned_to_an_adviser? || adviser_sign_up.already_assigned_to_an_adviser? %>
   <p class="govuk-body">Ask your teacher training adviser for help with your personal statement.</p>
 <% else %>
-  <p class="govuk-body">If you have a bachelor's degree, you can get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to_with_utm_params('teacher training advisers', t('get_into_teaching.url_get_an_adviser_start'), utm_campaign(params), current_application.phase) %>.</p>
+  <p class="govuk-body">If you have a bachelor’s degree, you can get support with your personal statement by speaking to our <%= govuk_link_to_with_utm_params('teacher training advisers', t('get_into_teaching.url_get_an_adviser_start'), utm_campaign(params), current_application.phase) %>.</p>
 <% end %>
 
 <%= f.govuk_text_area :becoming_a_teacher, label: { text: 'Your personal statement', size: 'm' }, rows: 25, max_words: 1000 %>