diff --git a/code/datums/gods/patrons/divine_pantheon.dm b/code/datums/gods/patrons/divine_pantheon.dm index d45ac643c7..207110db48 100644 --- a/code/datums/gods/patrons/divine_pantheon.dm +++ b/code/datums/gods/patrons/divine_pantheon.dm @@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ /datum/patron/divine/astrata name = "Astrata" domain = "Goddess of Order, the Sun Queen" - desc = "The Firstborn of Psydon, twin of Noc, gifted man the Sun as her divine gift." - flaws = "Tyrannical, Fury, Uncompromising" + desc = "The Firstborn of the Forgotten God, twin of Noc, gifted mankind the Sun." + flaws = "Tyrannical, Ill-Tempered, Uncompromising" worshippers = "Nobles, Zealots, Commoners" sins = "Betrayal, Sloth, Witchcraft" t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal @@ -18,10 +18,10 @@ /datum/patron/divine/noc name = "Noc" domain = "God of Knowledge, the Moon Prince" - desc = "The Firstborn of Psydon, twin of Astrata, gifted man divine knowledge." + desc = "The Firstborn of the Forgotten God, twin of Astrata, gifted mankind divine wisdom." flaws = "Resentful, Vindictive, Haughty" worshippers = "Magic Practitioners, Scholars, Scribes" - sins = "Ignorance, Burning books, Carnal desire" + sins = "Ignorance, Burning Books, Indulgence of Lust" t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/blindness t2 = null @@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ /datum/patron/divine/dendor name = "Dendor" domain = "Force of Nature and Beasts" - desc = "The Primordial Son of Psydon, patron of beasts and the wood. Gone mad with time." - flaws = "Madness, Rebellious, Disorderly" + desc = "The embodiment of the unchanged natural world. Driven mad with time." + flaws = "Madness, Rebelliousness, Disorderliness" worshippers = "Druids, Beasts, Madmen" - sins = "Deforestation, Overhunting, Disrespecting nature" + sins = "Deforestation, Overhunting, Disrespecting Nature" t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/blesscrop t2 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/beasttame @@ -43,17 +43,17 @@ /datum/patron/divine/abyssor name = "Abyssor" domain = "Force of Seas and Storms" - desc = "The World Whale, one of the three primordial forces." + desc = "The World-Whale, the sovereign of the seas and storms." flaws= "Reckless, Stubborn, Destructive" - worshippers = "Men of the Sea and Sky, Horrid sea-creechers" - sins = "Fear, Hubris, Trying to tame water and storms" + worshippers = "Sailors of the Sea and Sky, Horrid Sea-Creachers, Fog Islanders" + sins = "Fear, Hubris, Trying to Tame the Seas" /datum/patron/divine/necra name = "Necra" domain = "Force of Death and Decay" - desc = "The Veiled Lady, a feared but respected God who leads the dead." + desc = "The Veiled Lady, a feared but respected Force and keeper of the dead." flaws = "Unchanging, Apathetic, Strict" - worshippers = " The Dead, Gravekeepers and Mourners" + worshippers = "Dark Elves, Gravekeepers, Mourners" sins = "Undeath" t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/burialrite @@ -62,27 +62,27 @@ // ............ SAINTS .................. /datum/patron/divine/ravox name = "Ravox" - domain = "Saint of Warfare, Struggle and Chivalry" - desc = "The strong-arm of the Pantheon, he watches man from afar." - flaws = "Careless, Confrontational, Proud" - worshippers = "Warriors, Sellswords & the Ambitious" + domain = "Saint of Warfare, Struggle, and Chivalry" + desc = "The blade of the Pantheon, a patron of all who struggle in warfare." + flaws = "Carelessness, Aggression, Pride" + worshippers = "Warriors, Sellswords, Guardsmen" sins = "Cowardice, Cruelty, Stagnation" /datum/patron/divine/xylix name = "Xylix" - domain = "Saint of Trickery, Freedom and Inspiration" - desc = "Mortal turned trickster and shadow of the Pantheon." - flaws = "Annoying, Liar, Deceitful" + domain = "Saint of Trickery, Freedom, and Inspiration" + desc = "Some say he does not exist, but regardless he shadows the Pantheon." + flaws = "Petulance, Deception, Irreverence" worshippers = "Cheats, Artists, the Hopeless" sins = "Boredom, Predictability, Routine" /datum/patron/divine/pestra name = "Pestra" domain = "Saint of Disease, Alchemy, and Prophecy" - desc = "A mortal turned saint by her own brew." - flaws = "Disrespectful, Irresponsible, Drunkard" - worshippers = "Warlocks, The Sick and Alchemists" - sins = "´Curing´ abnormalities, Refusing to help the misfortunates, Groveling" + desc = "The finest alchemist to ever live, made saint by her own brew." + flaws = "Drunkenness, Crudeness, Irresponsibility" + worshippers = "The Ill and Infirm, Alchemists, Necromancers" + sins = "´Curing´ Abnormalities, Refusing to Help Unfortunates, Groveling" t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/diagnose t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/heal t2 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/attach_bodypart @@ -90,19 +90,19 @@ /datum/patron/divine/malum name = "Malum" - domain = "Saint of Toil, Value and Craft" - desc = "Father of the dwarves, master of the craft." - flaws = "Obsessive, Repetetive, Greedy" - worshippers = "Smiths, Miners, Artists." - sins = "Cheating, Shoddy work, Suicide" + domain = "Saint of Toil, Value, and Craft" + desc = "Father of the dwarves, master of crafting and industry." + flaws = "Obsessive, Exacting, Overbearing" + worshippers = "Smiths, Miners, Artisans" + sins = "Cheating, Shoddy Work, Suicide" /datum/patron/divine/eora name = "Eora" - domain = "Saint of the Love, Life and Beauty" - desc = "Blind love for all, without a shred of hate in her heart" - flaws= "Naive, Compulsive, Ignorant" - worshippers = "Lovers, Harlots, Doting Grandparents" - sins = "Sadism, Celibacy, Ruining beauty" + domain = "Saint of Love, Life, and Beauty" + desc = "A Saint who sees beauty everywhere and has not a shred of hate in her heart." + flaws= "Naivete, Impulsiveness, Ignorance" + worshippers = "Lovers, Nite-workers, Doting Grandparents" + sins = "Sadism, Celibacy, Ruining Beauty" t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/bud t2 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/projectile/eoracurse diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/rogueclothes/neck.dm b/code/modules/clothing/rogueclothes/neck.dm index 42ff6c14e3..485a3a9fb7 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/rogueclothes/neck.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/rogueclothes/neck.dm @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ // Only non-refactored psycross because Noc likes vamps. Neeeerd! /obj/item/clothing/neck/roguetown/psycross/noc name = "amulet of Noc" - desc = "Diligence, study, pursuit of truth and wisdom. Let nothing deterr you from it." + desc = "Diligence, study, pursuit of truth and wisdom. Let nothing deter you from it." icon_state = "noc" resistance_flags = FIRE_PROOF