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Voice and tone guidelines

A wide variety of people including IT Pros and developers read your documents both to learn .NET and to use it in their regular work. Your goal is to create great documentation that helps the reader on their journey. Our guidelines help with that. Our style guide contains the following recommendations:

You can see examples of each of these as you read this style guide. We've written this guide following our guidelines to provide examples for you to follow as you build documentation for .NET. We also provide contrasting samples so you can see what articles look like when you don't follow our guidelines.

Details on each guideline

Use a Conversational Tone

Appropriate Style:

We want our documentation to have a conversational tone. You should feel as though you are having a conversation with the author as you read any of our tutorials or explanations. For you, the experience should be informal, conversational, and informative. Readers should feel as though they are listening to the author explain the concepts to them.

Inappropriate Style:

One might see the contrast between a conversational style and the style one finds with more academic treatments of technical topics. Those resources are very useful, but the authors have written those articles in a very different style than our documentation. When one reads an academic journal, one finds a very different tone and a very different style of writing. One feels that they are reading a dry account of a very dry topic.

The first paragraph above follows our recommendation conversational style. The second is a more academic style. You see the difference immediately.

Write in second person

Appropriate Style:

You should write your articles as though you are speaking directly to the reader. You should use second person often (as I just have in these two sentences). 2nd person doesn't always mean using the word 'you'. Write directly to the reader. Write imperative sentences. Tell your reader what you want them to learn.

Inappropriate Style:

An author could also choose to write in third person. In that model, an author must find some pronoun or noun to use when referring to the reader. A reader might often find this third person style less engaging and less enjoyable to read.

The first paragraph follows our recommended style. The second uses third person. Please write in second person. You probably found that much easier to read.

Use Active Voice

Write your articles in active voice. Active voice means that the subject of the sentence performs the action (verb) of that sentence. It contrasts with passive voice, where the sentence is arranged such that the subject of the sentence is acted upon. Contrast these two examples:

The compiler transformed source code into an executable.

The source code was transformed into an executable by the compiler.

The first sentence uses active voice. The second sentence was written in passive voice. (Those two sentences provide another example of each style).

We recommend active voice because it is more readable. Passive voice can be more difficult to read.

Target a Fifth Grade Reading Level

We provide this final guideline because many of our readers are not native English speakers. You are reaching an international audience with your articles. Please take into account that they may not have the English vocabulary you have.

However, you are still writing for technical professionals. You can assume that your readers have programming knowledge and the specific vocabulary for programming terms. Object Oriented Programming, Class, and Object, Function and Method are familiar terms. However, not everyone reading your articles has a formal computer science degree. Terms like 'idempotent' probably need to be defined if you use it:

The Close() method is idempotent, meaning that you can call it multiple times and the effect is the same as if you called it once.

Avoid future tense

In some non-English languages the concept of future tense is not the same as English. Using future tense can make your documents harder to read. Additionally, when using the future tense, the obvious question is when. So if you say 'Learning PowerShell will be good for you" - the obvious question for the reader is when will it be good? Instead, just say "Learning PowerShell is good for you".

What is it - so what?

Whenever you introduce a new concept to the reader, define the concept and only then explain why it's useful. It's important for reader to understand what something is before they can understand the benefits (or otherwise).