From 0df1a4e186ce16ee779defb45bab06ff1aa713d7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Peter Mouthaan Date: Sun, 3 Jun 2018 12:38:10 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] some more typos on the first read, and better sentence --- english/catering.html | 4 ++-- english/checklist.html | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/english/catering.html b/english/catering.html index f97f19e..71dea7a 100644 --- a/english/catering.html +++ b/english/catering.html @@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ navlevel: 1 ---
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Your ticket grants you two hot meals, on saturday and sunday night, because it is pleasant to eat togehter. Just as last time we arrange these meals for everyone, included in the ticketprice, to make sure everybody gets provided sufficient sugars, proteins and fats.

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Your ticket grants you two hot meals, on saturday and sunday night, because it is pleasant to eat together. Just as last time we arrange these meals for everyone, included in the ticketprice, to make sure everybody gets provided sufficient sugars, proteins and fats.

As a snack you may also pick up some free fruit at the bar (currently subject to change).

For the other meals we ask you to be self-sufficient. Don't forget to pack a stack of fruit, snacks, bread, spread, etc.

There is a Delhaize Proxy supermarket near De Kluis where you could drop in for groceries, even on sundaymorning.

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At the bar you can continuously find a chill drink (We have Mate and a variety of special sodas), a pintje or a stronger beer, or even a healthy en energetic snack. We also serve 24/3 free coffe, for the productive types.

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At the bar you can continuously find a chill drink (We have Mate and a variety of special sodas), a pintje or a stronger beer, or even a healthy and energetic snack. We also serve 24/3 free coffe, for the productive types.

If you would like a strong one at the campfire, you need to bring you won bottle. The soda, straws and lime that should go with the whisky, rum or wodka, those are on us.

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The usual suspects

  • Cash. If you want vouchers for drinks and snacks, if you want to buy a bread, bring cash. If you like the workshop you just did, there will be extra kits for sale by the workshop organisers (soldering kits, lockpicking tools, 3d pens, forging silver rings,....).
  • Clothing. Make sure you bring your stack of geeky shirts and your most sexy pajamas, even sandals with socks are welcome. Take a look at the weather forecast (heatwave? or flood?) to match your clothes. An extra sweater for the evenings or in the tent is always a good plan.
  • Toilet bag With a toothbrush, deodorant and your favorite showergel. There are ample showers on the campsite.
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  • Toilet paper because even if we do bring a decent supply, your own private role always comes in handy for about anything.
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  • Toilet paper because even if we do bring a decent supply, your own private roll always comes in handy for about anything.
  • Sunscreen and medicines, for example things against mosquito, diarrhea or hangovers.
  • Towel. Really, how could you survive a hacker camp without one?

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  • Tent. Everyone can set up his or her tent on our terrains. Check up front if it's still complete. If you do not have a tent you could check at Decathlon. (they provide decent tents starting between 30 and 50€). Are you coming with a caravan or camper? Pass on this information up front.
  • Sleeping bag or a blanket if you prefer. Don't forget a pillow.
  • Air mattress or a cot. Remember that pump!
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  • Flashlight. Headlights are very handy, but so is a lamp you can hang in your tent. During the evening we will hand out lightsticks to all the kids, that way they will be well visible by night at least.
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  • Flashlight. Headlights are very handy, but so is a lamp you can hang in your tent. During the evening we will hand out lightsticks to all the kids, that way they will at least be well visible by night.
  • Would you like to make it a bit more cozy near your tent, bring a camping chair or a small table.
  • If it gets very sunny and hot, you can use an aluminium safety blanket to keep the heat out of your tent.
  • Put your car's fire extinguisher in your tent.