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### 4. Alert on changes in conversion rates
-To set alerts when your conversion rate changes, you can set up an insight that tracks signups on your pricing page.
+To set alerts when our conversion rate changes, we can set up an insight that tracks pricing page to signup conversion.
-For example, we can create a trend insight filtered for our pricing pageviews and our [`user_signed_up` event](/docs/getting-started/send-events#2-capture-custom-events), which is triggered whenever a user completes our signup flow and creates their account.
+For example, we can create a trend insight filtered by unique pricing pageviews and a [`user_signed_up` event](/docs/getting-started/send-events#2-capture-custom-events), which is triggered whenever a user completes our signup flow and creates their account.
-So this insight will display a graph with a line for the number of pageviews for the pricing page as well as a separate line for the number of users that signed up.
+In this example, we enable [formula mode](/docs/product-analytics/trends/formulas) and divide the number of signups by the number of unique visitors that visit the pricing page, which gives us a conversion rate to work with.
-If we want to find out when the conversion rate increases or decreases by 10%, we can set up multiple alerts. We can set up one alert for when the `user_sign_up` event increases by 10% and a separate alert for when the event decreases by 10%.
+To find out when the conversion rate increases or decreases by 10%, we can set up multiple alerts based on the formula above.
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+We can set up one alert for when the `user_sign_up` event increases by 10% and a separate alert for when the event decreases by 10%.
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