Section on prepositions will probably be moved/superseded by the grammar section.
- Lines 117–123 - It's impossible to demonstrate the appeared wrapping in this example because of the fluid layout
- Line 205 - Seems incoherent
- Line 225 - Footnote seems incoherent
- Line 245 - I think the reason for is to reduce ambiguity, as you couldn't tell which was which otherwise. That it's this way around and not the other is just an historical coincidence.
- Line 250 - >Implying logical coherence in adverbs
- Line 256 - I added a footnote about large numbers
- Line 260 - It took me a while to realise what this line was talking about, because without a monospaced font it's hard to see the difference. I put them in a code block so that it's easier to see the difference.
- Line 24 - I was about to sharpie all over this bastard until I read the next paragraph...
- Line 30 - Is the Comic Sans necessary? In any case, this paragraph probably needs touching up.
- Line 68 - Comment on FimFiction removed since it's incorrect
- Really not a big fan of using Mary Sue as any kind of literary term. It's just hogwash to me. Eh.
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- Line 21 - "Rating bombing" doesn't really exist anymore
- Line 25 - Anon commenting has been disabled on da fimfs for like a year
- Line 71 - 24 September, what year?
- Line 96 - Swapped the TVTropes link out for something written by actual lawyers
- Line 8 - Distinction between "grammar" and "punctuation" is probably necessary
- Line 14 - I put a link to both Ponychan and MLPchan's /fic/ in
- Line 188 - it's just "unicorn"
- "Showing vs Telling" link removed since it's broken
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