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 ## How I Use Them in My Code: Guidiing Harmony
 
-In my coding experiences, especially in my final project for ICS 314, design patterns have been my trusted guidelines. I employed the Observer pattern implicitly through the 'useTracker' hook, acting as a potent part in my code symphony. In the project, I applied it to make different parts work in unison, much like instruments syncing up with a conductor, ensuring all pieces work together smoothly.
+In my coding experiences, especially in my final project for ICS 314, design patterns have been my trusted guidelines. I employed the Observer pattern implicitly through the 'useTracker' hook, acting as a potent part in my code symphony. In the project, I applied it to make different parts work in unison, much like instruments syncing up with a conductor, ensuring all pieces work together smoothly. As a developer, this experience showed me how using these patterns makes code strong and efficient. It's like having a set of reliable tools in your toolbox for building things that work really well.
 
-Another pattern at my disposal is the Bridge pattern, connecting the form schema with the form library in one of my components. It's like creating a coherent link between different musical sections, ensuring the harmony of data exchange. This pattern, much like a musical bridge uniting two melodies, facilitated a smooth interaction between the form structure and the rendering library, enhancing the overall composition of my coding symphony.
+Another pattern at my disposal is the Bridge pattern, connecting the form schema with the form library in one of my components. It's like creating a coherent link between different musical sections, ensuring the harmony of data exchange. This pattern, much like a musical bridge uniting two melodies, facilitated a smooth interaction between the form structure and the rendering library, enhancing the overall composition of my coding symphony. Its influence wasn't just helpful in the current project; it also adds for future improvements. This highlights how picking the right design patterns can be essential in your box of tools.
 
 ## The Grand Finale
 
-In the final stage of creating my software, the significance of design patterns becomes clearer. They're not just abstract concepts; they act like musical notations transforming my code into a well-structured composition. Through patterns like Observer and Bridge, I've crafted a system that works in unison effectively.
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-As a developer, I see myself as the composer of my digital creations, and design patterns are like my musical notes. They help me craft software that's intricate yet easy to understand, adding a touch of classiness. So, when an interviewer brings up design patterns, I can showcase the musical journey that is my code.
+In the final stage of creating my software, the significance of design patterns becomes clearer. They're not just abstract concepts; they act like musical notations transforming my code into a well-structured composition. Through patterns like Observer and Bridge, I've crafted a system that works in unison effectively. As a developer, I see myself as the composer of my digital creations, and design patterns are like my musical notes. They help me craft software that's intricate yet easy to understand, adding a touch of classiness. So, when an interviewer brings up design patterns, I can showcase the musical journey that is my code.