From c2bf14c6cadc802a92c0157296a58cfa29446c06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Richardson Date: Sun, 23 Oct 2022 18:57:15 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] remove a paragraph on installation network, and remove extra "the" --- draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy.md | 6 ++---- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy.md b/draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy.md index 091ea6e..04c6d75 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy.md +++ b/draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy.md @@ -139,8 +139,8 @@ Two modes of the constrained Join Proxy are specified: IP addresses (link-local with interface and non-link-local and UDP port-numbers) during the connection. - 2 A stateless Join Proxy where the connection the state - is placed into a new header in the + 2 A stateless Join Proxy where the connection state + is replaced by a new proxy header in the UDP messages between constrained Join Proxy and Registrar. @@ -164,8 +164,6 @@ Registrar/Coordinator (JRC), Pledge, and Voucher. In this document, the term "Registrar" is used throughout instead of "Join Registrar/Coordinator (JRC)". -The term "installation network" refers to all devices in the installation and the network connections between them. The term "installation IP_address" refers to an address out of the set of addresses which are routable over the whole installation network. - The term "installation" refers to all devices in the network and their interconnections, including Registrar, enrolled nodes with and without constrained Join Proxy functionality and Pledges. (Installation) IP addresses are assumed to be routeable over the whole installation network except for link-local IP addresses.