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 title: Introduction to Apollo iOS
-subtitle: Learn how Apollo iOS, a Swift-first GraphQL client simplifies GraphQL operations with strongly-typed models, caching, and more
+subtitle: Learn how Apollo iOS, a Swift-first GraphQL client, simplifies GraphQL data management
 description: Discover how Apollo iOS, a Swift-first, open-source GraphQL client offers type-safe code generation, caching, and robust networking.
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