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 # Contributors are mostly male white westerners
 
 Getting a fair share of women or people that are not white men from a western
-country is hard.
+country to participate in your project is hard.
 
-As an Open Source project I think we should all strive to wipe out any kind of
-treating people differently depending on some particular characteristics, be it
-sex, religion or whatever. But the harsh reality is that the Open Source world
-is still consisting mostly of these stereotypes. And I am one of them, I am no
+As an Open Source project I think we should strive to wipe out any kind of
+treating people differently depending on some particular characteristics, be
+it sex, religion or whatever. The harsh reality is that the Open Source world
+is still consisting mostly of these stereotypes. I am one of them, I am no
 exception.
-