From 18daca2b5398b84786e40eab989ede968c0c58d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WickedCybs Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2024 18:48:40 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/5] hostility text --- code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm | 7 +++++-- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm index c075c4be25db..c68a0d7a0c34 100644 --- a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm +++ b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm @@ -40,8 +40,11 @@ to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were shipped off with the battalion to one of the UPP's most remote territories, a gas giant designated MV-35 in the Anglo-Japanese Arm, in the Neroid Sector.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("For the past 14 months, you and the rest of the Smoldering Sons have been stationed at MV-35's only facility, the helium refinery, Altai Station.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("As MV-35 and Altai Station are the only UPP-held zones in the Neroid Sector for many lightyears, you have spent most of your military career holed up in crammed quarters in near darkness, waiting for supply shipments and transport escort deployments.")) - to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("With the recent arrival of the enemy USCM battalion the 'Falling Falcons' and their flagship, the [MAIN_SHIP_NAME], the UPP has felt threatened in the sector.")) - to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("In an effort to protect the vulnerable MV-35 from the encroaching UA/USCM imperialists, the leadership of your battalion has opted this to be the best opportunity to strike at the Falling Falcons to catch them off guard.")) + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("With the recent arrival of the USCM battalion the 'Falling Falcons' and their flagship, the [MAIN_SHIP_NAME], the UPP has felt threatened in the sector.")) + if(hostility) + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("In an effort to protect the vulnerable MV-35 from the encroaching UA/USCM imperialists, the leadership of your battalion has opted this to be the best opportunity to strike at the Falling Falcons to catch them off guard.")) + else + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Despite this, the leadership of your battalion questions what may have prompted the distress signal from their rivals. Your squad is to find out why and to render aid to the beleaguered UA forces as required.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_WARNING(FONT_SIZE_BIG("Glory to Colonel Ganbaatar."))) to_chat(M, SPAN_WARNING(FONT_SIZE_BIG("Glory to the Smoldering Sons."))) to_chat(M, SPAN_WARNING(FONT_SIZE_BIG("Glory to the UPP."))) From 5595056428a8da43c8342574070567b4c34a5c61 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WickedCybs Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2024 21:38:49 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 2/5] synthetic text --- code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm index c68a0d7a0c34..17593f96aab1 100644 --- a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm +++ b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ else to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were brought online in a UPP engineering facility, knowing only your engineers for the first few weeks for your pseudo-life.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were programmed with all of the medical and combat experience a military fighting force support asset required.")) - to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Throughout your career, your engineers, and later, your UPP compatriots, treated you like a tool, and only that.")) + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Throughout your career, your engineers, and later, your UPP compatriots, treated you like [pick(75;"a tool, and only that.", 25;"a person, despite your purpose")]")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Some weeks after your unit integration, you were assigned to the 17th 'Smoldering Sons' battalion (six hundred strong) under the command of Colonel Ganbaatar.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were shipped off with the battalion to one of the UPP's most remote territories, a gas giant designated MV-35 in the Anglo-Japanese Arm, in the Neroid Sector.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("For the past 14 months, you and the rest of the Smoldering Sons have been stationed at MV-35's only facility, the helium refinery, Altai Station.")) From 7cd9c0503a691075259a64d769bc8eac0434ccb7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WickedCybs Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2024 21:48:13 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 3/5] A period --- code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm index 17593f96aab1..c05b8d457892 100644 --- a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm +++ b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ else to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were brought online in a UPP engineering facility, knowing only your engineers for the first few weeks for your pseudo-life.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were programmed with all of the medical and combat experience a military fighting force support asset required.")) - to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Throughout your career, your engineers, and later, your UPP compatriots, treated you like [pick(75;"a tool, and only that.", 25;"a person, despite your purpose")]")) + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Throughout your career, your engineers, and later, your UPP compatriots, treated you like [pick(75;"a tool, and only that.", 25;"a person, despite your purpose.")]")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Some weeks after your unit integration, you were assigned to the 17th 'Smoldering Sons' battalion (six hundred strong) under the command of Colonel Ganbaatar.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were shipped off with the battalion to one of the UPP's most remote territories, a gas giant designated MV-35 in the Anglo-Japanese Arm, in the Neroid Sector.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("For the past 14 months, you and the rest of the Smoldering Sons have been stationed at MV-35's only facility, the helium refinery, Altai Station.")) From e1e8639dd5cad319dbd9e24be25e41cbe5283c59 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WickedCybs Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2024 21:50:29 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 4/5] line tweak --- code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm index c05b8d457892..f5d3e9f26c94 100644 --- a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm +++ b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You grew up in relatively simple family in [pick(75;"Eurasia", 25;"a famished UPP colony")] with few belongings or luxuries.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("The family you grew up with were [pick(50;"getting by", 25;"impoverished", 25;"starving")] and you were one of [pick(10;"two", 20;"three", 20;"four", 30;"five", 20;"six")] children.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You come from a long line of [pick(40;"crop-harvesters", 20;"soldiers", 20;"factory workers", 5;"scientists", 15;"engineers")], and quickly enlisted to improve your living conditions.")) - to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Following your enlistment to the UPP military at the age of 17, you were assigned to the 17th 'Smoldering Sons' battalion (six hundred strong) under the command of Colonel Ganbaatar.")) + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Following your enlistment to the UPP military at the age of 17, you were assigned to the 17th 'Smoldering Sons' bamin ttalion (six hundred strong) under the command of Colonel Ganbaatar.")) else to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were brought online in a UPP engineering facility, knowing only your engineers for the first few weeks for your pseudo-life.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were programmed with all of the medical and combat experience a military fighting force support asset required.")) @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if(hostility) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("In an effort to protect the vulnerable MV-35 from the encroaching UA/USCM imperialists, the leadership of your battalion has opted this to be the best opportunity to strike at the Falling Falcons to catch them off guard.")) else - to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Despite this, the leadership of your battalion questions what may have prompted the distress signal from their rivals. Your squad is to find out why and to render aid to the beleaguered UA forces as required.")) + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Despite this, the leadership of your battalion questions what may have prompted the distress signal from their rivals. Your squad is to find out why and to render aid to the beleaguered UA forces.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_WARNING(FONT_SIZE_BIG("Glory to Colonel Ganbaatar."))) to_chat(M, SPAN_WARNING(FONT_SIZE_BIG("Glory to the Smoldering Sons."))) to_chat(M, SPAN_WARNING(FONT_SIZE_BIG("Glory to the UPP."))) From 66e40c0cf52c91ca31b3e97c6f98b071cbc6ba08 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WickedCybs Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2024 21:55:31 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 5/5] idk how i messed up that one word --- code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm index f5d3e9f26c94..d68171981355 100644 --- a/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm +++ b/code/datums/emergency_calls/upp.dm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You grew up in relatively simple family in [pick(75;"Eurasia", 25;"a famished UPP colony")] with few belongings or luxuries.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("The family you grew up with were [pick(50;"getting by", 25;"impoverished", 25;"starving")] and you were one of [pick(10;"two", 20;"three", 20;"four", 30;"five", 20;"six")] children.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You come from a long line of [pick(40;"crop-harvesters", 20;"soldiers", 20;"factory workers", 5;"scientists", 15;"engineers")], and quickly enlisted to improve your living conditions.")) - to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Following your enlistment to the UPP military at the age of 17, you were assigned to the 17th 'Smoldering Sons' bamin ttalion (six hundred strong) under the command of Colonel Ganbaatar.")) + to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("Following your enlistment to the UPP military at the age of 17, you were assigned to the 17th 'Smoldering Sons' battalion (six hundred strong) under the command of Colonel Ganbaatar.")) else to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were brought online in a UPP engineering facility, knowing only your engineers for the first few weeks for your pseudo-life.")) to_chat(M, SPAN_BOLD("You were programmed with all of the medical and combat experience a military fighting force support asset required."))