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diff --git a/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html b/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html
index 1889ef0..d9c69ba 100644
--- a/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html
+++ b/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html
@@ -4266,34 +4266,40 @@ <h3 id="name-version-09-to-10">
         </h3>
 <ul class="normal">
 <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.1">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.1.1">Replaced "GROUPNAME" with "APPNAME".<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.1.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.1.1">Clarified use of NoSec for 'early discovery' and refer to cBRSKI.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.1.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.2">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.2.1">Explicitly mentioning of the type of group (CoAP/application/security).<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.2.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.2.1">Clarified mandatory vs optional elements in CoAP group and CoAP group URI.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.2.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.3">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.3.1">Use of .example for example hostnames.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.3.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.3.1">Replaced "GROUPNAME" with "APPNAME".<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.3.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.4">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.4.1">The name of a security group is not necessarily a string.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.4.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.4.1">Explicitly mentioning of the type of group (CoAP/application/security).<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.4.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.5">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.5.1">Changed "has to" to "should" for enforcing access control based on membership to security groups.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.5.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.5.1">Use of .example for example hostnames.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.5.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.6">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.6.1">Used normative language for policies about group rekeying.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.6.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.6.1">The name of a security group is not necessarily a string.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.6.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.7">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.7.1">Further stressed that group communication ought to be secured.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.7.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.7.1">Changed "has to" to "should" for enforcing access control based on membership to security groups.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.7.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.8">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.8.1">Avoid calling applications as "(non-)sensitive" and "(non-)critical".<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.8.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.8.1">Used normative language for policies about group rekeying.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.8.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.9">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.9.1">Clarification on source authentication, source addresses, and Echo Option.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.9.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.9.1">Further stressed that group communication ought to be secured.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.9.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
           <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.10">
-            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.10.1">Editorial fixes and improvements.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.10.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.10.1">Avoid calling applications as "(non-)sensitive" and "(non-)critical".<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.10.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+</li>
+          <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.11">
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.11.1">Clarification on source authentication, source addresses, and Echo Option.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.11.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+</li>
+          <li class="normal" id="appendix-E.1-1.12">
+            <p id="appendix-E.1-1.12.1">Editorial fixes and improvements.<a href="#appendix-E.1-1.12.1" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </li>
         </ul>
 </section>
diff --git a/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt b/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt
index 9599ed3..4f33740 100644
--- a/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt
+++ b/john-comments/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt
@@ -3869,6 +3869,11 @@ Appendix E.  Document Updates
 
 E.1.  Version -09 to -10
 
+   *  Clarified use of NoSec for 'early discovery' and refer to cBRSKI.
+
+   *  Clarified mandatory vs optional elements in CoAP group and CoAP
+      group URI.
+
    *  Replaced "GROUPNAME" with "APPNAME".
 
    *  Explicitly mentioning of the type of group (CoAP/application/