diff --git a/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html b/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html index a4e8f81..33c655c 100644 --- a/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html +++ b/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.html @@ -1966,7 +1966,7 @@

To create a CoAP group, a configuring entity defines an IP multicast address (or hostname) for the group and optionally a UDP port number in case it differs from the default CoAP port number 5683. Then, it configures one or more devices as listeners to that IP multicast address, with a CoAP endpoint listening on the CoAP group's associated UDP port. These endpoints/devices are the group members.

The configuring entity can be, for example, a local application with pre-configuration, a user, a software developer, a cloud service, or a local commissioning tool. Also, the devices sending CoAP requests to the CoAP group in the role of CoAP client need to be configured with the same information, even though they are not necessarily group members. One way to configure a client is to supply it with a group URI.

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The IETF does not define a mandatory protocol to accomplish CoAP group creation. [RFC7390] defined an experimental protocol for configuring memberships of CoAP groups for unsecured group communication, based on JSON-formatted configuration resources, and the experiment is concluded. For IPv6 CoAP groups, common multicast address ranges that are used to configure group addresses from are ff1x::/16 and ff3x::/16.

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The IETF does not define a mandatory protocol to accomplish CoAP group creation. [RFC7390] defined an experimental protocol for configuring memberships of CoAP groups for unsecured group communication, based on JSON-formatted configuration resources. The experiment is concluded as showing that the protocol has not been considered for deployment and use. For IPv6 CoAP groups, common multicast address ranges that are used to configure group addresses from are ff1x::/16 and ff3x::/16.

To create an application group, a configuring entity may configure a resource (name) or a set of resources on CoAP endpoints, such that a CoAP request sent to a group URI by a configured CoAP client will be processed by one or more CoAP servers that have the matching URI path configured. These servers are the members of the application group.

To create a security group, a configuring entity defines an initial subset of the related security material. This comprises a set of group properties including the cryptographic algorithms and parameters used in the security group, as well as additional information relevant throughout the group life-cycle, such as the security group name and description. This task MAY be entrusted to a dedicated administrator, that interacts with a Group Manager as defined in Section 5. After that, further security materials to protect group communications have to be generated, compatible with the configuration specified for the security group.

To participate in a security group, CoAP endpoints have to be configured with the group security material used to protect communications in the associated application/CoAP groups. The part of the process that involves secure distribution of group security material MAY use standardized communication with a Group Manager as defined in Section 5.

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diff --git a/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt b/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt index f52e9e1..cf79a05 100644 --- a/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt +++ b/christian-post-wglc-review/draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis.txt @@ -791,10 +791,11 @@ Table of Contents The IETF does not define a mandatory protocol to accomplish CoAP group creation. [RFC7390] defined an experimental protocol for configuring memberships of CoAP groups for unsecured group - communication, based on JSON-formatted configuration resources, and - the experiment is concluded. For IPv6 CoAP groups, common multicast - address ranges that are used to configure group addresses from are - ff1x::/16 and ff3x::/16. + communication, based on JSON-formatted configuration resources. The + experiment is concluded as showing that the protocol has not been + considered for deployment and use. For IPv6 CoAP groups, common + multicast address ranges that are used to configure group addresses + from are ff1x::/16 and ff3x::/16. To create an application group, a configuring entity may configure a resource (name) or a set of resources on CoAP endpoints, such that a @@ -3950,6 +3951,9 @@ Appendix E. Document Updates E.1. Version -11 to -12 + * Clarified outcome of the RFC 7390 experiment on group membership + configuration protocol. + * Clarified that rt=g. is used just as an example. * Made RFC 7967 a normative reference.