IoT - Minor errata (#21545)

Author: Cam Soper

docs/iot/debugging.md

@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ title: Debug .NET apps on Raspberry Pi
 description: Learn how to debug .NET apps on Raspberry Pi and similar devices.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
-ms.topic: overview
+ms.date: 11/13/2020
+ms.topic: how-to
 ms.prod: dotnet
 zone_pivot_groups: ide-set-one
 ---

docs/iot/deployment.md

@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 ---
 title: Deploy .NET apps to Raspberry Pi
-description: Learn how .NET can be used to build applications for IoT devices and scenarios.
+description: Learn how to deploy .NET apps to Raspberry Pi.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
-ms.topic: overview
+ms.date: 11/13/2020
+ms.topic: how-to
 ms.prod: dotnet
 ---
 
 # Deploy .NET apps to Raspberry Pi
 
-Deployment of .NET apps to Raspberry Pi is the identical to that of any other platform. Your app can run as *self-contained* or *framework-dependent* deployment modes. There are advantages to each strategy. For more information, see [.NET application publishing overview](/dotnet/core/deploying).
+Deployment of .NET apps to Raspberry Pi is identical to that of any other platform. Your app can run as *self-contained* or *framework-dependent* deployment modes. There are advantages to each strategy. For more information, see [.NET application publishing overview](/dotnet/core/deploying).
 
 ## Deploying a framework-dependent app
 

docs/iot/includes/sftp-client.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Where:
 
 - The `-r` option instructs `scp` to copy files recursively.
 - */publish-location/* is the folder you published to in the previous step.
-- *pi@raspberypi* is the user and host names in the format `<username>@<hostname>`.
+- `pi@raspberypi` is the user and host names in the format `<username>@<hostname>`.
 - */home/pi/deployment-location/* is the new folder on the Raspberry Pi.
 
 > [!TIP]

docs/iot/index.yml

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ metadata:
   ms.collection: collection
   author: camsoper
   ms.author: casoper
-  ms.date: 10/20/2020
+  ms.date: 11/13/2020
 
 # linkListType: architecture | concept | deploy | download | get-started | how-to-guide | learn | overview | quickstart | reference | tutorial | video | whats-new
 

docs/iot/intro.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Develop apps for IoT devices with the .NET IoT Libraries
 description: Learn how .NET can be used to build applications for IoT devices and scenarios.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
+ms.date: 11/13/2020
 ms.topic: overview
 ms.prod: dotnet
 ---

docs/iot/quickstarts/sensehat.md

@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 ---
 title: Quickstart - Use .NET to drive a Raspberry Pi Sense HAT
-description: Learn how .NET can be used to build applications for IoT devices and scenarios.
+description: Get started with .NET IoT Libraries in 5 minutes using a Sense HAT, an add-on board for Raspberry Pi.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
+ms.date: 11/13/2020
 ms.topic: quickstart
 ms.prod: dotnet
 ---
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ The command downloads and runs a script. The script:
 - Builds the project.
 - Runs the project.
 
-Observe the console output as sensor data is displayed. The LED matrix displays a yellow pixel on a field of blue. Holding the joystick in any direction moves the yellow pixel in that direction.
+Observe the console output as sensor data is displayed. The LED matrix displays a yellow pixel on a field of blue. Holding the joystick in any direction moves the yellow pixel in that direction. Clicking the center joystick button causes the background to switch from blue to red.
 
 ## Get the source code
 

docs/iot/tutorials/adc.md

@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 ---
 title: Read values from an analog-to-digital converter
-description: Learn how .NET can be used to build applications for IoT devices and scenarios.
+description: Learn how to read variable voltage values using an analog-to-digital converter.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
+ms.date: 11/13/2020
 ms.topic: tutorial
 ms.prod: dotnet
 ---
 <!--markdownlint-disable DOCSMD011 -->
 # Read values from an analog-to-digital converter
 
-An analog-to-digital converter (ADC) is a device that can read an analog input voltage value and convert it into a digital value. ADCs are used for reading various sensors, potentiometers, and other devices that change resistance based on certain conditions.
+An analog-to-digital converter (ADC) is a device that can read an analog input voltage value and convert it into a digital value. ADCs are used for reading values from thermistors, potentiometers, and other devices that change resistance based on certain conditions.
 
 In this topic, you will use .NET to read values from an ADC as you modulate the input voltage with a potentiometer.
 

docs/iot/tutorials/blink-led.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 ---
 title: Blink an LED
-description: Learn how .NET can be used to build applications for IoT devices and scenarios.
+description: Learn how to blink an LED with the .NET IoT Libraries.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
-ms.topic: overview
+ms.date: 11/13/2020
+ms.topic: tutorial
 ms.prod: dotnet
 ---
 

docs/iot/tutorials/lcd-display.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 ---
 title: Display text on an LCD
-description: Learn how .NET can be used to build applications for IoT devices and scenarios.
+description: Learn how to display characters on a liquid crystal display with the .NET IoT Libraries.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
-ms.topic: overview
+ms.date: 11/13/2020
+ms.topic: tutorial
 ms.prod: dotnet
 ---
 <!--markdownlint-disable DOCSMD011 -->

docs/iot/tutorials/temp-sensor.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 ---
 title: Read environmental conditions from a sensor
-description: Learn how .NET can be used to build applications for IoT devices and scenarios.
+description: Learn how to read termperature, barometric pressure, and humidity with the .NET IoT Libraries.
 author: camsoper
 ms.author: casoper
-ms.date: 11/2/2020
-ms.topic: overview
+ms.date: 11/14/2020
+ms.topic: tutorial
 ms.prod: dotnet
 ---