From 4dea60c59e21cd546a4cbab7c77871c808cbbdb0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Taha Tesser <tessertaha@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 25 Feb 2025 11:33:01 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Address feedback

---
 .../updated-material-3-progress-indicators.md | 20 +++++++++----------
 .../updated-material-3-slider.md              |  8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-progress-indicators.md b/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-progress-indicators.md
index 2bf4114a5a..cdfd480ef4 100644
--- a/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-progress-indicators.md
+++ b/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-progress-indicators.md
@@ -55,19 +55,19 @@ LinearProgressIndicator(
 ),
 ```
 
-To opt into the updated design spec for the `LinearProgressIndicator`, for the
-entire app, set the `ProgressIndicatorThemeData.year2023` flag to `false` in
-the `MaterialApp`:
+To update your entire app to use the updated `LinearProgressIndicator` design,
+set the `ProgressIndicatorThemeData.year2023` property to `false` in your
+`MaterialApp`:
 
 ```dart highlightLines=2
 return MaterialApp(
   theme: ThemeData(progressIndicatorTheme: const ProgressIndicatorThemeData(year2023: false)),
-        /// ...
+        // ...
         LinearProgressIndicator(
           year2023: false,
           value: 0.5,
         ),
-        /// ...
+        // ...
 ```
 
 To opt into the updated design spec for the `CircularProgressIndicator`,
@@ -80,19 +80,19 @@ CircularProgressIndicator(
 ),
 ```
 
-To opt into the updated design spec for the `CircularProgressIndicator`, for the
-entire app, set the `ProgressIndicatorThemeData.year2023` flag to `false` in
-the `MaterialApp`:
+To update your entire app to use the updated `CircularProgressIndicator` design,
+set the `ProgressIndicatorThemeData.year2023` property to `false` in your
+`MaterialApp`:
 
 ```dart highlightLines=2
 return MaterialApp(
   theme: ThemeData(progressIndicatorTheme: const ProgressIndicatorThemeData(year2023: false)),
-        /// ...
+        // ...
         CircularProgressIndicator(
           year2023: false,
           value: 0.5,
         ),
-        /// ...
+        // ...
 ```
 
 ## Timeline
diff --git a/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-slider.md b/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-slider.md
index d5b6c46aac..d21571517f 100644
--- a/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-slider.md
+++ b/src/content/release/breaking-changes/updated-material-3-slider.md
@@ -50,13 +50,13 @@ Slider(
 ),
 ```
 
-To opt into the updated design spec for the `Slider`, for the entire app, set
-the `SliderThemeData.year2023` flag to `false` in the `MaterialApp`:
+To update your entire app to use the updated `Slider` design, set the
+`SliderThemeData.year2023` property to `false` in your `MaterialApp`:
 
 ```dart highlightLines=2
 return MaterialApp(
   theme: ThemeData(sliderTheme: const SliderThemeData(year2023: false)),
-        /// ...
+        // ...
         Slider(
           value: _value,
           onChanged: (value) {
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ return MaterialApp(
             });
           },
         ),
-        /// ...
+        // ...
 ```
 
 ## Timeline