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             <p class="whisper"> the original statistic on meat consumption and life expectancy was actually part of a post influencing people to a carnivorous diet. apparently veganism is no longer the hip and healthy thing to do, because eating raw sticks of butter and consuming unpasteurized dairy is the trend now. i actually have too many opinions about this, but i won't babble on. </p>
 
-            <p> anyway! here's some facts i made up. </p>
+            <p> anyway! here's some made up facts, collected from doomscrolling on reels. </p>
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+            <h3> </h3>
 
             <h3> the average american made $106,400 in 2022 </h3>
 
@@ -44,9 +46,9 @@ <h3> the average american made $106,400 in 2022 </h3>
             
             <p> data distribution matters. especially when 1% of the population holds <a href="https://www.federalreserve.gov/releases/z1/dataviz/dfa/distribute/table/#quarter:129;series:Net%20worth;demographic:networth;population:all;units:shares">30.4% of the country's wealth</a> as of Q1 2024. here, a different measure of central tendency, the median, is much more appropriate, and that number is $74,580. </p>
             
-            <p> of course, measures of dispersion would give additional insight, but if your attention span can only capture one number at a time, let it be the median. </p>
+            <p> measures of dispersion would give nice insight, but if your attention span can only capture one number at a time, let it be the median. </p>
 
-            <h3>  </h3>
+            <h3> ...this is a work in progress, luisa is busy doing euro summer in budapest!  </h3>
 
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