From e8c4ab882519d0df6d970c2252adee2cc434f27f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Cosmonaut Kitten <james@maple.id.au>
Date: Thu, 24 Nov 2022 19:54:06 +1100
Subject: [PATCH] updated home page and lesson 1

---
 index.html         |  9 +++++----
 pages/Lesson1.html | 10 +++++-----
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 77b77c5..adf665c 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -39,13 +39,14 @@ <h2>Home</h2>
       Welcome to this short course on the constructed language, kawaba!
     </p>
     <p>
-      <span class="tlt">{&#9733 |language of parts} {ka|kind} {wa|speak} {ba|parts}</span> is the language of parts. 
-      It uses only 120 single syllable root words to convey all ideas through their simplest possible parts. The features of
-      kawaba do not come from any other language, but have been designed from scratch to be simple for everybody.
+      <span class="tlt">{&#9733 |language of parts} {ka|kind of} {wa|speak} {ba|part}</span> is the language of parts! 
+      It uses only 120 single syllable root words that cannot be defined more simply to convey all ideas through their
+       most fundamental parts. Its roots are
+      based on the concept of semantic primes, the building blocks of meaning in all languages.
       
     </p>
     <p>
-      <span class="tlt">{&#9733 |you are learning kawaba!} {ga |you} {bu|recieve} {gi |know} {ka|kind} {wa|speak} {ba |parts} {na! |emphasis marker}</span></span>
+      <span class="tlt">{&#9733 |kawaba is fun!} {ka|kind of} {wa|speak} {ba |part } {pe |good } {na! |emphasis marker}</span></span>
     </p>
     <p>
       Words and sentences in kawaba will be written as above. You can hover over each individual
diff --git a/pages/Lesson1.html b/pages/Lesson1.html
index b5ba677..24fbf98 100644
--- a/pages/Lesson1.html
+++ b/pages/Lesson1.html
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ <h3>Additional Roots</h3>
             <tr>
                 <td>b</td>
                 <td>hole</td>
-                <td>soft</td>
+                <td>smooth</td>
                 <td>moon</td>
                 <td>trade</td>
                 <td>sleep</td>
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ <h3>Additional Roots</h3>
             <tr>
                 <td>d</td>
                 <td>metal</td>
-                <td>flat</td>
+                <td>heavy</td>
                 <td>star</td>
                 <td>control</td>
                 <td>man</td>
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ <h3>Additional Roots</h3>
             <tr>
                 <td>j</td>
                 <td>word</td>
-                <td>easy</td>
+                <td>soft</td>
                 <td>wood</td>
                 <td>end</td>
                 <td>health</td>
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ <h3>Additional Roots</h3>
             <tr>
                 <td>w</td>
                 <td>write</td>
-                <td>difficult</td>
+                <td>hard</td>
                 <td>stone</td>
                 <td>laugh</td>
                 <td>child</td>
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ <h3>Additional Roots</h3>
                 <td>cold</td>
                 <td>eat</td>
                 <td>sex</td>
-                <td>family</td>
+                <td>tool</td>
             </tr>
         </table>