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Author: renetapopova

modules/ROOT/pages/backup-restore/online-backup.adoc

@@ -320,36 +320,17 @@ As an example, add the following content to your _neo4j.conf_ and _neo4j-admin.c
 .Server configuration in _neo4j.conf_
 [source, properties]
 ----
-server.backup.listen_address=0.0.0.0:6362
-dbms.ssl.policy.backup.enabled=true
-dbms.ssl.policy.backup.base_directory=certificates/backup
-dbms.ssl.policy.backup.private_key=private.key
-dbms.ssl.policy.backup.public_certificate=public.crt
 dbms.ssl.policy.backup.client_auth=REQUIRE
 dbms.ssl.policy.backup.tls_versions=TLSv1.2,TLSv1.3
-# dbms.ssl.policy.backup.tls_versions=TLSv1.2
 dbms.ssl.policy.backup.ciphers=TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384,TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384,TLS_DHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384
-# dbms.ssl.policy.backup.ciphers=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA384
-# dbms.ssl.policy.backup.ciphers=TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384,TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384,TLS_DHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384
-# dbms.netty.ssl.provider=OPENSSL
-dbms.netty.ssl.provider=JDK
 ----
 
 .Client configuration in _neo4j-admin.conf_
 [source, properties]
 ----
-# Enable SSL backup
-dbms.ssl.policy.backup.enabled=true
-# dbms.ssl.policy.backup.base_directory=certificates/backup
-dbms.ssl.policy.backup.private_key=/path/to/certificates/backup/private.key
-dbms.ssl.policy.backup.public_certificate=/path/to/certificates/backup/public.crt
 dbms.ssl.policy.backup.client_auth=REQUIRE
 dbms.ssl.policy.backup.tls_versions=TLSv1.2,TLSv1.3
-# dbms.ssl.policy.backup.tls_versions=TLSv1.2
 dbms.ssl.policy.backup.ciphers=TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384,TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384,TLS_DHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384
-# dbms.netty.ssl.provider=OPENSSL
-dbms.netty.ssl.provider=JDK
-server.jvm.additional=-Djavax.net.ssl.trustStore=/path/to/certificates/backup/trusted/
 ----
 
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modules/ROOT/pages/security/ssl-framework.adoc

@@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ The owner/group should be configured to the user/group that will be running the
 Default user/group is neo4j/neo4j.
 ====
 
-. Set the backup SSL configuration in both _neo4j.conf_ and _neo4j-admin.conf_.
+. Set the backup SSL configuration in the _neo4j.conf_ file.
 .. Set the backup SSL policy to `true`:
 +
 [source, properties]
@@ -956,6 +956,27 @@ If the certificate is a different path outside of NEO4J_HOME, then set the absol
 dbms.ssl.policy.backup.client_auth=REQUIRE
 ----
 
+=== Configure the backup client for SSL
+
+When using `neo4j-admin backup` command, you need to specify the SSL policy to be used by the backup client.
+You can do this by setting a matching SSL configuration in the _neo4j.conf_ and _neo4j-admin.conf_ files.
+This is crucial for the backup to work properly.
+For example, if you have set up the backup SSL policy described in section <<ssl-backup-config>>, then you need to set the following in the _neo4j-admin.conf_ file:
+
+[source, properties]
+----
+dbms.ssl.policy.backup.enabled=true
+dbms.ssl.policy.backup.base_directory=/path/to/certificates/backup
+dbms.ssl.policy.backup.private_key=private.key
+dbms.ssl.policy.backup.public_certificate=public.crt
+dbms.ssl.policy.backup.client_auth=REQUIRE
+----
+
+[NOTE]
+====
+Keep in mind that if you are a backup client on a different machine from the Neo4j server, you must also ensure that equivalent SSL certs are installed in both places.
+====
+
 [[ssl-other-configs]]
 === Other configurations for SSL