From 495738419f5d8bf4476a417ee48b07393d399843 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Fraser Tweedale <ftweedal@redhat.com>
Date: Wed, 15 May 2024 22:56:55 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] HMS-4126: update some strings

Update some UI text for correctness or clarity.
---
 .../AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog.tsx                       | 8 ++++++--
 .../ConfirmDeleteDomain/ConfirmDeleteDomain.tsx           | 3 ++-
 src/Routes/DefaultPage/DefaultPage.tsx                    | 8 ++++----
 .../Components/PagePreparation/PagePreparation.tsx        | 2 +-
 .../PageServiceRegistration/PageServiceRegistration.tsx   | 6 +++---
 5 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/Components/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog.tsx b/src/Components/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog.tsx
index 6aa89ae..837f812 100644
--- a/src/Components/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog.tsx
+++ b/src/Components/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog/AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog.tsx
@@ -38,7 +38,9 @@ const AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog: React.FC<AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialogProps> =
     text = (
       <div>
         <p>Are you sure you want to disable domain auto-join?</p>
-        <p>Disabling will avoid new hosts to join the domain &quot;{domain.title}&quot; using domain auto-join on launch.</p>
+        <p>
+          Disabling will prevent systems from automatically joining the domain <strong>{domain.title}</strong>.
+        </p>
       </div>
     );
   } else {
@@ -46,7 +48,9 @@ const AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialog: React.FC<AutoJoinChangeConfirmDialogProps> =
     text = (
       <div>
         <p>Are you sure you want to enable domain auto-join?</p>
-        <p>Enabling will allow new hosts to join the domain &quot;{domain.title}&quot; using domain auto-join on launch.</p>
+        <p>
+          Enabling will allow systems to automatically join the domain <strong>{domain.title}</strong>.
+        </p>
       </div>
     );
   }
diff --git a/src/Components/ConfirmDeleteDomain/ConfirmDeleteDomain.tsx b/src/Components/ConfirmDeleteDomain/ConfirmDeleteDomain.tsx
index c792177..3be78d9 100644
--- a/src/Components/ConfirmDeleteDomain/ConfirmDeleteDomain.tsx
+++ b/src/Components/ConfirmDeleteDomain/ConfirmDeleteDomain.tsx
@@ -36,7 +36,8 @@ const ConfirmDeleteDomain: React.FC<ConfirmDeleteDomainProps> = (props) => {
         </Button>,
       ]}
     >
-      No new host enrollment from HCC will be allowed on <b>{props.domain?.title || ''}</b> domain after registration deletion.
+      Hosts will be unable to automatically join the domain
+      <b> {props.domain?.title || ''}</b> after deletion.
     </Modal>
   );
 };
diff --git a/src/Routes/DefaultPage/DefaultPage.tsx b/src/Routes/DefaultPage/DefaultPage.tsx
index c028405..eddb306 100644
--- a/src/Routes/DefaultPage/DefaultPage.tsx
+++ b/src/Routes/DefaultPage/DefaultPage.tsx
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ const Header = () => {
     <PageHeader>
       <PageHeaderTitle title={title} />
       <p>
-        Manage registered identity domains to leverage host access controls from your existing identity and access management.{' '}
+        Register identity and access management systems to enable machines to automatically join a domain.{' '}
         <Button
           component="a"
           target="_blank"
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ const Header = () => {
           href={linkLearnMoreAbout}
           ouiaId="LinkDefaultLearnMoreAbout1"
         >
-          Learn more about the domain registry.
+          Learn more about the Directory and Domain Services registry.
         </Button>
       </p>
     </PageHeader>
@@ -88,8 +88,8 @@ const EmptyContent = () => {
             <EmptyStateBody>
               <Stack>
                 <StackItem className="pf-v5-u-pt-sm">
-                  Use host access controls from your existing identity domains in your
-                  <br /> cloud environment*. To get started, register an identity domain.
+                  Register an identity domain to enable systems to
+                  <br /> automatically join the domain on launch.
                 </StackItem>
                 <StackItem className="pf-v5-u-pt-md">
                   <RegisterDomainButton />
diff --git a/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PagePreparation/PagePreparation.tsx b/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PagePreparation/PagePreparation.tsx
index e086290..0300aa7 100644
--- a/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PagePreparation/PagePreparation.tsx
+++ b/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PagePreparation/PagePreparation.tsx
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ const PagePreparation = (props: PagePreparationProps) => {
                   steps to install the server packages
                 </Button>
                 <ClipboardCopy hoverTip="copy" clickTip="Copied" isReadOnly ouiaId="TextPagePreparationInstallPackage">
-                  dnf copr enable @podengo/ipa-hcc && dnf install ipa-hcc-server
+                  dnf install ipa-hcc-server
                 </ClipboardCopy>
               </TextContent>
               <TextContent className="pf-v5-u-pt-md">
diff --git a/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PageServiceRegistration/PageServiceRegistration.tsx b/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PageServiceRegistration/PageServiceRegistration.tsx
index 3a23590..0897f48 100644
--- a/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PageServiceRegistration/PageServiceRegistration.tsx
+++ b/src/Routes/WizardPage/Components/PageServiceRegistration/PageServiceRegistration.tsx
@@ -75,15 +75,15 @@ const PageServiceRegistration = (props: PageServiceRegistrationProp) => {
         <ol>
           <li className="pf-v5-u-ml-md">
             <TextContent>
-              Register your Red Hat IdM domain with the Red Hat Hybrid Cloud Console by running the following command in a terminal on your Red Hat
-              IdM server.
+              Register your Red Hat IdM domain with the Red Hat Hybrid Cloud Console by running the following command as <code>root</code> in a
+              terminal on your Red Hat IdM server, and following the prompts.
             </TextContent>
             <ClipboardCopy hoverTip="copy" clickTip="Copied" isReadOnly ouiaId="TextWizardRegistrationRegister">
               {ipa_hcc_register_cmd}
             </ClipboardCopy>
           </li>
           <li className="pf-v5-u-ml-md pf-v5-u-pt-md">
-            <TextContent>Once the processes have been completed, run a verification test.</TextContent>
+            <TextContent>After the command completes, verify the registration was successful.</TextContent>
           </li>
         </ol>
       </Form>