@@ -1074,8 +1074,8 @@
Reliable QUIC Stream Resets
QUIC defines a RESET_STREAM frame to abort sending on a stream. When a sender
resets a stream, it also stops retransmitting STREAM frames for this stream in
-the of packet loss. On the receiving side, there is no guarantee that any data
-sent on that stream is delivered.¶
+the event of packet loss. On the receiving side, there is no guarantee that any
+data sent on that stream is delivered.
¶
This document defines a new QUIC frame, the RESET_STREAM_AT frame, that allows
resetting a stream, while guaranteeing delivery of stream data up to a certain
byte offset.¶
@@ -1115,7 +1115,7 @@
time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference
material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."¶
- This Internet-Draft will expire on 11 July 2024.¶
+ This Internet-Draft will expire on 12 July 2024.
¶
@@ -1222,7 +1222,7 @@
WebTransport session.¶
Since QUIC does not provide guaranteed delivery of steam data for reset streams,
it is possible that a receiver is unable to read critical information. In the
-example above, a reset stream can cause the receiver to a fail to associate
+example above, a reset stream can cause the receiver to fail to associate
incoming streams with their respective subcomponent of the application.
Therefore, it is desirable that the receiver can rely on the delivery of
critical information to applications, even if the QUIC stream is reset before
@@ -1338,7 +1338,7 @@
byte offset SHOULD NOT be retransmitted.¶
As described in Section 3.2 of [RFC9000], a stream reset signal might be
suppressed or withheld, and the same applies to a stream reset signal carried in
-a RESET_STREAM_AT frame. Similary, the Reliable Size of the RESET_STREAM_AT
+a RESET_STREAM_AT frame. Similarly, the Reliable Size of the RESET_STREAM_AT
frame does not prevent a QUIC stack from delivering data beyond the specified
offset to the receiving application.¶
Note that a Reliable Size value of zero is valid. A RESET_STREAM_AT frame with
@@ -1433,9 +1433,8 @@
QUIC version 1, the security considerations of [RFC9000] apply accordingly.
Specifically, given that RESET_STREAM_AT frames indicate the offset up to which
data is reliably transmitted, endpoints SHOULD remain vigilant against resource
-commitment and exhaustion attacks have to be taken even after sending or
-receiving RESET_STREAM_AT frames, until the stream states reach the terminal
-state.¶
+commitment and exhaustion attacks even after sending or receiving RESET_STREAM_AT
+frames, until the stream reaches the terminal state.¶
diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-reliable-stream-reset.txt b/draft-ietf-quic-reliable-stream-reset.txt
index 794fec2..dc15b57 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-quic-reliable-stream-reset.txt
+++ b/draft-ietf-quic-reliable-stream-reset.txt
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
QUIC M. Seemann
Internet-Draft Protocol Labs
Intended status: Standards Track 奥一穂 (K. Oku)
-Expires: 11 July 2024 Fastly
- 8 January 2024
+Expires: 12 July 2024 Fastly
+ 9 January 2024
Reliable QUIC Stream Resets
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ Abstract
QUIC defines a RESET_STREAM frame to abort sending on a stream. When
a sender resets a stream, it also stops retransmitting STREAM frames
- for this stream in the of packet loss. On the receiving side, there
- is no guarantee that any data sent on that stream is delivered.
+ for this stream in the event of packet loss. On the receiving side,
+ there is no guarantee that any data sent on that stream is delivered.
This document defines a new QUIC frame, the RESET_STREAM_AT frame,
that allows resetting a stream, while guaranteeing delivery of stream
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Status of This Memo
time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference
material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."
- This Internet-Draft will expire on 11 July 2024.
+ This Internet-Draft will expire on 12 July 2024.
Copyright Notice
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ Table of Contents
Since QUIC does not provide guaranteed delivery of steam data for
reset streams, it is possible that a receiver is unable to read
critical information. In the example above, a reset stream can cause
- the receiver to a fail to associate incoming streams with their
+ the receiver to fail to associate incoming streams with their
respective subcomponent of the application. Therefore, it is
desirable that the receiver can rely on the delivery of critical
information to applications, even if the QUIC stream is reset before
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ Table of Contents
As described in Section 3.2 of [RFC9000], a stream reset signal might
be suppressed or withheld, and the same applies to a stream reset
- signal carried in a RESET_STREAM_AT frame. Similary, the Reliable
+ signal carried in a RESET_STREAM_AT frame. Similarly, the Reliable
Size of the RESET_STREAM_AT frame does not prevent a QUIC stack from
delivering data beyond the specified offset to the receiving
application.
@@ -297,9 +297,8 @@ Table of Contents
apply accordingly. Specifically, given that RESET_STREAM_AT frames
indicate the offset up to which data is reliably transmitted,
endpoints SHOULD remain vigilant against resource commitment and
- exhaustion attacks have to be taken even after sending or receiving
- RESET_STREAM_AT frames, until the stream states reach the terminal
- state.
+ exhaustion attacks even after sending or receiving RESET_STREAM_AT
+ frames, until the stream reaches the terminal state.
8. IANA Considerations
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index a033b78..c273e3d 100644
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+++ b/index.html
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
QUIC Reliable Stream Reset |
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+ same as main |