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CONTRIBUTING.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ All contributions are assumed to be licensed under the same licence as the sourc
 
 ## Issues
 
-If you find a mistake, bug, or other problem, please [open an issue](https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/repo-name/issues) in this repository.
+If you find a mistake, bug, or other problem, please [open an issue](https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/grow-a-dragonfly/issues) in this repository.
 
 ## Pull requests
 

LICENCE.md

@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@ Unless otherwise specified, everything in this repository is covered by the foll
 
 [![Creative Commons licence](http://i.creativecommons.org/l/by-sa/4.0/88x31.png)](http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/)
 
-***PROJECT NAME*** by the [Raspberry Pi Foundation](http://www.raspberrypi.org) is licensed under a [Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International licence](http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/).
+Grow a dragonfly by the [Raspberry Pi Foundation](http://www.raspberrypi.org) is licensed under a [Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International licence](http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/).
 
-Based on a work at https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/project-name.
+Based on a work at https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/grow-a-dragonfly.

README.md

@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
-# explore-project-template
+# Grow a dragonfly
 
-![explore-project-template](banner.png)
+![A dragonfly catching flies](en/images/banner.png)
 
-Find the project online at [projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/explore-project-template](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/explore-project-template)
+Find the project online at [projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/grow-a-dragonfly](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/grow-a-dragonfly)
 
 ## Resources
-For project materials and solutions, see [en/resources](https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/explore-project-template/tree/master/en/resources) and [en/solutions](https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/explore-project-template/tree/master/en/solutions).
+For solutions, see [en/solutions](https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/grow-a-dragonfly/tree/master/en/solutions).
 
 ## Contributing
 See [CONTRIBUTING.md](CONTRIBUTING.md)
 
 ## Licence
- See [LICENCE.md](LICENCE.md)
+See [LICENCE.md](LICENCE.md)

en/meta.yml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ listed: true
 copyedit: false
 last_tested: '2021-04-27'
 steps:
-  - title: You will make
+  - title: What you will make
   - title: Set the scene
   - title: A fly to eat
     completion:
@@ -27,5 +27,6 @@ steps:
       passing_score: 3
     completion:
       - external
-  - title: Upgrade your project
+  - title: Challenge
+    challenge: true
   - title: What next?

en/step_1.md

@@ -1,19 +1,10 @@
-## You will make
+## What you will make
 
 Make a nature app with a dragonfly that grows bigger as it eats insects.
 
-You will:
-+ Use `if`{:class="block3control"} blocks to make decisions based on **conditions** made with `operators`{:class="block3operators"} and `sensing`{:class="block3sensing"} blocks
-+ Use `random`{:class="block3operators"} numbers to control the movement of a sprite
-+ Use the `Sounds`{:class="block3sound"} editor to edit a sound
-
-<p style="border-left: solid; border-width:10px; border-color: #0faeb0; background-color: aliceblue; padding: 10px;">
-We use <span style="color: #0faeb0">**conditions**</span> all the time to make decisions. We could say “if the pencil is blunt, then sharpen it”. `If`{:class="block3control"} blocks and conditions let us write code that does something different depending on whether a condition is true or false.</p>
-
 --- no-print ---
 --- task ---
 
-### Play ▶️ 
 <div style="display: flex; flex-wrap: wrap">
 <div style="flex-basis: 175px; flex-grow: 1">  
 Move the mouse (or your finger) around the Stage to eat insects. How do the insects move?

en/step_10.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ If you are following the [More scratch](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/rasp
 
 --- print-only ---
 
-![The Stage view of completed drum star project.](images/drum-star.png)
+![The Stage view of the completed Drum star project.](images/drum-star.png)
 
 --- /print-only ---
 

en/step_2.md

@@ -13,16 +13,11 @@ You will set the scene. Choose your backdrop and add a dragonfly that follows th
 
 Open the [Grow a dragonfly starter project](https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/535695413/editor){:target="_blank"}. Scratch will open in another browser tab.
 
-[[[working-offline]]]
-
 --- /task ---
 
-<p style="border-left: solid; border-width:10px; border-color: #0faeb0; background-color: aliceblue; padding: 10px;">
-<span style="color: #0faeb0">**Dragonflies**</span> can be found all over the world and have been around for over 300 million years!</p>
-
 --- task ---
 
-**Choose:** Click **Choose a Backdrop** and add a backdrop of your choice. We used the **Jurassic** backdrop.
+Click **Choose a Backdrop** and add a backdrop of your choice. We used the **Jurassic** backdrop.
 
 ![Backdrop icon on the Scratch app interface](images/choose-backdrop-icon.png)
 
@@ -66,7 +61,9 @@ The Dragonfly costume is not facing to the right, so the head of the **Dragonfly
 
 --- task ---
 
-Click on the **Costumes** tab and use the **Select** (arrow) tool to select the costume. Use the **Rotate** tool at bottom of the selected costume to turn the **Dragonfly** costume to face the right.
+Click on the **Costumes** tab and use the **Select** (arrow) tool to select the costume. 
+
+Use the **Rotate** tool at bottom of the selected costume to turn the **Dragonfly** costume to face the right.
 
 ![An animated image showing how to rotate the dragonfly costume by dragging the rotation arrows so that the dragonfly faces right.](images/rotated-costume.gif)
 
@@ -90,10 +87,14 @@ Add the **Crank** sound to the **Dragonfly** sprite.
 
 ![](images/crank-sound-editor.png)
 
-Click the **Play** button so you can hear the sound.
-
 --- /task ---
 
+--- task ---
+
+**Test:** Click the **Play** button so you can hear the sound.
+
+--- /task --- 
+
 The **Crank** sound is too long and too slow for dragonfly wings.
 
 --- task ---
@@ -104,15 +105,18 @@ Click **Copy to New** to make a new sound with just the selected part:
 
 ![The end of the crank sound selected in blue with the 'Copy to New' icon highlighted.](images/crank-copy-end.png)
 
-Rename your new sound from **Crank2** to `Wings`.
+--- /task ---
 
+--- task ---
+
+Rename your new sound from **Crank2** to `Wings`.
 ![The rename sound property.](images/crank-wings-sound.png) 
 
 --- /task ---
 
 --- task ---
 
-Play the new sound. Click the **Faster** button a few times until you like the result:
+**Test:** Play the new sound. Click the **Faster** button a few times until you like the result:
 
 ![A faster sound wave with the 'Faster' icon highlighted.](images/wings-faster.png)
 

en/step_3.md

@@ -9,9 +9,6 @@ You will add an insect for the dragonfly to eat.
 </div>
 </div>
 
-<p style="border-left: solid; border-width:10px; border-color: #0faeb0; background-color: aliceblue; padding: 10px;">
-Characters that move around on their own in games are sometimes called <span style="color: #0faeb0">**mobs**</span>, short for mobiles. Can you think of a game that has mobs?</p>
-
 There's a fly in the **Frog 2** sprite that you can use.
 
 --- task ---
@@ -45,7 +42,7 @@ Add a new costume to the sprite using the **Paint** option:
 
 Click on the **Paste** icon to paste the sprite into the new costume. Drag the fly to the **centre** so it lines up with the crosshair.
 
-You can rename your costume `Insect` and delete the other costumes, as you won't need those:
+Rename your costume `Insect` and delete the other costumes, as you won't need those:
 
 ![The paint editor showing a pasted new Insect costume with the Paste icon highlighted. The costume list shows the other costumes have been deleted.](images/fly-costume.png)
 
@@ -83,8 +80,6 @@ You want the **Insect** sprite to `hide`{:class="block3looks"} `if`{:class="bloc
 
 Add an `if`{:class="block3control"} block to the **Insect** sprite's movement script:
 
-![](images/fly-icon.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when flag clicked
 forever
@@ -105,8 +100,6 @@ You want the insect to `hide`{:class="block3looks"} `if`{:class="block3control"}
 
 Drag a `touching [Dragonfly v]`{:class="block3sensing"} into the `if`{:class="block3control"} block. Add a `hide`{:class="block3looks"} block inside the `if`{:class="block3control"} block.
 
-![](images/fly-icon.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when flag clicked
 forever
@@ -129,9 +122,7 @@ The dragonfly won't get very big if it can only eat one fly!
 
 --- task ---
 
-Add blocks to `go to a random position`{:class="block3motion"} on the Stage, and make your sprite `wait`{:class="block3control"} for one second then `show`{:class="block3looks"}:
-
-![](images/fly-icon.png)
+Add blocks to make the hidden insect sprite `go to a random position`{:class="block3motion"} on the Stage, `wait`{:class="block3control"} for one second then `show`{:class="block3looks"}:
 
 ```blocks3
 when flag clicked
@@ -154,7 +145,7 @@ end
 
 **Test:** Test that your dragonfly can now eat lots of flies.
 
-Make sure you have added the `show`{:class="block3looks"} block to show at the start.
+Make sure you have added the `show`{:class="block3looks"} block at the start.
 
 --- /task ---
 

en/step_4.md

@@ -9,10 +9,7 @@ You will make the dragonfly grow when it eats a fly, and stop if it reaches full
 </div>
 </div>
 
-<p style="border-left: solid; border-width:10px; border-color: #0faeb0; background-color: aliceblue; padding: 10px;">
-The biggest living dragonflies can be found in Central America and have a wingspan of 19cm (a bit bigger than your hand). The largest insect ever known was <span style="color: #0faeb0">**Meganeuropsis permiana**</span>, a dragonfly with a wingspan of about 75cm (the size of a big footstep).</p>
-
-The fly knows that it has been eaten, and now the Dragonfly needs to know so that it grows. 
+The Dragonfly needs to grow when it eats a fly. 
 
 When you need to let another sprite know that something has happened, you can use a `broadcast`{:class="block3events"} block as you did in [Broadcasting spells](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/broadcasting-spells){:target="_blank"}. 
 
@@ -58,8 +55,6 @@ change size by [5]
 
 Add the **Chomp** sound to the dragonfly and `start`{:class="block3sound"} it when an insect gets eaten:
 
-![](images/dragonfly-icon.png)
-
 ```blocks3 
 when I receive [food v]
 +start sound [Chomp v]
@@ -79,9 +74,21 @@ When the dragonfly reaches its full size, the game will congratulate you and sto
 
 Add an `if`{:class="block3control"} block. 
 
-The dragonfly is full-size when the `size`{:class="block3looks"} `=`{:class="block3operators"} `100%`. First, add an `=`{:class="block3operators"} operator into the hexagon-shaped input:
+```blocks3
+when I receive [food v]
+start sound [Chomp v]
+change size by [5]
++if < > then
+end
+```
 
-![](images/dragonfly-icon.png)
+--- /task ---
+
+The dragonfly is full-size when the `size`{:class="block3looks"} `=`{:class="block3operators"} `100%`. 
+
+--- task ---
+
+First, add an `=`{:class="block3operators"} operator into the hexagon-shaped input:
 
 ```blocks3
 when I receive [food v]
@@ -96,8 +103,6 @@ end
 
 Finish building the condition by adding a built-in `size`{:class="block3looks"} variable and type the value `100`:
 
-![](images/dragonfly-icon.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when I receive [food v]
 start sound [Chomp v]
@@ -113,8 +118,6 @@ Add blocks so that `if`{:class="block3control"} the condition is true `then`{:cl
 
 Finally, add a `stop all`{:class="block3control"} block to stop the other dragonfly scripts:
 
-![](images/dragonfly-icon.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when I receive [food v]
 start sound [Chomp v]

en/step_5.md

@@ -13,9 +13,7 @@ The dragonfly 'glitches' and changes direction really fast if the mouse-pointer
 
 Select the **Dragonfly** and find the script that starts with `when flag clicked`{:class="block3events"}.
 
-Drag an `if`{:class="block3control"} inside the `forever`{:class="block3control"} block and the blocks inside the `forever`{:class="block3control"} will move inside the `if`{:class="block3control"}.
-
-Check carefully that your code looks like this:
+Drag an `if`{:class="block3control"} inside the `forever`{:class="block3control"} block. The blocks inside the `forever`{:class="block3control"} will move inside the `if`{:class="block3control"}.
 
 ![](images/dragonfly-icon.png)
 
@@ -36,10 +34,6 @@ end
 
 Then drag a `not`{:class="block3operators"} block into the `if`{:class="block3control"} and a `touching (mouse-pointer)`{:class="block3sensing"} inside that.
 
-Check that your code looks like this:
-
-![](images/dragonfly-icon.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when flag clicked
 set size to [25] %
@@ -52,24 +46,22 @@ end
 end
 ```
 
-The `not`{:class="block3operators"} block turns a condition into its opposite, just like it would in a sentence. 
-
 --- /task ---
 
 --- task ---
 
 **Test:** Check that the glitch is fixed, and the Dragonfly only moves when it is `not`{:class="block3operators"} `touching (mouse-pointer)`{:class="block3sensing"}.
 
-A different condition to try is:
+--- /task ---
+
+--- task ---
+
+Try a different condition that makes the dragonfly move when it is far enough from the mouse-pointer:
 
 ```blocks3
 <(distance to [mouse-pointer v]) > [50]>
 ```
 
-This makes the dragonfly move when it's far enough from the mouse-pointer. 
-
-**Tip:** You can drag blocks anywhere in the Code area and leave them there while you try different things. 
-
 --- /task ---
 
 --- save ---