diff --git a/src/writing.adoc b/src/writing.adoc
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--- a/src/writing.adoc
+++ b/src/writing.adoc
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Exception: Use passive voice if active voice leads to an awkward construction.
 
 === Use simple and direct language
 
-Use simple and direct language. Avoid using unnecessary phrases, such as saying "please."
+Use simple and direct language. Avoid using unnecessary phrases, such as saying "please." Direct language is easier to translate.
 
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@@ -54,6 +54,8 @@ Use simple and direct language. Avoid using unnecessary phrases, such as saying
 
 === Address the reader as "you"
 
+Using "we" in a sentence can be confusing, because the reader might not know whether they're part of the "we" that you're describing. Does it mean the RISC-V team, the RISC-V members, open source people, hardware people, or even everyone?
+
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 |Yes
@@ -70,7 +72,7 @@ An exception to this rule is the rationale sections.
 
 === Avoid Latin phrases
 
-Prefer English terms over Latin abbreviations.
+Prefer English terms over Latin abbreviations. Latin terms can be difficult for translation because it adds an additional language to translate.
 
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@@ -84,27 +86,6 @@ Prefer English terms over Latin abbreviations.
 |i.e.,
 |===
 
-
-=== Avoid using "we"
-
-Using "we" in a sentence can be confusing, because the reader might not know
-whether they're part of the "we" you're describing.
-
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-|===
-|Yes
-|No
-
-|Version 1.4 includes
-|In version 1.4, we have added
-
-|RISC-V provides a new feature for
-|We provide a new feature
-
-|This page teaches you how to create CSRs.
-|In this page, we are going to learn about CSRs.
-|===
-
 === Avoid jargon and idioms
 
 Some readers speak English as a second language. Avoid jargon and idioms to help them understand better.
@@ -148,7 +129,7 @@ considered new in a few months.
 
 === Avoid words that assume a specific level of understanding
 
-Avoid words such as "just", "simply", "easy", "easily", or "simple". These words do not add value and can actually make a user feel
+Avoid words such as "just", "simply", "easy", "easily", or "simple". These words do not add value and can actually make a user feel not up to the task.
 
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