Hero copyediting

Author: delan

_includes/hero.html

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         <img src="{{ '/img/home-parallel.png' | url }}" alt="" />
         <p class="subtitle yellow">Parallel</p>
-        <p>Servo explores web content parallelization by using concurrency to be faster and more energy-efficient in multiple cores devices.</p>
+        <p>Servo uses concurrency and parallelism for faster and more energy-efficient rendering of web content on multi-core devices.</p>
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         <img src="{{ '/img/home-multi-platform.png' | url }}" alt="" />
         <p class="subtitle purple">Cross platform</p>
-        <p>Servo has multi-platform support including Windows, macOS, Linux, Android, and OpenHarmony. In addition, Servo can be ported and adapted to embedded devices.</p>
+        <p>Servo has multi-platform support, including Windows, macOS, Linux, Android, and OpenHarmony. In addition, Servo can be ported and adapted to embedded devices.</p>
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       <div class="section-feature center-text">
         <img src="{{ '/img/home-independent.png' | url }}" alt="" />
         <p class="subtitle mid-turquoise">Independent</p>
-        <p>Servo is a project managed with open governance at Linux Foundation Europe through the Technical Steering Committee.</p>
+        <p>Servo is a project managed with open governance under Linux Foundation Europe through our Technical Steering Committee.</p>
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