From 931272cd38ac961b5d9f1fe556a153478a73d9bd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sam Goto <goto@chromium.org>
Date: Tue, 3 Sep 2024 11:26:45 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Address feedback

---
 spec/login-status.bs | 110 ++++++-------------------------------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 95 deletions(-)

diff --git a/spec/login-status.bs b/spec/login-status.bs
index 3df234df..7d60f45e 100644
--- a/spec/login-status.bs
+++ b/spec/login-status.bs
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@ ED: https://w3c-fedid.github.io/fedcm/login-status.html
 Prepare for TR: true
 Repository: w3c-fedid/FedCM
 Editor: Christian Biesinger, w3cid 39461, Google Inc. https://google.com, cbiesinger@chromium.org
+Editor: John Wilander, Apple Inc. https://apple.com, wilander@apple.com
 
 Markup Shorthands: markdown yes, biblio yes
 Default Biblio Display: inline
@@ -23,74 +24,13 @@ Abstract: A Web Platform API that allows websites to notify the browser when the
 Test Suite: https://github.com/web-platform-tests/wpt/tree/master/fedcm
 </pre>
 
-<pre class=anchors>
-spec: ecma262; urlPrefix: https://tc39.github.io/ecma262/
-    type: dfn
-        text: internal method; url: sec-ordinary-object-internal-methods-and-internal-slots
-
-spec: credential-management-1; urlPrefix: https://w3c.github.io/webappsec-credential-management/
-    type: dfn
-        text: same-origin with its ancestors; url: same-origin-with-its-ancestors
-    type: dfn
-        text: requires user mediation; url: origin-requires-user-mediation
-spec: webdriver; urlPrefix: https://w3c.github.io/webdriver/
-    type: dfn
-        text: endpoint node; url: dfn-endpoint-node
-        text: extension capability; url: dfn-extension-capability
-        text: getting a property; url: dfn-getting-properties
-        text: matching capabilities; url: dfn-matching-capabilities
-        text: no such alert; url: dfn-no-such-alert
-        text: error code; url: dfn-error-code
-        text: validating capabilities; url: dfn-validate-capabilities
-spec: webappsec-fetch-metadata; urlPrefix: https://w3c.github.io/webappsec-fetch-metadata/
-    type: dfn
-        text: Directly User-Initiated Requests; url: directly-user-initiated
-</pre>
-
 <pre class=link-defaults>
-spec:infra; type:dfn; text:list
 spec:infra; type:dfn; text:user agent
-spec:html; type:dfn; for:environment settings object; text:global object
-spec:html; type:dfn; for:html-origin-def; text:origin
-spec:webidl; type:dfn; text:resolve
-spec:webdriver2; type:dfn; text:error
 spec:fetch; type:dfn; for:/; text:response
-</pre>
-
-<style>
-dl.domintro dt {
-    font-family: Menlo, Consolas, "DejaVu Sans Mono", Monaco, monospace;
-
-    padding-top: 0.5em;
-    padding-bottom: 1em;
-}
-dl.domintro dt a {
-    color: inherit; border-bottom-style: none;
-}
-dl.domintro dt code {
-    font-size: inherit;
-}
-.idp-normative-text {
-    background-color: rgba(165, 42, 42, 0.3);
-    margin: 16px 0px;
-    padding: 8px;
-    border-left: 8px solid brown;
-}
-
-/* temporary fixes to the typogram diagrams
-   to support dark mode properly */
-script + svg :is(polygon, line, rect):not(.grid) {
-  stroke: currentcolor;
-}
-script + svg :is(polygon, text) {
-  fill: currentcolor;
-}
-</style>
+spec: credential-management-1; urlPrefix: https://w3c.github.io/webappsec-credential-management/
+    type: dfn
+        text: same-origin with its ancestors; url: same-origin-with-its-ancestors</pre>
 
-<script src="https://fedidcg.github.io/FedCM/static/underscore-min.js"></script>
-<script src="https://fedidcg.github.io/FedCM/static/raphael.min.js"></script>
-<script src="https://fedidcg.github.io/FedCM/static/webfont.js"></script>
-<script src="https://fedidcg.github.io/FedCM/static/typogram.js"></script>
 
 <!-- ============================================================ -->
 # Introduction # {#introduction}
@@ -98,14 +38,12 @@ script + svg :is(polygon, text) {
 
 *This section is non-normative.*
 
-Note: use the introduction from the explainer.
+Note: use the following introduction: https://github.com/fedidcg/login-status
 
 <!-- ============================================================ -->
-# The Login Status API # {#browser-api-login-status}
+# Login Status Map # {#hdr-login-status-map}
 <!-- ============================================================ -->
 
-## Login Status Map ## {#hdr-login-status-map}
-
 Each [=user agent=] keeps a global, persistent <dfn>Login Status
 map</dfn>, an initially empty [=map=]. The [=map/keys=] in this map are
 [=/origin=] (of [=IDPs=]), and the [=map/values=] are enums that can be one of
@@ -127,7 +65,9 @@ value |value|:
 
 </div>
 
-## HTTP header API ## {#login-status-http}
+<!-- ============================================================ -->
+# HTTP header API # {#login-status-http}
+<!-- ============================================================ -->
 
 [=IDPs=] can set the login status using an HTTP [=response=] [=header=] as follows.
 
@@ -156,7 +96,9 @@ process this header as follows:
 
 </div>
 
-## JavaScript API ## {#login-status-javascript}
+<!-- ============================================================ -->
+# JavaScript API # {#login-status-javascript}
+<!-- ============================================================ -->
 
 [=IDPs=] can also use a JavaScript API to update the stored login status:
 
@@ -189,7 +131,9 @@ When {{NavigatorLogin/setStatus()}} is called with argument |status|:
 
 </div>
 
-## Clearing the Login Status Map data ## {#login-status-clear-data}
+<!-- ============================================================ -->
+# Clearing the Login Status Map data # {#login-status-clear-data}
+<!-- ============================================================ -->
 
 User agents MUST also clear the [=Login Status map=] data when:
     :   the user clears all cookies or site settings data
@@ -232,30 +176,6 @@ Note: write down the Acknowledgements section.
 
 <pre class="biblio">
 {
-  "CM": {
-    "href": "https://w3c.github.io/webappsec-credential-management/",
-    "title": "Credential Management"
-  },
-  "OIDC-Connect-Core": {
-    "href": "https://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-core-1_0.html",
-    "title": "OIDC Connect Core"
-  },
-  "PERMISSIONS-POLICY": {
-    "href": "https://w3c.github.io/webappsec-permissions-policy",
-    "title": "Permissions Policy"
-  },
-  "PRIVACY-MODEL": {
-    "href": "https://github.com/michaelkleber/privacy-model",
-    "title": "Privacy Model"
-  },
-  "PRIVACY-THREAT-MODEL": {
-    "href": "https://w3cping.github.io/privacy-threat-model/",
-    "title": "Target Privacy Threat Model"
-  },
-  "RFC7258": {
-    "href": "https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7258",
-    "title": "Pervasive Monitoring Is an Attack"
-  }
 }
 </pre>