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       <p class="hero-tagline">
-        DeepLearning-based Cybersecurity now on the Snowflake NativeApp marketplace
+        DeepLearning-based Cybersecurity is now available on the Snowflake NativeApp Marketplace
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@@ -239,39 +239,39 @@ <h2 class="heading-secondary">Joint Value Proposition</h2>
         <i class="fas fa-piggy-bank value-prop-icon"></i>
         <div class="value-prop-title">Cost Savings</div>
         <p class="value-prop-desc">
-          Save 80% or more on ingestion and operational costs by filtering out noise before it hits your SIEM.
+          Save 80% or more by sending accurate alerts - and fewer raw logs - to your SIEM.
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       <!-- 2) Improved Detections -->
       <div class="value-prop-card">
         <i class="fas fa-shield-alt value-prop-icon"></i>
         <div class="value-prop-title">Improved Detections</div>
         <p class="value-prop-desc">
-          See attacks that rules &amp; ML systems cannot discern, thanks to advanced deep learning.
+          See attacks that rules &amp; ML systems overlook, thanks to LogLM based deep learning.
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       <!-- 3) Simple Operations -->
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         <i class="fas fa-cogs value-prop-icon"></i>
         <div class="value-prop-title">Simple Operations</div>
         <p class="value-prop-desc">
-          Scales on Snowflake and feeds indicators into your SIEM for streamlined operations.
+          Auto-scales on Snowflake and feeds indicators into your SIEM. 
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       <!-- 4) Proven at Scale -->
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         <i class="fas fa-chart-line value-prop-icon"></i>
         <div class="value-prop-title">Proven at Scale</div>
         <p class="value-prop-desc">
-          Developed with a tier one financial institution, handling massive log volumes seamlessly.
+          Developed with a tier-one financial institution, handling massive log volumes seamlessly.
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       <!-- 5) Per Usage Economics -->
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         <i class="fas fa-coins value-prop-icon"></i>
         <div class="value-prop-title">Per Usage Economics</div>
         <p class="value-prop-desc">
-          Try for free via your Snowflake account. Upgrade to unlimited plans with DeepTempo.
+          Try for free via your Snowflake account. Pay only for what you use - use your Snowflake credits.
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