Update English lines based on suggestion in github #6

DragonBones · Feb 27, 2017 · aa073b1 · aa073b1
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diff --git a/en/animation.html b/en/animation.html
@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ <h2 class="logo">
 									<h1>DragonBones Animation Solution</h1>
 									<div class="des">
 										<p>Free 2D Skeletal Animation Solution</p>
-										<p>Connect Animation Creation and Game Programing Pipeline</p>
-										<p>Less Art Cost, More vivid Animation Produce</p>
+										<p>Connect Animation Creation and Game Programing Pipelines</p>
+										<p>Reduce Art Cost and Produce More Vivid Animation</p>
 									</div>
 							</div>
 						</div>
@@ -133,12 +133,12 @@ <h3>Easily Build Avatar System</h3>
 					</div>
 					<div class="col-md-6">
 						<div class="content">
-						<h3>Less Art Cost</h3>
+						<h3>Reduce Art Cost</h3>
 						<div class="des">
-							<p>Only store texture atlas and animation data.</p>
-							<p>Only several image pieces can compose various animations.</p>
+							<p>Store only texture atlas and animation data.</p>
+							<p>Use several image pieces to compose various animations.</p>
 							<p>Only add several key frames in timeline,</p>
-							<p>there will be smooth animations.</p>
+							<p>Add only key frames in the timeline, smooth animations will be generated.</p>
 						</div>
 						</div>
 					</div>

diff --git a/en/comic.html b/en/comic.html
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ <h1>Features</h1>
 							<img class="mobileimg" src="img/manga/one.png" />
 							<h1>Rich Dynamic Effect</h1>
 							<div class="des">
-								<p>Build-in various motion effect.</p>
+								<p>Build-in various motion effects.</p>
 								<p>Provide plenty of inspiration for your comic creation</p>
 							</div>
 						</div>
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ <h1>Rich Dynamic Effect</h1>
 					<div class="col-md-6">
 						<div class="content">
 						<img class="mobileimg" src="img/manga/two.png" />
-						<h1>Singal Page Comic</h1>
+						<h1>Single Page Comic</h1>
 						<div class="des">
 							<p>Create motion comic and easily publish.</p>
 							<p>Html5 based. Watch everywhere.</p>

diff --git a/en/download.html b/en/download.html
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ <h2 class="logo">
 						<div class="tableDisplay">
 							<div class="vCenter">
 									<h1>Download DragonBones Pro for FREE</h1>
-									<h1>Integrated Animation Creative Platform, Support Windows and Mac</h1>
+									<h1>Integrated Creative Animation Platform, Supports Windows and Mac</h1>
 									<div class="downBtnGroup" style="display: none;">
 										<a id='final_Btn'  href="javascript:void(0);">Stable</a>
 										<a id='prerelease_Btn'  href="javascript:void(0);" class="active">Latest</a>
@@ -124,9 +124,9 @@ <h1>Integrated Animation Creative Platform, Support Windows and Mac</h1>
 							<img style="width: 40px;" src="img/download/one.png" />
 							<h1>Flash Pro Plugin</h1>
 							<div class="des">
-								<p>DragonBones DesignPanel is Flash Pro Plugin</p>
+								<p>DragonBones DesignPanel is a Flash Pro Plugin</p>
 								<p>Easily convert Flash animation to DragonBones animation</p>
-								<p>Great reduce animation size and support GPU accelerate</p>
+								<p>Greatly reduces animation size and supports GPU acceleration</p>
 							</div>
 						</div>
 					</div>
@@ -144,13 +144,13 @@ <h1>Flash Pro Plugin</h1>
 							<h1>DragonBones Runtimes</h1>
 							<div class="des">
 								<div>
-									<p>In your game IDE, you can use DragonBones runtimes load and play animtions.</p>
+									<p>In your game IDE, you can use DragonBones runtimes to load and play animations.</p>
 									<p>Our APIs provide direct access to bones, attachments, skins and other animation data.</p>
 									<p>Bones can be manipulated procedurally, animations can be combined, crossfaded and more.</p>
 								</div>
 								<hr />
 								<div>
-									<h4>DragonBones support following programing languages and game engines</h4>
+									<h4>DragonBones supports the following programming languages and game engines"</h4>
 									<p><img src="img/download/juxing1.png" />&nbsp;<a style="color: #07A9E2;" target="_blank" href="https://github.com/DragonBones/DragonBonesJS">JavaScript/TypeScript – Egret, Pixi</a></p>
 									<p><img src="img/download/juxing2.png" />&nbsp;<a style="color: #07A9E2;" target="_blank"  href="https://github.com/DragonBones/DragonBonesAS">ActionScript 3 - Flash, Starling</a></p>
 									<p><img src="img/download/juxing1.png" />&nbsp;<a style="color: #07A9E2;" target="_blank" href="https://github.com/DragonBones/DragonBonesCPP">C++ - Cocos2d-x</a> </p>