tutorial tweaks

locale/en/fa-tutorial.cfg

@@ -441,10 +441,10 @@ tutorial-chapter-5-step-14-header=About transport belts
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-14-detail=All transport belts carry items on top of them in the direction they are facing and they do not need an energy source. Items on top of them can be dropped onto them and can be removed using inserters, and the items never fall off. Therefore items tend to queue up at the end of a belt when they have nowhere to go. The belts have two separate lanes on them and there are ways to mix these lanes, but you can safely ignore the lanes as long as you use only one type of item on the belt, such as a coal-only belt.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-15-header=Prepare to place the first drill
-tutorial-chapter-5-step-15-detail=Head to the start of the belt and stand on the starting end. Use Cursor Mode to move 1 tile along the belt's direction. A mining drill will be placed at this spot.
+tutorial-chapter-5-step-15-detail=Head to the start of the belt and stand on the starting end. Use Cursor Mode to move 1 tile along the belt's direction. A mining drill will be aligned and placed near this spot.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-16-header=Place the first drill
-tutorial-chapter-5-step-16-detail=Move the cursor off the belt by 1 tile and try to place a mining drill there. If the belt is in the way, you need to move 1 more tile away from the belt.
+tutorial-chapter-5-step-16-detail=Move the cursor off the belt by 1 tile and try to place a mining drill there. If the belt is in the way, you need to move 1 more tile away from the belt. If the character is in the way, they will teleport to the edge of the building area.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-17-header=Rotate the first drill
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-17-detail=Empty your hand and then rotate the placed drill so that it outputs onto the belt. For example, if the belt is located at the East of the drill, the drill needs to face East. A correctly rotated drill will report that it outputs to the belt.
@@ -462,22 +462,22 @@ tutorial-chapter-5-step-21-header=About burner inserters
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-21-detail=An inserter is a machine that can smart collect an item from a building that is directly in front of it and then smart drop the item into a building that is directly behind it. Burner inserters work using fuel, and they can directly use some of the fuel held in their own hands to keep themselves running. In contrast, regular inserters do not need fuel but they need electric power, which will be set up later.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-22-header=Place the first burner inserter
-tutorial-chapter-5-step-22-detail=After the chest, on the next space along the side of belt, place a burner inserter. Empty your hand and rotate this inserter to make it face the belt unit next to it. Note that the inserter's direction should be the same as the direction of the mining drill.
+tutorial-chapter-5-step-22-detail=Grab burner inserters in hand, and on the next tile after the chest, along the side of the belt, place a burner inserter. Empty your hand and rotate this inserter to make it face the belt unit next to it. Note that the inserter's direction should be the same as the direction of the mining drill.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-23-header=Place the second burner inserter
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-23-detail=Examine the chest. It should have the drill on one side, and the first inserter on the opposite side. On its third side should be the transport belt. One empty side remains. On this side, place the second burner inserter. Rotate this inserter to face the same direction as the transport belt's travel direction.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-24-header=Trace the coal unit path part 1
-tutorial-chapter-5-step-24-detail=The setup is now complete. You now have coal units making a loop around the chest. You can trace this loop with your cursor. 
+tutorial-chapter-5-step-24-detail=The setup is now complete. Some coal units will make a loop around the chest and stop. You can trace this loop with your cursor. 
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-25-header=Trace the coal unit path part 2
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-25-detail=In the loop, the coal is first collected from the ground by the mining drill and dropped onto the belt. After travelling two tiles along the belt, the coal is picked up by the first inserter and dropped on the ground. The second inserter picks up the coal from the ground and drops it into the burner mining drill's fuel slot. 
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-26-header=Inserters do not completely fill buildings
-tutorial-chapter-5-step-26-detail=Note that inserters do not completely fill buildings so that items in front of them can move along to buildings that need them more. In this case, the burner inserters will work only while there are less than 5 coal units in the mining drill's fuel slot.
+tutorial-chapter-5-step-26-detail=Note that the coal refueling has stopped because inserters usually only partially fill a building's input slots. This is so that most of the items in front of the inserters can move along the belts to buildings that need them more. In this case, the burner inserters will work only while there are less than 5 coal units in the mining drill's fuel slot.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-27-header=Mirror the drill setup part 1
-tutorial-chapter-5-step-27-detail=Now this arrangement can be mirrored on the other side of the belt. Empty your hand and enable cursor mode. Then move the cursor to the northwest corner of the drill.
+tutorial-chapter-5-step-27-detail=Now this arrangement of a self-refueling drill can be mirrored on the other side of the belt. Empty your hand and enable cursor mode. Then move the cursor to the northwest corner of the drill.
 
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-28-header=Mirror the drill setup part 2
 tutorial-chapter-5-step-28-detail=Press "__CONTROL__pipette-tool-info__" to use the pipette tool. This will bring to hand a mining drill that has the same direction as the one on the ground. Move exactly 3 tiles in this direction so that the cursor is now at the correct spot on the other side of the transport belt. 
@@ -566,10 +566,10 @@ tutorial-chapter-6-step-21-header=Fill in the mirrored blueprint ghosts
 tutorial-chapter-6-step-21-detail=Fill in the mirrored blueprint ghosts. You should now have a total of 4 self-feeding coal drills that output to the belt.
 
 tutorial-chapter-6-step-22-header=Add more drills to the belt
-tutorial-chapter-6-step-22-detail=Use your two blueprints to copy more drill setups along the belt until you have 8 drills in total or you reach the edge of the coal patch.
+tutorial-chapter-6-step-22-detail=Use your two blueprints to copy more drill setups along the belt until you have 8 drills in total or you reach the edge of the coal patch. You can also consider extending the belt backwards towards the other edge of the patch so that you can fit more drills along it.
 
 tutorial-chapter-6-step-23-header=Add a chest at the end of the belt
-tutorial-chapter-6-step-23-detail=Walk to the stopping end of your coal belt and place a burner inserter that takes from one side of the stopping end, but not from its front. Then place a chest behind this inserter. This chest becomes your coal supply chest and you should set up a fast travel point at it.
+tutorial-chapter-6-step-23-detail=Walk to the stopping end of your coal belt and place a burner inserter that takes from one side of the stopping end unit, but not from its front. Then place a chest behind this inserter. This chest becomes your coal supply chest and you should set up a fast travel point at it. The chest is meant to collect some coal from one side the belt while most of the coal can keep travelling along the belt.
 
 tutorial-chapter-6-step-24-header=The coal supply belt is now ready to use
 tutorial-chapter-6-step-24-detail=The coal supply belt is now ready to use. Optionally, you can now extend the coal belt to the iron ore patch and use it to automatically supply the drills and furnaces there. However, it is more efficient to use electric mining drills because they are easier to set up and scale up. Therefore the instructions will continue by moving on to electricity production, which also requires a steady coal supply.
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ tutorial-chapter-7-step-5-header=Place the offshore pump
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-5-detail=Take the offshore pump from your inventory and press "__CONTROL__click-entity__" to run its special building assistant. The assistant will suggest good positions for placing the pump and the first suggestion is usually the nearest good position. Press "__CONTROL__click-menu__" to confirm this. The offshore pump will set up and will fill up with water instantly. It does not need any energy source so it is ready.
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-6-header=Locate the offshore pump
-tutorial-chapter-7-step-6-detail=Enabled Cursor Mode and use the scanner to locate the pump that has been placed. The pump itself faces into the water body and its output pipe faces the opposite direction.
+tutorial-chapter-7-step-6-detail=Enable Cursor Mode and use the scanner to locate the pump that has been placed. The pump itself faces into the water body and its output pipe faces the opposite direction.
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-7-header=Starting the water pipe
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-7-detail=Take a stack of pipes in hand and then bring the cursor to the tile just next to the pump's output. If correct, the pipe preview in Cursor Mode will tell you that the tile connects to water. Press "__CONTROL__click-entity__" to put down a pipe. If it is positioned correctly, the pipe will instantly fill with water. 
@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ tutorial-chapter-7-step-21-header=Rotating non-square buildings
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-21-detail=Note: A building that has been placed down cannot change its footprint. Therefore rectangular buildings such as boilers can only be rotated 180 degrees when they have already been placed. This restriction does not apply to square buildings on the ground such as mining drills, and to all building previews held in hand before being placed.
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-22-header=Align the boiler
-tutorial-chapter-7-step-22-detail=Nudge the boiler to get its back pipe aligned with the end of the water pipe. Having the boiler back pipes in a straight line makes it much easer to extend the steam system. The connected boiler will fill with water, and you can check the building to verify this. 
+tutorial-chapter-7-step-22-detail=Nudge the boiler to get its back pipe aligned with the end of the water pipe. Having the boiler back pipes in a straight line makes it much easier to extend the steam system. The connected boiler will fill with water, and you can check the building to verify this. 
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-23-header=Fuel the boiler
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-23-detail=Place some coal in the aligned boiler to hear it start working. Check it to verify that it now has steam in it. 
@@ -700,13 +700,13 @@ tutorial-chapter-7-step-41-header=Connecting the coal chests, part 1
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-41-detail=While you can carry coal from your supply chest to your boiler input chest, it would be better to supply the coal automatically using burner inserters and transport belts.
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-42-header=Connecting the coal chests, part 2
-tutorial-chapter-7-step-42-detail=Craft 2 burner inserters and 25 transport belts. Place the first belt unit next to the coal supply chest and make it face towards the boiler input chest.
+tutorial-chapter-7-step-42-detail=Craft 2 burner inserters and 25 transport belts. Place the first belt unit next to the coal supply chest with exactly 1 tile of space in between them. Then rotate it to make it face towards the boiler input chest.
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-43-header=Connecting the coal chests, part 3
-tutorial-chapter-7-step-43-detail=Extend the new belt until you make it point into the boiler input chest. This should require about 15 to 25 belt units in total.
+tutorial-chapter-7-step-43-detail=Extend the new belt until its stopping end is next to the boiler supply chest, with exactly 1 tile of space in between. This should require about 15 to 25 belt units in total.
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-44-header=Connecting the coal chests, part 4
-tutorial-chapter-7-step-44-detail=Replace the starting end of your new transport belt with a burner inserter that takes from the coal supply chest and places onto the belt. Similarly, replace the stopping end of your new belt with a burner inserter that takes from the transport belt and places into the boiler input chest.
+tutorial-chapter-7-step-44-detail=Fill the gap near the starting end of your new transport belt with a burner inserter that takes from the coal supply chest and places onto the belt. Similarly, fill the gap near the stopping end of your new belt with a burner inserter that takes from the transport belt and places into the boiler input chest.
 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-45-header=Power supply done 
 tutorial-chapter-7-step-45-detail=You now have a reliable steam power system that is automatically supplied with water and coal. You are finally ready to start using research labs so that you can research and set up more advanced buildings and systems on your way to building a rocket.