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请先把格式规范一下,先花点儿时间读一下 style-guide。
然后按照 comment 里面的示例把后续的翻译写的通顺些

"Remember to use <a href='http://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/how-to-get-help-when-you-are-stuck/19514' target='_blank'>Read-Search-Ask</a> if you get stuck.",
"When you are finished, click the \"I've completed this challenge\" button and include a link to your CodePen.",
"You can get feedback on your project by sharing it with your friends on Facebook."
"<strong>目标:</strong> 开发一个功能类似于<a href='https://codepen.io/freeCodeCamp/full/bELRjV' target='_blank'></a><a href='https://codepen.io' target='_blank'>CodePen.io</a>应用。",
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冒号应该是全角。空格也不对。

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<strong>目标:</strong>在 <a href='https://codepen.io' target='_blank'>CodePen.io</a> 平台开发一个功能类似于<a href='https://codepen.io/freeCodeCamp/full/bELRjV' target='_blank'>这个示例 app </a>的应用。

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"When you are finished, click the \"I've completed this challenge\" button and include a link to your CodePen.",
"You can get feedback on your project by sharing it with your friends on Facebook."
"<strong>目标:</strong> 开发一个功能类似于<a href='https://codepen.io/freeCodeCamp/full/bELRjV' target='_blank'></a><a href='https://codepen.io' target='_blank'>CodePen.io</a>应用。",
"<strong>要求 #1:</strong> 不要看示例项目中的代码。自己想办法解决问题。",
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中文没有 #1 这样的表示方式,请参考相关 PR。
冒号用全角,后面不需要空格。下同

建议:<strong>要求 1:</strong>请不要照抄示例项目中的代码,自己想办法写一个。

"You can get feedback on your project by sharing it with your friends on Facebook."
"<strong>目标:</strong> 开发一个功能类似于<a href='https://codepen.io/freeCodeCamp/full/bELRjV' target='_blank'></a><a href='https://codepen.io' target='_blank'>CodePen.io</a>应用。",
"<strong>要求 #1:</strong> 不要看示例项目中的代码。自己想办法解决问题。",
"<strong>要求 #2:</strong>满足下列<a href='https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_story' target='_blank'>需求</a>。你可以使用任何你需要的库或 API。 发挥你自己的代码风格。",
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这里句号之后多了个空格

"<strong>要求 #2:</strong>满足下列<a href='https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_story' target='_blank'>需求</a>。你可以使用任何你需要的库或 API。 发挥你自己的代码风格。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 我可以看到我当前位置的天气。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 根据天气情况,我可以看到不同的图标或背景图片(例如:雪山,炎热的沙漠)。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 我可以通过按钮在华氏温度和摄氏温度之间切换。",
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通过按钮 => 通过点击按钮点击按钮

"<strong>需求:</strong> 我可以看到我当前位置的天气。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 根据天气情况,我可以看到不同的图标或背景图片(例如:雪山,炎热的沙漠)。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 我可以通过按钮在华氏温度和摄氏温度之间切换。",
"<strong>注意:</strong> 现在许多网络浏览器要求安全HTTP连接 (<code>https://</code>) 才能通过 HTML5 地理定位获得用户的位置。因此,我们建议使用 HTML5 地理定位来获取用户位置,然后使用 freeCodeCamp Weather API <a href='https://fcc-weather-api.glitch.me' target='_blank'>https://fcc-weather-api.glitch.me</a>,该API使用安全HTTP连接进行天气预报。此外,请务必通过 <code>https://</code> 访问 <a href='https://codepen.io' target='_blank'>CodePen.io</a> ",
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括号之前多了个空格。API 两边需要加空格。

"<strong>需求:</strong> 根据天气情况,我可以看到不同的图标或背景图片(例如:雪山,炎热的沙漠)。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 我可以通过按钮在华氏温度和摄氏温度之间切换。",
"<strong>注意:</strong> 现在许多网络浏览器要求安全HTTP连接 (<code>https://</code>) 才能通过 HTML5 地理定位获得用户的位置。因此,我们建议使用 HTML5 地理定位来获取用户位置,然后使用 freeCodeCamp Weather API <a href='https://fcc-weather-api.glitch.me' target='_blank'>https://fcc-weather-api.glitch.me</a>,该API使用安全HTTP连接进行天气预报。此外,请务必通过 <code>https://</code> 访问 <a href='https://codepen.io' target='_blank'>CodePen.io</a> ",
"当你遇到困难时,记住<a href='http://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/how-to-get-help-when-you-are-stuck/19514' target='_blank'>阅读-搜素-询问</a>",
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搜素 => 搜索

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@S1ngS1ng S1ngS1ng added the need update Use when a translation (?) PR has been reviewed and needs to address comments label Aug 7, 2018
"Once you've finished implementing these user stories, click the \"I've completed this challenge\" button and enter the URLs for both your GitHub repository and your live app running on Glitch.",
"You can get feedback on your project by sharing it with your friends on Facebook."
"<strong>目标:</strong> Build a full stack JavaScript app that allows you to search for images like this: <a href='https://cryptic-ridge-9197.herokuapp.com/api/imagesearch/lolcats%20funny?offset=10' target='_blank'>https://cryptic-ridge-9197.herokuapp.com/api/imagesearch/lolcats%20funny?offset=10</a> and browse recent search queries like this: <a href='https://cryptic-ridge-9197.herokuapp.com/api/latest/imagesearch/' target='_blank'>https://cryptic-ridge-9197.herokuapp.com/api/latest/imagesearch/</a>. 然后将其部署到 Glitch.",
"注意:对于每一个项目,你应该创建一个新的 Github 库,并创建一个新的 Glitch 项目。 如果你忘记如何操作,请问访问 <a href='/challenges/get-set-for-our-api-development-projects'>https://freecodecamp.org/challenges/get-set-for-our-api-development-projects</a>",
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翻译不够流畅,应该用和,而不是2个创建。

"When you are finished, click the \"I've completed this challenge\" button and include a link to your CodePen.",
"You can get feedback on your project by sharing it with your friends on Facebook."
"<strong>目标:</strong> 开发一个功能类似于<a href='https://codepen.io/freeCodeCamp/full/KzXQgy/' target='_blank'></a><a href='https://codepen.io' target='_blank'>CodePen.io</a>应用。",
"满足下列<a href='https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_story' target='_blank'>需求</a>. 你可以使用任何你需要的库或 API。 发挥你自己的代码风格。",
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符号的使用要规范

"<strong>需求:</strong> 我可以用电脑玩井字游戏 。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 当一局游戏结束,游戏将会立刻重启,这样我可以再玩一次。",
"<strong>需求:</strong> 我可以选择我玩 X 还是 O。",
"当你遇到困难时,记住<a href='http://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/how-to-get-help-when-you-are-stuck/19514' target='_blank'>阅读-搜素-询问</a>",
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请查看wiki 边栏中的 Standard ——翻译标准。

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