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Lmears · Jun 22, 2024 · ea767e4 · ea767e4
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@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ <h1 class="w-full text-5xl leading-tight px-4">Design</h1>
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                                 <p class="text-base font-light">
-                                    I've been using Adobe Photoshop for over 13 years and have recently started offering
-                                    graphic design services. My focus is on gig posters, album art, and logos, drawing
-                                    from a diverse range of influences.
+                                    With over 13 years of Adobe Photoshop experience, I've recently expanded into
+                                    offering graphic design services. I specialize in creating gig posters, album art,
+                                    and logos; drawing from a diverse range of influences.
                                     <br><br>
                                 </p>
                                 <h2>Connect with me:</h2>

diff --git a/mastering/index.html b/mastering/index.html
@@ -47,17 +47,17 @@ <h1 class="w-full text-5xl leading-tight px-4">Mastering</h1>
                                         alt="Mastering Studio Image" style="max-width: 100%; height: auto;">
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-                                    I have been mastering audio for upwards of four years now, working with a wide range
-                                    of styles from underground electronica through to pop and acoustic. I'm particularly
+                                    I have been mastering audio for over four years, working with a wide range
+                                    of styles from underground electronica to pop and acoustic. I'm particularly
                                     drawn to outdoor sound system culture, but have spent my fair share of time in the
                                     clubs as well.
                                     <br><br>
-                                    I like to focus on stereo mastering, but am happy to work with stems for
-                                    those seeking a more collaborative approach.
+                                    I focus on stereo mastering but am happy to work with stems for
+                                    those seeking a more collaborative approach. My fully digital, in-the-box setup
+                                    allows for low costs and fast turnarounds. As a result, my mastering chain is
+                                    constantly evolving.
                                     <br><br>
-                                    I use a fully digital, in-the-box setup, which allows for low costs and fast
-                                    turnarounds. As a result, my mastering chain is constantly evolving. If you'd like
-                                    to know more about the tools I use, feel free to ask!
+                                    If you'd like to know more about the tools I use, feel free to ask!
                                     <br><br>
                                 </p>
                                 <h2>Connect with me:</h2>

diff --git a/software/index.html b/software/index.html
@@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ <h1 class="w-full text-5xl leading-tight px-4">Software</h1>
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-                                    I've been crafting software solutions for about a year now. My current portfolio
-                                    showcases accessibility tools, but I'm always working on expanding my skills. I work
-                                    primarily with web technologies and mobile app development, and I'm eager to tackle
-                                    new challenges. If you have a project in mind, let's discuss how we can bring it to
+                                    I've been crafting software solutions for about a year. My portfolio showcases my
+                                    experience with UI/UX, but I'm also developing skills in other areas. I specialize
+                                    in web technologies and mobile app development, and I'm eager to tackle new
+                                    challenges. If you have a project in mind, let's discuss how we can bring it to
                                     life.
                                     <br><br>
                                 </p>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ <h2>Connect with me:</h2>
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                             <h2>Smart Access:</h2>
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-                                - UI / UX
+                                - UI/UX
                                 <br>
                                 - Data forensics
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@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ <h2>Smart Access:</h2>
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                             <h2>My Life My Voice:</h2>
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-                                - UI / UX
+                                - UI/UX
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@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ <h2>My Life My Voice:</h2>
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                             <h2>Twisted Frequency:</h2>
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-                                - UI / UX
+                                - UI/UX
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