Merge pull request #10242 from MicrosoftDocs/aditi-acrolinx-updates

Acrolinx fixes
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diff --git a/windows/privacy/configure-windows-diagnostic-data-in-your-organization.md b/windows/privacy/configure-windows-diagnostic-data-in-your-organization.md
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ Required diagnostic data includes:
    - Operating system attributes, such as Windows edition and virtualization state
    - Storage attributes, such as number of drives, type, and size
 
-- Quality metrics that helps provide an understanding about how the Connected User Experiences and diagnostic data component is functioning, including % of uploaded events, dropped events, blocked events, and the last upload time.
+- Quality metrics that help provide an understanding about how the Connected User Experiences and diagnostic data component is functioning, including % of uploaded events, dropped events, blocked events, and the last upload time.
 
 - Quality-related information that helps Microsoft develop a basic understanding of how a device and its operating system are performing. Some examples are the device characteristics of a Connected Standby device, the number of crashes or hangs, and app state change details, such as how much processor time and memory were used, and the total uptime for an app.
 

diff --git a/...e-connections-from-windows-operating-system-components-to-microsoft-services.md b/...e-connections-from-windows-operating-system-components-to-microsoft-services.md
@@ -1737,7 +1737,7 @@ In Group Policy, configure:
 
 ### <a href="" id="bkmk-spotlight"></a>25. Personalized Experiences
 
-Personalized experiences provides features such as different background images and text on the lock screen, suggested apps, Microsoft account notifications, and Windows tips. Example features include Windows Spotlight and Start Suggestions. You can control them by using the Group Policy.
+Personalized experiences provide features such as different background images and text on the lock screen, suggested apps, Microsoft account notifications, and Windows tips. Example features include Windows Spotlight and Start Suggestions. You can control them by using the Group Policy.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > This excludes how individual experiences (e.g., Windows Spotlight) can be controlled by users in Windows Settings.

diff --git a/windows/privacy/windows-privacy-compliance-guide.md b/windows/privacy/windows-privacy-compliance-guide.md
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Transparency is an important part of the data collection process in Windows. Com
 
 ### 1.1 Device set up experience and support for layered transparency
 
-When setting up a device, a user can configure their privacy settings. Those privacy settings are key in determining the amount of personal data collected. For each privacy setting, the user is provided information about the setting along with the links to supporting information. This information explains what data is collected, how the data is used, and how to manage the setting after the device setup is complete. When connected to the network during this portion of setup, the user can also review the privacy statement. A brief overview of the set up experience for privacy settings is described in [Windows Insiders get first look at new privacy screen settings layout coming to Windows 10](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2018/03/06/windows-insiders-get-first-look-new-privacy-screen-settings-layout-coming-windows-10/#uCC2bKYP8M5BqrDP.97), a blog entry on Windows Blogs.
+When setting up a device, a user can configure their privacy settings. Those privacy settings are key in determining the amount of personal data collected. For each privacy setting, the user is provided information about the setting along with the links to supporting information. This information explains what data is collected, how the data is used, and how to manage the setting after the device setup is complete. When connected to the network during this portion of setup, the user can also review the privacy statement. A brief overview of the setup experience for privacy settings is described in [Windows Insiders get first look at new privacy screen settings layout coming to Windows 10](https://blogs.windows.com/windowsexperience/2018/03/06/windows-insiders-get-first-look-new-privacy-screen-settings-layout-coming-windows-10/#uCC2bKYP8M5BqrDP.97), a blog entry on Windows Blogs.
 
 The following table provides an overview of the Windows 10 and Windows 11 privacy settings presented during the device setup experience that involve processing personal data and where to find additional information.