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Advanced concepts: typos, wording, grammar, formatting #215

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# Writing to any storage slot

On Starknet, a contract's storage is a map with 2^251 slots, where each slot is a felt which is initialized to 0.
On Starknet, a contract's storage is a map with \\( 2^{251} \\) slots, where each slot is a `felt252` which is initialized to 0.
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Make it look like:
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@@ -23,14 +23,14 @@ pub mod ListExample {

#[storage]
pub struct Storage {
amount: List<u128>,
amounts: List<u128>,
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Plural form indicates a list.

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use starknet::SyscallResultTrait;
use starknet::{Store, SyscallResult};
use starknet::storage_access::{StorageBaseAddress, storage_address_from_base_and_offset};
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LGTM! Thank you!

@julio4 julio4 merged commit 5e758e6 into NethermindEth:main Jun 8, 2024
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julio4 pushed a commit to LamsyA/StarknetByExample that referenced this pull request Oct 24, 2024
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* formatting for write to slot

* stor. arrs. > wording, grammar

* hashing > wording, grammar

* packing > wording, grammar, format

* list > amount->amounts, wording, typos

* plugins > grammar

* sign. verif. > grammar

* remove 'a' in how_to

* update library calls -> dispatcher

* Revert "update library calls -> dispatcher"

This reverts commit e7d3b0c.

* align library calls header

* fix tests

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Co-authored-by: Nenad <[email protected]>
julio4 added a commit that referenced this pull request Oct 24, 2024
* commitment scheme implementation

* scarb.lock

* modified the reveal function to view

* refactored

* refactored

* offchain commitment and onchain verification done

* added erc20 unit test

* added test against custom errors

* formated

* made requested changes and moved test to contract module

* fixed zero address

* chore: Remove unused test files

* Library calls (#194)

* final push

* updated the Summary.md

* fix: fmt and minor edit

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* Chapter 0 > Basics: wording + grammar fixes (#207)

* sierra->Sierra + plural/singular form fixes

* ch00 > Missing attr. elems, wrong attr. names

* missing dot in messages + update how legacymap modulo format

* ch00 > errors > add indent to comment in complex section

* ch00 > events > wording, missing code quotes

* ch00 > syscalls > wording

* ch00 > bytearray > wording

* ch00 > stor.custom types > wording

* ch00 > cust.types in entrypoints > wording

* ch00 > documentation > wording

* Revert comment format changes

* Simplify panic_with_felt252 related comment in errors.md

* Fixes for ch00

* Wording in cheatsheet

* Comment update in type_casting

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* component dependencies test (#198)

* test: component dependencies

* undo changes

* test: countable_component

* test: countable_internal_dep_switch

* fix: apply requested changes

* fix: small fmt fix

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* feat(staking): Add staking contract example (#202)

* feat(staking): first draft with contract and tests

Missing events and some tests

* feat(staking): Add events and events-related tests

* feat(staking): Add a more complex test for rewards set up

* feat(staking): Add md file

* feat(staking): Apply changes according to PR review

* feat(enums): Enums in contract (#212)

* feat(enums): Enums in contract

* fix: small fmt

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* Application chapter: grammar, wording, typos, `!addr.is_zero` -> `addr.is_non_zero` (#213)

* upgradeable > use is_non_zero

* simple_vault > grammar

* not is_zero -> is_non_zero

* update sbe links

* staking > wording

* amm > fix brackets + grammar

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* add time locked transactions example (#201)

* add time locked transactions example

* install snforge in gh-action

* fix: refactor timelock example

* test for upgradeable contracts (#203)

* added erc20 unit test

* added test against custom errors

* formated

* made requested changes and moved test to contract module

* fixed zero address

* chore: Remove unused test files

* test for upgradeable contracts

* fixed build issue

* fix: pr#203

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* Components chapter: wording, grammar, formatting fixes (#210)

* how-to fixes

* Clean up dependencies

* collisions > fixes

* ownable minor fixes

* remove error.log

* fix typo

* add comma after 'first'

* add 'the' before cairo book

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Co-authored-by: Nenad <[email protected]>

* Advanced concepts: typos, wording, grammar, formatting (#215)

* formatting for write to slot

* stor. arrs. > wording, grammar

* hashing > wording, grammar

* packing > wording, grammar, format

* list > amount->amounts, wording, typos

* plugins > grammar

* sign. verif. > grammar

* remove 'a' in how_to

* update library calls -> dispatcher

* Revert "update library calls -> dispatcher"

This reverts commit e7d3b0c.

* align library calls header

* fix tests

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Co-authored-by: Nenad <[email protected]>

* feat: nft dutch auction (#204)

* feat: nft auction

* test: add tests to nft_auction app

* chore: improve code and add more tests

* chore: improvements and more tests

* test: add more test cases for nft_auction

* chore: update mdbook

* chore: update nft_auction package
- Add error module
- Update snforge version to 0.24.0

* chore: rename package and related files from `nft_auction` to `nft_dutch_auction`

* chore: reused existing package

* fix: cli#204

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* fix: chapter-related folder names (#216)

* fix: chapter-related folder names

* updated all references

* feat: simple storage with starknet-js (#222)

* feat: simple storage with starknet-js

* feat: add how_to_deploy & fix tutorial content for simple_storage

* fix: update links & add section in summary

* feat: revisions #222

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* chore: scarb, foundry, oz updates (#227)

* feat: Advanced factory contract (#219)

* add initial factory

* add ownable component

* add caller to CounterCreated event

* turn counter into campaign

* fix Campaign interfaced funcs + implement donate

* add _assert_is_ended + update error messages

* _assert_active->_assert_campaign_active

* _assert_is_ended->_assert_campaign_ended

* implement withdraw

* add missing assert success in donate

* add title & description

* update comment

* implement upgrade

* clean up internal funcs and imports

* move hardcoded errors in Errors mod

* donate -> contribute + event rename

* withdraw -> claim

* add store impl for contract addr. array

* remove store impl

* add dynamic array impl

* remove dyn. array

* remove descr + convert title to felt + convert target to u128

* implement updating class hashes

* Make title ByteArray again + target into u256 + update ctor arg serialization

* refactor serialization + add back description

* remove unused contracts

* add 1 test

* add get_description

* add correct deps

* add alexandria to toml

* format factory.cairo

* add missing snforge workspace

* add missing getters + tests

* add factory deploy tests

* add class hash update test + event assertions

* assert old class hash prior to update

* remove commented out test

* use common alex. storage workspace in using_lists

* add missing newline in toml

* move factory tests to separate file

* add scaffold docs for contracts

* add end_time asserts

* refactor private asserts

* check if target reached before claiming

* add ability to withdraw funds

* make contributions into a component (now iterable)

* refactor 'withhold' - contrs map to amt_idx

* add get_contributors func

* get_contributors -> get_contributions

* total_contributors->contributor_count

* add tests for campaign upgrade and deploy + update all relevant code in factory

* add status to campaign

* add close fn

* pass desired donation token in ctor

* merge all getters into get_details

* return total_contributions in details

* remove rev version from alexandria dep

* verbose names

* reorg. folder structure

* add tag to alexandria dep

* campaign_upgrade.cairo->mock_upgrade.cairo

* add explicit alexandria rev + make crowdfunding contracts standalone chapters

* add status pending

* field rename: factory->creator

* refund users when upgrading campaign

* Make owner the calling address, and creator is the campaign manager

* add get_contributor (amount) func

* Add successful campaign test

* update comment for upgrade

* _refund_all->_withdraw_all

* update checks for withdraw

* rework contribute

* rework all funcs

* unsuccessful -> failed

* calc end_time in start fn

* calc end_time in upgrade fn

* makes upgrades callable only by creators in factory

* fix factory tests

* fix crowdfunding tests

* reduce total contri. when withdraw from act. camp

* add refund fn

* refactor withdraw_all to use _refund

* pending->draft

* fix mock and tests

* add test for close

* add test for withdraw

* upgrade > update end_time only if duration provided

* close->cancel

* rename to more align with Solidity by example

* target->goal

* remove comment

* err CLOSED->CANCELED + check active in unpledge

* contributor->pledger

* add campaign doc content

* remove draft status

* add start_time

* remove Status

* update doc for campaign

* move total_pledges to pledgeable

* reorder alphabetically

* remove Launched event + upgrade mock

* TARGET->GOAL

* reorder params in Details

* add inline to _refund

* add new pledgeable tests

* add getX tests + add get_pledge_count

* refactor pledger_to_amount_index->pledger_to_amount

* Add tests with 1000 pledgers

* add test for add + update existing pledger

* reenable lib

* Add link to adv. factory in crowdfunding point 9

* write the adv. factory chapter

* upgrade_campaign_implementation-> upgrade_campaign + comment updates

* rename get_pledgers_as_arr->array

* Use ERC20Upgradeable instead of ERC20 preset

* Add missing token recipient ctor argument in crowdfunding tests

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* test: countable (switchable, ownable) components (#205)

* test: implement test for countable component

* test: implement test for switchable component

* test: implement test for ownable component

* chore: implement test for emitted events and add anchor tags

* feat: apply requested changes

* feat: apply requested changes

* feat: revisions

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* doc: SNIP-6 implementation (#200)

* test: SNIP-6 implementation

* docs: errors recheck

* test: SNIP-6 implementation

* docs: errors recheck

* feat: add simple account example

* feat/fix: revisions on #200

* feat:implement SRC5

* feat: implementation with oz

* fix: oz impl src5 for account

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Co-authored-by: Oluwaseun Jeremiah <jeremiah@Jemiah>
Co-authored-by: julio4 <[email protected]>

* simple_vault test implementation (#220)

* Update es.po (#231)

Some updates and corrections.

* Add Dict Cheatsheet (#235)

* simple_vault test implementation

* Added dict cheatsheet

* Added dict cheatsheet

* a little clean up

* a little clean up

* Mention Foundry is an option for tests (#240)

* Update SUMMARY.md (#239)

- Add link to NFT Dutch Auction chapter

* fix: links, typos, preludes... (#241)

* Update Cairo >2.8, `2024_07` edition (#246)

* remove List

No longer needed with Vec

* chore: dependencies update >=2.8

* chore: 2024_07 edition getting-started

* chore: Map getting-started

* chore: update applications

* chore: update dependencies

* fix: storage variables PointerReadAccess

* doc: update contributor guide

* chore: update advanced-concepts

* fix: 2024_07 edition

* chore: versions update

* feat: storage custom types individual members access

* remove storing arrays chapter

* ci/cd: remove custom test resolver script

* chore: switch dependencies to scarb registry

* Revert "ci/cd: remove custom test resolver script"

This reverts commit 0c3549f.

* chore: split snforge/cairo-test scarb config

* Random Number Generator (#238)

* feat: dice game vrf application

* feat: add summary nav

* fix: ran scarb fmt

* fix: ran scarb fmt

* Fix new lines

* Add more info on randomness sources

* Rename dice_game_vrf.md->random_number_generator.md and update titles

* minor rewording of 1 entropy source

* remove anchors

* Minor changes to fn names

* Implement dice game scaffold

* Implement Pragma randomness

* minor refactor in randomness request

* Implement powerball scaffold

* Turn Dice Game into CoinFlip

* Implement coin_flip test

* Add more tests

* Update titles

* Remove redundant blank line

* Add premium fee calculation into tests

* Assert leftover balance

* Remove comment about fees

* Increase the expected callback fee, update mock to expose fee calc fn

* Unfinished: refunded

* Store and use is_refunded flag

* Implement logic necessary to successfully perform & test refund

* Update callback fee limit based on manual testing + update term to deposit

* Format

* Use a FlipData struct instead of tuple

* Fix refund

* Simplify CoinFlip to pay the flips itself

* CALLBACK_FEE_DEPOSIT->MAX_CALLBACK_FEE_DEPOSIT

* Update tests to test the new CoinFlip contract

* Fix compile errors

* Increase publish_delay to 1 & remove unused imports

* Remove starkli-wallet dir

* Generate 3 random words for the 1st test

* refactor tests

* Add missng newline to scarb.toml

* fix typo in md

* reword 'manipulation' def

* Chainlink->Pragma

* link to Commit-reveal chapter issue

* list 'shut down' as possible centr. issue with ext. oracles

* Turn point 5 into a note

* Remove Sideways enum

* add contract description

* Remove ResultTrait from crowdfunding tests.cairo

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Co-authored-by: Tony Stark <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Nenad <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Nenad <[email protected]>

* feat(merkle-tree): Contract with tests (#228)

* feat(merkle-tree): Contract with tests

* feat(merkle-tree): Corrections according to PR reviews

* feat(merkle-tree): Contract with tests

* fix: 2024_07 edition

* fix: Replace Map simulating Array with Vec - streamline md file explanations

* fix: scarb fmt

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* Improvement: typos check in CI/CD (#248)

* fix: typos

* ci/cd: typos check in ci

* fix: cases

* fix: randomness requestor typos

* feat: cairo syntax hl (#249)

* Expand Constant Product AMM's description (#252)

* Expand Constant Product AMM's description

* Refactor

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* Minor _Scarb.toml_ refactors (#251)

* Set one common edition version in workspace Scarb.toml

* move snforge_std to dev-deps

* Remove [lib] from coin_flip and simple_storage_starknetjs

* rebuild projects

* remove casm attr from scarb.toml

* Update foundry to 0.31.0 in tool-versions

* Set workspace cairo_test in mappings

* Add missing cairo_test.workspace attrbs to Scarb.tomls

* Revert snforge_std to 0.30.0

* Revert "Add missing cairo_test.workspace attrbs to Scarb.tomls"

This reverts commit 7a9131d.

* scarb.lock

* feat: commit-reveal pattern

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