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diff --git a/shape-the-future/cloudevents.md b/shape-the-future/cloudevents.md
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ reviewed: 2024-09-16
 
 NServiceBus currently does not natively support CloudEvents.
 
-We are currently capturing requirements in understanding customer needs when it comes to CloudEvents.
+We are currently capturing requirements to understand customer needs regarding CloudEvents.
 If you are interested in helping us shape how NServiceBus should support CloudEvents, drop us a comment in [this](https://github.com/Particular/NServiceBus/issues/7159) GitHub issue.
diff --git a/shape-the-future/index.md b/shape-the-future/index.md
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-title: Shape the future with us
+title: Help us shape the future
 summary: Provide feedback for the future of the Particular Service Platform
 reviewed: 2024-09-16
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-We are interested in your feedback regarding some technologies that we are currently looking at integrating into the Particular Service Platform.
+We are interested in your feedback regarding some capabilities that we are considering integrating into the Particular Service Platform.
 
-This section contains some ideas that we have but if you have some other ideas that are not listed here please [tell us more](https://github.com/Particular/NServiceBus/issues/new?assignees=&labels=Feature&projects=&template=feature_request.yml).
+This section contains some capabilities that we're currently considering, but if you have some other ideas that are not listed here, please [tell us more](https://github.com/Particular/NServiceBus/issues/new?assignees=&labels=Feature&projects=&template=feature_request.yml).