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[lln_clt] Update editorial suggestions #415

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Resolve most of the comments in #413

Resolve most of the suggestions
@SylviaZhaooo SylviaZhaooo requested a review from mmcky April 8, 2024 03:17
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thanks @SylviaZhaooo looks good.

@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ Here $\stackrel { d } {\to} N(0, \sigma^2)$ indicates [convergence in distributi

The striking implication of the CLT is that for **any** distribution with
finite [second moment](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moment_(mathematics)), the simple operation of adding independent
copies **always** leads to a Gaussian curve.
copies **always** leads to a Gaussian(Normal) curve.
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copies **always** leads to a Gaussian(Normal) curve.
copies **always** leads to a Gaussian (Normal) curve.

This is a really minor point but @jstac re: style I think there should be space between Gaussian and (Normal). Do you agree?

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Yes please, thanks @mmcky and @SylviaZhaooo

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ print(X)
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In this setting, the LLN tells us if we flip the coin many times, the fraction
of heads that we see will be close to the mean $p$.
of heads that we see will be close to the mean $p$. We use $n$ to represent the number of times the coin is flipped.
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@SylviaZhaooo Would you mind to put the second sentence on a separate line -- this is our (unusual) convention for the lectures.

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Sure!

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jstac commented Apr 9, 2024

Perfect, many thanks @SylviaZhaooo

@jstac jstac merged commit 07cba0d into main Apr 9, 2024
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