Trimmed down all descriptions, fixed some typos and formatting

Resources/Locale/en-US/deltav/prototypes/entities/clothing/head/hardsuit-helmets.ftl

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 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatStandard = FPA-85 helmet
     .desc = A bulky helmet deployed with the Baghatur Mk.II tacsuit.
-    It has heavy layers of plastitanium on it, offering protection against ballistics and explosive ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
+    Protects its wearer against ballistics and explosive ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatOfficer = FPA-85s helmet
     .desc = { ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatStandard.desc }
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatMedical = FPA-86 helmet
     .desc = A bulky helmet deployed with the Tsagaan Mk.II tacsuit.
-    It has heavy layers of plastitanium on it, offering protection against ballistics and explosive ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
+    Protects its wearer against ballistics and explosive ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatCorpsman = FPA-86m helmet
     .desc = { ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatMedical.desc }
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatRiot = FPA-93 helmet
-    .desc = A modified riot-control helmet for use with the Sülde Mk.II tacsuit.
-    Features plastitanium plating, offering better overall protection than standard models at the expense of mobility.
+    .desc = A modified riot-control helmet for use with the Sulde Mk.II tacsuit.
+    Offers better overall protection than other models at the expense of mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatWarden = FPA-93s helmet
     .desc = { ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatRiot.desc }
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatAdvanced = FPA-99 helmet
-    .desc = A high quality helmet for the Dayičin tacsuit.
-    Features a lightweight reinforced plating, offering the same protection as a standard tacsuit without impacting mobility as much.
+    .desc = A high quality helmet for the Dayicin Mk.II tacsuit.
+    Features a lightweight construction, offering the same protection as a standard tacsuit without impacting mobility as much.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatHoS = FPA-99s helmet
-    .desc = { ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatAdvanced.desc }
-
-
+    .desc = { ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCombatAdvanced.desc }

Resources/Locale/en-US/deltav/prototypes/entities/clothing/outerClothing/hardsuits.ftl

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 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatStandard = FPA-85 - "Baghatur Mk.II" tacsuit
-    .desc = A sturdy and cumbersome tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    It offers protection against low pressure environments, and sports heavy layers of plastitanium, protecting against physical trauma & explosive ordinance at the cost of the wearer's mobility.
+    .desc = A sturdy tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels heavy.
 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatOfficer = FPA-85s - "Baghatur Mk.II" tacsuit
-    .desc = A sturdy and cumbersome tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    It offers protection against low pressure environments, and sports heavy layers of plastitanium, protecting against physical trauma & explosive ordinance at the cost of the wearer's mobility.
-    This one has station security markings.
+    .desc = A sturdy tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory, painted with the colors of station security.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels heavy.
 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatMedical = FPA-86 - "Tsagaan Mk.II" tacsuit
-    .desc = A sturdy and cumbersome tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    It offers protection against low pressure environments, and sports heavy layers of plastitanium, protecting slightly against physical trauma & explosive ordinance while severely reducing the wearer's mobility.
+    .desc = A sturdy tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels heavy.
 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatCorpsman = FPA-86m - "Tsagaan Mk.II" tacsuit
-    .desc = A sturdy and cumbersome tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    It offers protection against low pressure environments, and sports heavy layers of plastitanium, protecting slightly against physical trauma & explosive ordinance while severely reducing the wearer's mobility.
-    This one has station security & medical markings.
-ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatRiot = FPA-93 - "Sülde Mk.II" tacsuit
-    .desc = A specialized riot-control tactical combat hardsuit produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    Featuring reinforced plastitanium plating that offers better protection against low pressure environments and physical trauma than its standard counterpart, at the expense of some more mobility.
-ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatWarden = FPA-93s - "Sülde Mk.II" tacsuit
-    .desc = A specialized riot-control tactical combat hardsuit produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    Featuring reinforced plastitanium plating that offers better protection against low pressure environments and physical trauma than its standard counterpart, at the expense of some more mobility.
-    This one has station security markings.
-ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatAdvanced = FPA-99 - "Dayičin Mk.II" tacsuit
+    .desc = A sturdy tactical combat hardsuit mass-produced by Five-Points-Armory, painted with the colors of station security & medical staff.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels heavy.
+ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatRiot = FPA-93 - "Sulde Mk.II" tacsuit
+    .desc = A specialized tactical combat hardsuit produced by Five-Points-Armory.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels VERY heavy.
+ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatWarden = FPA-93s - "Sulde Mk.II" tacsuit
+    .desc = A specialized tactical combat hardsuit produced by Five-Points-Armory, painted with the colors of station security.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels VERY heavy.
+ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatAdvanced = FPA-99 - "Dayicin Mk.II" tacsuit
     .desc = A top-of-the-line tactical combat hardsuit produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    It features an optimized arrangement of its reinforcement layers that offers the same protection as standard suits without impacting mobility as much.
-ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatHoS = FPA-99s - "Dayičin Mk.II" tacsuit
-    .desc = A top-of-the-line tactical combat hardsuit produced by Five-Points-Armory.
-    It features an optimized arrangement of its reinforcement layers that offers the same protection as standard suits without impacting mobility as much.
-    This one has station security markings.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels somewhat light.
+ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitCombatHoS = FPA-99s - "Dayicin Mk.II" tacsuit
+    .desc = A top-of-the-line tactical combat hardsuit produced by Five-Points-Armory, painted with the colors of station security.
+    The tags on the suit indicate that its rated for moderate amounts of physical and explosion damage. It feels somewhat light.
+

Resources/Locale/en-US/nyanotrasen/prototypes/entities/clothing/head/hardsuit-helmets.ftl

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 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitMystagogue = NT-45e helmet
-    .desc =  A heavily armored helmet worn over the RD's Sophia hardsuit. It provides them near immunity to explosions, heat and radiation, but heavily restricts their movements.
+    .desc = A heavily armored helmet worn over the Sophia hardsuit. It boasts the same near-immunity to explosions, heat and radiation as the suit, but heavily restricts the wearer's mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSyndieReverseEngineered = NTSA-122 helmet
-    .desc = A helmet made by the special adquisitions department of Nanotrasen.
-    This design replaces the traditional steel plating with exotic alloys commonly found in starfighter hulls.
+    .desc = A sturdy, lightweight helmet made by the special adquisitions department of Nanotrasen.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitJuggernautReverseEngineered = NTSA-126 helmet
-    .desc = A suit made by the special acquisitions department of Nanotrasen based on the "Juggernaut" design.
-    It features bulky, overlapping layers of composite armor, giving its wearer protection unmatched by any armor short of a mech.
+    .desc = A very sturdy helmet made by the special acquisitions department of Nanotrasen, based on the "Juggernaut" tacsuit's design.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitERTCentcomm = NT-444c helmet
     .desc = A special tacsuit helmet worn by Central Command Officers.

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 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitMystagogue = NT-45e - "Sophia" research hardsuit
-    .desc = The magnum opus of Nanotrasen's R&D division. A special one-of-a-kind suit that makes it's wearer nigh-immune to explosive ordinance, heat and radiation. Also offers protection against
-    both hazardous environments and physical trauma with a heavy impact on the wearer's mobility. Can be compressed into a size small enough to fit into a bag.
+    .desc = The magnum opus of Nanotrasen's R&D division. The labels on this hardsuit claim that its near-immune to explosions, heat and radiation.
+    Somehow it also can shrink enough to fit in a bag. It feels VERY heavy.
 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitSyndieReverseEngineered = NTSA-122 tacsuit
-    .desc = A suit made by the special adquisitions department of Nanotrasen.
-    This design replaces the traditional steel plating with exotic alloys commonly found in starfighter hulls.
+    .desc = A suit made by the special adquisitions department of Nanotrasen, the suit's tags indicate it provides moderate protection against most forms of damage.
 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitJuggernautReverseEngineered = NTSA-126 tacsuit
     .desc = A suit made by the special acquisitions department of Nanotrasen based on the "Juggernaut" design.
-    It features bulky, overlapping layers of composite armor, giving its wearer protection unmatched by any armor short of a mech.
+    Matching its bulky appearance, it protects against all forms of damage. It feels VERY heavy.
 ent-ClothingOuterHardsuitERTCentcomm = NT-444c - "Ophanim" tacsuit
-    .desc = A highly advanced, tactical combat hardsuit used by Central Command Officers, it seems to be branded with the Nanotrasen logo and a strange looking series
-    number. The armor appears to be lined with a very sturdy alloy, and doesn't seem to encumber the wearer's mobility.
+    .desc = A highly advanced, tactical combat hardsuit used by Central Command Officers, it seems to be branded with the Nanotrasen logo and a strange looking series number.
+    The armor appears to be lined with a very sturdy alloy, it doesn't seem to have any weight either.

Resources/Locale/en-US/prototypes/entities/clothing/head/hardsuit-helmets.ftl

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 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitBasic = basic vacsuit helmet
     .desc = A common vacsuit helmet that provides little more than basic protection from vacuum.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitAtmos = HpI-19t helmet
-    .desc = The Fotiá's standard helmet, it features the same ceramic TPS tile plating as the suit, along with some integrated
-    protective gear for the wearer's face and nose.
+    .desc = The Fotia's standard helmet, it features the same heat protection as the suit, along with some integrated protective gear for the wearer's head.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitEngineering = HpI-19r helmet
-    .desc = The Lámpsi's standard helmet, it features the same lead shielding as the suit, along with some integrated
-    protective gear for the wearer's face and nose.
+    .desc = The Lampsi's standard helmet, it features the same radiation protection as the suit, along with some integrated protective gear for the wearer's head.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSpatio = HpI-20s helmet
-    .desc = A lightweight helmet designed for the Kríti, it allows for better mobility, along with some protection
-    against radiation thanks to its lead shielding.
+    .desc = A lightweight helmet designed for the Kriti hardsuit, it allows for better mobility, along with some protection against radiation.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSalvage = HpI-20a helmet
-    .desc = A bulky helmet designed for the Lavrion, it has reinforced plating to protect the wearer's face in wildlife encounters,
-    along with some protection against radiation thanks to its lead shielding.
+    .desc = A bulky helmet designed for the Lavrion hardsuit, it has reinforced plating to protect the wearer's head in wildlife encounters.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitVoidParamed = ZhP-24m helmet
-    .desc = A lightweight helmet designed for use with the Sukunabikona hardsuit. Parts of the visor are made of hard transparent plastics, allowing for better visibility.
+    .desc = A lightweight helmet designed for use with the Sukunabikona hardsuit. Parts of the helmet are made of hard transparent plastics, allowing for better visibility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitMaxim = mysterious helmet
-    .desc = A sturdy, old looking tacsuit helmet. It has an ominous red and black color scheme, and is reinforced with bluespace plating.
+    .desc = An old looking helmet, it seems rather sturdy and lightweight. It also has an ominous red and black color scheme.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSecurity = FPA-83s helmet
-    .desc = A bulky helmet deployed with the Baghatur tacsuit, it has heavy layers of plastitanium on it, offering protection against ballistics and explosive
-    ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
+    .desc = A bulky helmet deployed with the Baghatur tacsuit. Protects its wearer against ballistics and explosive ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitBrigmedic = FPA-84m helmet
-    .desc = A bulky helmet deployed with the Tsagaan tacsuit, it has heavy layers of plastitanium on it, offering protection against ballistics and explosive
-    ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
+    .desc = A bulky helmet deployed with the Tsagaan tacsuit. Protects its wearer against ballistics and explosive ordinance, at the cost of some mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitWarden = FPA-92s helmet
-    .desc = A modified riot-control helmet for use with the Sülde. Features plastitanium plating, offering better overall protection than standard models at the expense of mobility.
+    .desc = A modified riot-control helmet for use with the Sulde tacsuit. Offers better overall protection than standard tacsuits at the expense of mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCap = NT-42c helmet
-    .desc = A special helmet for the Tengri, featuring a lightweight construction with reinforced plating, offering good all-around protection without
-    severely impairing their mobility.
+    .desc = A special helmet for the Tengri tacsuit, despite its lightweight appearance, it provides good all-around protection to its wearer.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitEngineeringWhite = HpI-24c helmet
-    .desc = A high-grade helmet used with the Daedalus, it has a lighter construction than its standard counterparts, along with more radiation protection.
+    .desc = A high-grade helmet used with the Daedalus hardsuit, it has a lighter construction than its standard counterparts, along with more radiation protection.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitMedical = ZhP-25m helmet
-    .desc = An extraordinarily lightweight helmet designed for use with the Ōkuninushi hardsuit.
-    It is primarily made from transparent hard-plastics, but its true value comes from a complete freedom of vision.
+    .desc = An extraordinarily lightweight helmet designed for use with the Okuninushi hardsuit.
+    It is primarily made from transparent hard-plastics, providing complete freedom of vision.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitRd = NT-45e helmet
-    .desc = A heavily armored helmet worn over the RD's Sophia hardsuit. It provides them near immunity to explosions, heat and radiation, but heavily restricts their movements.
+    .desc = A heavily armored helmet worn over the Sophia hardsuit. It boasts the same near-immunity to explosions, heat and radiation as the suit, but heavily restricts the wearer's mobility.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSecurityRed = FPA-98s helmet
-    .desc = A high quality helmet for the Dayičin, features a lightweight reinforced plating, offering the same protection as a standard tacsuit without impacting mobility as much.
+    .desc = A high quality helmet for the Dayicin tacsuit. It offers better overall protection than standard tacsuits without impacting mobility as much.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitLuxury = HpI-20c helmet
-    .desc = A modified helmet for the "Minos", fashioned after the Logistics Officer's colors. It's been modified to use more graphene lining, allowing for greater mobility at the expense of
-    physical trauma protection.
+    .desc = A modified helmet for the Minos hardsuit, fashioned after the Logistics Officer's colors. It's been modified for greater mobility at the expense of physical trauma protection.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSyndie = CSA-51a helmet
-    .desc = A heavily armored helmet deployed over a Shanlin tacsuit. This one is painted the color of freshly-spilt blood.
+    .desc = An armored helmet deployed over a Shanlin tacsuit. This one has been painted blood red.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSyndieMedic = CSA-51m helmet
-    .desc = The Zhōngyào tacsuit's helmet features optic integrations for nearly every medical hud on the market,
-            it is designed to enable the survival of combat medics in the most dangerous of environments.
+    .desc = An armored helmet deployed over a Zhongyao tacsuit. features optic integrations for nearly every medical hud on the market.
+    Designed to enable the survival of combat medics in the most dangerous of environments.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSyndieElite = CSA-54UA helmet
-    .desc = An elite version of the blood-red hardsuit's helmet, with improved armor and fireproofing. Property of Gorlex Marauders.
+    .desc = An elite version of the Shanlin tacsuit's helmet, featuring improved armor and fireproofing.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitSyndieCommander = CSA-54c helmet
-    .desc = A bulked up version of the blood-red hardsuit's helmet, purpose-built for the commander of a syndicate operative squad. Has significantly improved armor for those deadly front-lines firefights.
+    .desc = A bulked up version of the Shanlin tacsuit's helmet, purpose-built for commanders of special operation squads. This one has been painted blood-red.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitCybersun = CSA-80UA helmet
-    .desc = Made of compressed red matter, this helmet was designed in the Tau chromosphere facility.
+    .desc = An incredibly sturdy looking helmet designed for the Guan Yu tacsuit.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitWizard = WZD-84 helmet
-    .desc = A bizarre, gem-encrusted helmet from unknown origins that radiates magical energies. It provides some protection to its wearer with minimal impact on mobility.
+    .desc = A bizarre, gem-encrusted helmet from unknown origins. It provides some protection to its wearer without restricting their movements.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitLing = organic space helmet
     .desc = A spaceworthy biomass of pressure and temperature resistant tissue.
 ent-ClothingHeadHelmetHardsuitPirateEVA = pirate helmet