passing data between components: add punctuation and improve grammar

[timmy471]

Because

There was a need for some grammatical and punctuation improvement

This PR

• Adds by after the repeating ourselves phrase for clarity
• Adds a comma after function for better punctuation

Closes #XXXXX

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