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4 changes: 2 additions & 2 deletions data/avgi/avgi news.txt
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Expand Up @@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ news "avgi astronomer"
not attributes "aberrant siege"
name
word
"Avgi"
"Avgi "
word
"Astronomer"
"Astrophysicist"
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not attributes "aberrant siege"
name
word
"Avgi"
"Avgi "
word
"doctor"
"healer"
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8 changes: 4 additions & 4 deletions data/avgi/avgi side missions.txt
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label whenupdate
action
set "avgi: asked about whenupdate"
` He thrums with laughter. "The trillion credit question, is it not, amusement? The answer I give the Assembly is that it will be finished when they supply us with the requisite materials and workforce to do so. But the War takes precedence, as it must, and so the steel and nanofibers and ceramics that we must have before we can fill this cylinder with atmosphere are instead used to build warships, and the engineers and workers with any shred of experience are sent to the Napigeo Yards instead of here."`
` He thrums with laughter. "The trillion credit question, is it not, amusement? The answer I give the Assembly is that it will be finished when they supply us with the requisite materials and workforce to do so. But the War takes precedence, as it must, and so the steel and nanofibers and ceramics that we must have before we can fill this cylinder with atmosphere are instead used to build warships, and the engineers and workers with any shred of experience are sent to the Navigeo Yards instead of here."`
choice
` "Well, it makes sense that fighting the Aberrant would take priority."`
` "Is building this station as important as fighting the Aberrant?"`
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set "avgi: asked about oneil"
` "A Class Two rotating cylinder habitat. Unless you use the Hekkedian classification system, in which case it is a Type One orbital habitat station. Of course, the Freosi would call it a Lieno-Drareg Cylinder, but that name hasn't been fashionable in quite some time."`
` "I was more asking about what it'll look like when it's done," you say."`
` "Amusement. I know, I know, I was just messing with you." He gestures out the window towards the steel skeleton of the unfinished station. "Six kilometers wide and twelve long, with two-hundred-sixty-six ribs of nickel-iron roidsteel and ninety spinal columns of carbon nanofilament. Once the base frame is complete, and it very nearly is, we will begin plating it with sheets of aerogel and graphene, with a fluorinated polymer layer coating the inside. After that my job is done, and we hand the project over to the ecosystem engineers.`
` "Amusement. I know, I know, I was just messing with you." He gestures out the window towards the steel skeleton of the unfinished station. "Six kilometers wide and twelve long, with two-hundred-sixty-six ribs of nickel-iron roidsteel and ninety spinal columns of carbon nanofilament. Once the base frame is complete, and it very nearly is, we will begin plating it with sheets of aerogel and graphene, with a fluorinated polymer layer coating the inside. After that my job is done, and we hand the project over to the ecosystem engineers."`
choice
` "What do they do?"`
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` "That sounds like a lot."`

` "Appreciation. Oh, it is. Over seven hundred megatons of raw material, scraped off moons and torn from asteroids. But it will be worth it, in the end."`
` "Appreciation. Oh, it is. Over seven hundred megatons of raw material, scraped off moons and torn from asteroids. But it will be worth it, in the end.`

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` "Of course, the entire purpose of this is to provide enough living space for the Avgi who escaped the Aberrant. And everyone would rather live in an open environment, instead of pretending a garden in a smaller station is sufficient. Thus, the ecosystem engineers come in with their millions of tons of soil to dirty up our nice shiny metal and nanofilaments, and grow grass and trees and fungus to make this place a little less dreary. I suppose we'll make most of the soil in bulk from crushed carbonaceous asteroids, and seed it with whatever samples we have from Aviskir."`
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defer

` You ask a few passing Avgi, and eventually one is able to answer your question.`
` "Probably an infocourier ship, hauling information and databases instead of cargo. The Guard sometimes sends ships to market if they've taken a beating and aren't worth fixing up to combat standards, which is probably what happened there.`
` "Probably an infocourier ship, hauling information and databases instead of cargo. The Guard sometimes sends ships to market if they've taken a beating and aren't worth fixing up to combat standards, which is probably what happened there."`
` You thank the Avgi for their time, and are about to leave when you spot a pale yellow Avgi climbing on board the exact ship you've been talking about. You might as well see if he's willing to chat.`
` "Hey, do you have a moment?" you ask as you jog over.`
` The Avgi looks down from atop the Polari. "Invitation, I do. The name's Hansa, and you are?"`
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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion data/hai/hai culture conversations.txt
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` "If you interpret the game as being played for the skill, without the wagering, then you clear the first and third tenet, but you have the issue that the principle skills are bluffing and manipulation, which violates the second tenet. Bluffing isn't a skill seen as having virtue, nor is manipulation."`
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` "Wait, do the Hai not lie or bluff?"`
` The barkeep chortles with a strange trill and says, "Oh no, the Hai do lie and bluff. We're actually very good at bluffing, evolutionarily advantageous in the wild and all that. It's just seen as very immature and base. An adult should be able to conduct their lives without resorting to such primitive instincts. We learned that the hard way long ago, back before we holed up in our current borders."`
` The barkeep chortles with a strange trill and says, "Oh no, the Hai do lie and bluff. We're actually very good at bluffing, evolutionarily advantageous in the wild and all that. It's just seen as very immature and base. An adult should be able to conduct their life without resorting to such primitive instincts. We learned that the hard way long ago, back before we holed up in our current borders."`
` He looks at you intently before continuing, "You won't hear the tenets brought up very much, but if you look closely you'll see that the first three especially are ingrained in our society very deeply."`
` With a shrug he flips open his order pad and pats his belly. "Of course, my gran always said that any of them after the tenth were more guidelines than actual rules, and I certainly have my share of disagreements with thirteen. Now, before I talk your ears off, what'll I get for you?"`
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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion data/hai/hai reveal 0 prologue.txt
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mission "Hai Reveal: Meet the Team: Sayari 2"
landing
name "Important Message"
description "Return to <destination>"
description "Return to <destination>."
source "Earth"
destination "Hai-home"
clearance
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8 changes: 4 additions & 4 deletions data/human/deep missions.txt
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accept
on complete
conversation
` Outside your ship, you are met by a representative of the Transport Union. "We have been expecting you, Captain <last>." They escort you to an elevator and up to the penthouse of the tallest building in Valhalla's capital of Himinbjorg.`
`Outside your ship, you are met by a representative of the Transport Union. "We have been expecting you, Captain <last>." They escort you to an elevator and up to the penthouse of the tallest building in Valhalla's capital of Himinbjorg.`
scene "scene/tower"
` Three youngish men adorned in trending clothes smile as you enter. "Ah, Captain <last>, what a pleasure to finally meet you. I am Kaiden, and these are my associates Braiden and Grayden. We are executives of the Transport Union. Obviously, we were made aware you would be coming and are looking forward toward creating a lasting and beneficial relationship with you and your... clients.`
` "We've heard that you have this inspiring idea to transport an entire backwater community from one world to another," Kaiden says.`
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has "Asgard"
choice
` "That's fantastic news! The Skakenga will need transport to Windblain."`
` "That's fantastic news! The Skadenga will need transport to Windblain."`
` "They need to go to Windblain."`
` A hush falls over the room, and both Braiden and Grayden look to Kaiden with confused expressions on their faces.`
` "Wind. Blain." Kaiden says slowly. "Wiiiindblaaain. Are you sure that is the world these simple people wish to travel to? Maybe you got an invoice mixed up? Perhaps wrote the wrong name down?" Braiden and Grayden both silently nod.`
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` "That changes things, then." Kaiden turns to Grayden. "Are there even incentives?"`
` Grayden is busy scanning through a tablet. "No re-urbanization kickbacks, no university-study grants, not even a housing development utilization bonus. The entire thing will probably still be a tax write off, but the Census and Culture Bureau won't be happy. Plus, obviously, no finder's fee from them."`
` Kaiden then looks to Braiden who shakes his head. "Public Relations for people moving to... Windblain? No one who is anyone lives on Windblain, and no one else cares about those people."`
` "Yeah, we're sorry, but this isn't going to work for us." Kaiden puts on a pained face. "This just isn't the kind of project we are willing to take on at the moment." They all stand in near unison. "In the future, try not to waste our time." Kaiden says as the three of them exit the room.`
` "Yeah, we're sorry, but this isn't going to work for us." Kaiden puts on a pained face. "This just isn't the kind of project we are willing to take on at the moment." They all stand in near unison. "In the future, try not to waste our time," Kaiden says as the three of them exit the room.`
` Your escort reappears. "I've been instructed to inform you that there is no one else in the Deep capable of moving the amount of people you want to move. When you're ready to be practical, contact us and we'll be more than happy to help. Now, follow me out of the building." You ride the long elevator down to the lobby and are shown the door. As you leave, another employee follows you out. As he passes you, he quietly says, "Meet me in the spaceport."`
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` "That's fantastic news! The Skakenga will need transport to Asgard."`
` "That's fantastic news! The Skadenga will need transport to Asgard."`
` "They need to go to Asgard."`
` Kaiden beams. "Brilliant. Just brilliant. I was just telling my colleagues here about what a great place Asgard would be for this tribe. The publicity will be huge. The universities will probably want to run various studies. There will be all sorts of government programs and initiatives there to help them accept the proper Deep culture and become productive citizens like the rest of us."`
` Grayden, Braiden and Kaiden all start shaking each others' hands and congratulating each other on being part of something so inspirational. After their celebration is over, Kaiden turns back to you. "Our transport fleet is at your disposal. They are being refitted at Mani in the Avior system."`
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attributes "tangled shroud" uninhabited
landscape land/sky14
description `Silently orbiting its distant parent, Nilokep is a dead, airless world of stony flats and salt plains. Granite mountains jut up at the poles, but any tectonic heat this small world may have once had has long since bled away.`
description `Curiously, Nilokep has an elevanted level of ambient background radiation, largely due to the dispersion of pulverized granite, containing trace amounts of uranium, across its surface. While not economical to mine, it is thought that this is the remnant of some ancient geological system that eroded and dispersed the planet's primordial mountains.`
description ` Curiously, Nilokep has an elevated level of ambient background radiation, largely due to the dispersion of pulverized granite, containing trace amounts of uranium, across its surface. While not economical to mine, it is thought that this is the remnant of some ancient geological system that eroded and dispersed the planet's primordial mountains.`
government Uninhabited

planet Nimbus
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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion data/remnant/remnant 1 introduction.txt
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` Taely nods "I will look forward to seeing what you find. In the meantime, I should get back to work." With that, she swings over the railing and climbs quickly down the wall in the direction of the shipyard, seemingly unconcerned about the height.`
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label nothelp
` Taely looks at you with a blank expression, then chants in a monotone voice "If that is your choice, you are unlikely to find much of interest to do among us." With that, she vaults over the edge of the railing and drops from view. As you quickly peer over the railing, you discover that she had must have caught a handhold somehow, as she is rapidly moving down the wall in a controlled fashion with ease of a spider.`
` Taely looks at you with a blank expression, then chants in a monotone voice. "If that is your choice, you are unlikely to find much of interest to do among us." With that, she vaults over the edge of the railing and drops from view. As you quickly peer over the railing, you discover that she must have caught a handhold somehow, as she is rapidly moving down the wall in a controlled fashion with ease of a spider.`
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