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audreyandoy
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Jul 20, 2022
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Fantastic work Jamie! Your project met all the requirements. And I loved your algorithm to generate the hex color as the temp changes definitely made up for it.
I didn't have much feedback to add as your code is very neat. Design-wise, it wasn't obvious that users could click on the city text to switch to 'Reset Location'. A hover effect or a separate button that clearly says "reset city" would have been helpful.
Other than that great work!
Grade: 🟢
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| lets do centered column flex elements | ||
| reset button0<(city name) | ||
| 3 buttons stacked next to <(70 degrees) | ||
| update the background gradient per temperature | ||
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| x An element that displays the temperature | ||
| x A clickable element to increase temperature | ||
| x A clickable element to decrease temperature | ||
| x An element that displays a landscape | ||
| x bottom gradient from blue to red | ||
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| Wave 3: | ||
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| x An element that displays the city name | ||
| x? An element that contains an <input type="text"> element, used to rename the city | ||
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| Wave 4: | ||
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| x A clickable element to get the current temperature of the displayed city name | ||
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| Wave 5: | ||
| top gradient yellow sun, grey cloud, blue rain, white snow | ||
| ? A <select> dropdown element to set the sky type | ||
| ? An element that displays a sky | ||
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| Wave 6: | ||
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| x A clickable element to reset the city name --> |
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These are great notes, however, the intended use of PRs is to share code that we'd like our team to also have. I highly recommend putting these type of notes in a local branch as you're working through some code.
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| const getTemp = () => { | ||
| axios | ||
| .get('http://localhost:5000/weather', { | ||
| params: { | ||
| lat: state.lat, | ||
| lon: state.lon, | ||
| }, | ||
| }) | ||
| .then((response) => { | ||
| state.temp = parseInt( | ||
| ((response.data['current'].temp - 273) * 9) / 5 + 32 | ||
| ); | ||
| state.weather = response.data['current']['weather'][0].main; | ||
| console.log('success in finding weather!', state.temp, state.weather); | ||
| tempChange(state.temp, true); | ||
| }) | ||
| .catch((error) => { | ||
| console.log('error in weather'); | ||
| }); | ||
| return state.temp; | ||
| }; |
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| const state = { | ||
| location: '', | ||
| temp: 70, | ||
| weather: '', | ||
| lat: 0, | ||
| lon: 0, | ||
| }; |
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| const toHex = (dec) => (dec < 16 ? '0' + dec.toString(16) : dec.toString(16)); | ||
| const normalize = (newTemp) => (newTemp % 35) / 35; |
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LOVE this formula to generate the temp color!!!
| } else { | ||
| color = ['FF', '00', '00']; | ||
| } | ||
| return ['#', ...color].join(''); |
| }; | ||
| ///////////////////////////////////////////// | ||
| const getLocation = () => { | ||
| print; |
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| console.log('success in finding location!', state.lat, state.lon); | ||
| }) | ||
| .catch((error) => { | ||
| console.log('error in location'); |
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Good job in error handling and utilizing logs to confirm the behavior of your get request. However, unless we're making a terminal program, we should keep console.logs out of PRs.
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| const locationChange = () => { | ||
| const currentLocation = document.querySelector('#location'); | ||
| const locationButton = document.querySelector('#locationReset'); | ||
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| state.location = currentLocation.value; | ||
| getLocation(); | ||
| locationButton.textContent = state.location; | ||
| currentLocation.value = ''; | ||
| }; |
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| const clearLocation = () => { | ||
| const locationButton = document.querySelector('#locationReset'); | ||
| locationButton.textContent = 'Reset Location'; | ||
| state.location = ''; | ||
| state.lat = 0; | ||
| state.lon = 0; | ||
| }; |
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| const registerEventHandlers = () => { | ||
| const upTempButton = document.querySelector('#up_temp'); | ||
| upTempButton.addEventListener('click', (event) => tempChange(1, false)); | ||
| const downTempButton = document.querySelector('#down_temp'); | ||
| downTempButton.addEventListener('click', (event) => tempChange(-1, false)); | ||
| const setTempButton = document.querySelector('#lookup_temp'); | ||
| setTempButton.addEventListener('click', (event) => getTemp()); | ||
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| const updateLocation = document.querySelector('#location'); | ||
| updateLocation.addEventListener('change', (event) => locationChange()); | ||
| const updateWeather = document.querySelector('#weatherBox'); | ||
| updateWeather.addEventListener('change', (event) => weatherChange()); | ||
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| const locationResetButton = document.querySelector('#locationReset'); | ||
| locationResetButton.addEventListener('click', (event) => clearLocation()); | ||
| }; | ||
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| document.addEventListener('DOMContentLoaded', registerEventHandlers); | ||
| tempChange(0, false); |
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