docs: updates & rewrites to actors in store page #1270
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sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|25 col 145| [write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|25 col 157| [write-good.TooWordy] 'in addition' is too wordy.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|35 col 70| [write-good.Passive] 'is displayed' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|39 col 30| [write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|39 col 206| [write-good.Passive] 'is paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|44 col 10| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|44 col 35| [Microsoft.HeadingAcronyms] Avoid using acronyms in a title or heading.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|44 col 57| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|48 col 9| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|48 col 55| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|52 col 9| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|52 col 55| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|56 col 16| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|56 col 19| [write-good.Passive] 'be charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|56 col 49| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|60 col 124| [write-good.Passive] 'be charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|62 col 13| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|62 col 39| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|66 col 11| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|66 col 66| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|68 col 66| [write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|68 col 356| [Microsoft.Wordiness] Consider using 'to' instead of 'in order to'.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|68 col 356| [write-good.TooWordy] 'in order to' is too wordy.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|70 col 10| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|70 col 20| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as 'my') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|70 col 34| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|74 col 31| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|74 col 59| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|78 col 49| [write-good.Passive] 'been charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|96 col 13| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|96 col 30| [write-good.Passive] 'is paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|96 col 47| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|102 col 9| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|102 col 26| [write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|102 col 60| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|106 col 24| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|106 col 74| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|108 col 292| [write-good.TooWordy] 'additional' is too wordy.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|108 col 408| [write-good.Weasel] 'only' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|110 col 9| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|110 col 63| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|112 col 16| [write-good.Passive] 'be charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|112 col 315| [write-good.Weasel] 'usually' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|114 col 10| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|114 col 64| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|120 col 10| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|120 col 35| [write-good.Passive] 'is paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|120 col 52| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|122 col 36| [write-good.Passive] 'is paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|124 col 15| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|124 col 30| [Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|124 col 33| [write-good.Passive] 'was charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|124 col 73| [Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|143 col 45| [write-good.Weasel] 'only' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|149 col 23| [write-good.Weasel] 'very' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|149 col 23| [Microsoft.Adverbs] Consider removing 'very'.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|149 col 44| [write-good.Weasel] 'many' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|149 col 97| [write-good.TooWordy] 'it is' is too wordy.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|149 col 298| [write-good.TooWordy] 'evaluate' is too wordy.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|149 col 332| [write-good.Weasel] 'easily' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|149 col 332| [Microsoft.Adverbs] Consider removing 'easily'.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|158 col 126| [write-good.TooWordy] 'Alternatively' is too wordy.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|158 col 126| [write-good.Weasel] 'Alternatively' is a weasel word!
Filtered Findings (12)
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|50 col 97| [write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|50 col 147| [write-good.Weasel] 'exactly' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|58 col 127| [write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|76 col 25| [write-good.Passive] 'are paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|98 col 69| [write-good.Passive] 'is paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|104 col 35| [write-good.Weasel] 'only' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|116 col 28| [write-good.Weasel] 'many' is a weasel word!
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|116 col 86| [write-good.Passive] 'be charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|126 col 47| [write-good.Passive] 'been charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|126 col 204| [write-good.Passive] 'be shown' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|130 col 51| [write-good.Passive] 'been charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
sources/platform/actors/running/store.md|136 col 38| [write-good.Passive] 'been charged' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
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[write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
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{"message": "[write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 25, "column": 145}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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[write-good.TooWordy] 'in addition' is too wordy.
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{"message": "[write-good.TooWordy] 'in addition' is too wordy.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 25, "column": 157}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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[write-good.Passive] 'is displayed' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
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{"message": "[write-good.Passive] 'is displayed' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 35, "column": 70}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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[write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
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{"message": "[write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 39, "column": 30}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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[write-good.Passive] 'is paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
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{"message": "[write-good.Passive] 'is paid' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 39, "column": 206}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 44, "column": 10}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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[Microsoft.HeadingAcronyms] Avoid using acronyms in a title or heading.
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{"message": "[Microsoft.HeadingAcronyms] Avoid using acronyms in a title or heading.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 44, "column": 35}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 44, "column": 57}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 48, "column": 9}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 48, "column": 55}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 52, "column": 9}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 52, "column": 55}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 56, "column": 16}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 62, "column": 13}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.HeadingPunctuation] Don't use end punctuation in headings.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 62, "column": 39}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 66, "column": 11}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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[write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!
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{"message": "[write-good.Weasel] 'monthly' is a weasel word!", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 68, "column": 66}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.Wordiness] Consider using 'to' instead of 'in order to'.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 68, "column": 356}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[write-good.TooWordy] 'in order to' is too wordy.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 68, "column": 356}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as ' I ') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 70, "column": 10}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}
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{"message": "[Microsoft.FirstPerson] Use first person (such as 'my') sparingly.", "location": {"path": "sources/platform/actors/running/store.md", "range": {"start": {"line": 70, "column": 20}}}, "severity": "WARNING"}