Tutorial - Basic Medical Items #5422
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Overall a good overview of standard medical and the code is good.
Although I personally thought that the pacing might be a little too fast for a new player when describing what the items are.
I also managed to break your tutorial somehow by softlocking myself at the stage where the player has to vend a pull packet pouch and there wasn't any to vend.
I would like to see a little work on the pacing though so it doesn't feel like information overload and we actually get the player to use more of the items and do stuff within the tutorial. Explain an item or two, then get the player to use them for themselves and see how they work- then move onto the next. The existing medical tutorial is a good example. This will be more memorable to a player and will flow more easily into the next tutorial and so on and so on.
I'll let you have a think about this and mark your PR as ready for review when you're ready.
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| message_to_player("It will be up to you to figure out which of these you should take. You can consider using these pouches, or placing some of them in your satchel/backpack.") |
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I played your tutorial and this reads as though you can place the pouch itself into your satchel which it's too big for.
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I'll reopen once I've got free time to work out the PR and make changes, just closing to stop the auto-close |
About the pull request
Adds a medical based tutorial aimed at describing every basic medical item a non-Corpsman Marine can access and use, and then describing where they come from and how to store them.
The tutorial goes something like this.
Explain why it's good for the game
Educating new players on mechanics is good.
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add: Tutorial describing basic medical items, their uses and where to get them has been added.
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