Update back-to-school-campus-tour-2024

blogs/back-to-school-campus-tour-2024

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Pizza Party at NYU Tandon (MakerSpace) in Brooklyn on Mon, Sep 23 from 4-7pm. We
 
 - Free pizza 🍕
 - Free drinks 🧃
-- Workshop
+- (insert name here) workshop
 - Resume review
 - Free swag
 
@@ -64,11 +64,11 @@ Please note this is a closed event for NYU Tandon School of Engineering students
 
 **[Thu 9/26: Pizza Party @ CCNY](https://lu.ma/6t1fc9la)**
 
-Introduction to SQL workshop at The City College of New York at the North Academic Center (NAC) Building. We'ved partnered with Beavers Code (ACM) them to bring you:
-- Free pizza 🍕 & drinks 🧃
-- Q&A
-- Review your resume
-- Free swag
+Introduction to SQL workshop and Q&A at The City College of New York at the North Academic Center (NAC) Building. We've partnered with Beavers Code (ACM) to bring you:
+- Free pizza 🍕 
+- Free drinks 🧃
+- Resume Review 👤
+- FREE swag! ✨
 
 Please note this is a closed event for CCNY CompSci and tech-adjacent majors students. You must present your school ID to enter the premises.
 
@@ -86,11 +86,11 @@ Please note this is a closed event for CCNY CompSci and tech-adjacent majors stu
 
 Codédex Back to School Bash (Thu, Oct 10) at Wix Playground in Manhattan. You can expect:
 
-- A fun and interactive panel discussion with Hiring Managers and Interns
-- LinkedIn headshots
-- Breakout sessions
-- Swag raffle
-- And enough food and drink to fill your belly! :)
+- A fun and interactive panel with Hiring Managers and Interns 🎤
+- LinkedIn headshots 📸 
+- Networking breakout sessions 👋 
+- Swag raffle - limited edition merch! 🛍️
+- And enough food and drink to fill your belly! 🫃
 
 RSVP and purchase your ticket here: https://lu.ma/tvwccbhp
 
@@ -127,6 +127,10 @@ See you on the [#CodedexCampusTour](https://x.com/search?q=CodedexCampusTour&src
 - GitHub Student Developer Pack: [https://www.codedex.io/github-students](https://www.codedex.io/github-students)
 - HackMIT: [https://hackmit.org](https://hackmit.org)
 - DivHacks: [https://www.columbiadivhacks.org](https://www.columbiadivhacks.org)
-- Codédex Instagram: [@codedex.io](https://www.instagram.com/codedex.io)
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+Make sure to follow our [Instagram](https://www.instagram.com/codedex.io) and [Twitter](https://www.twitter.com/codedex_io), we'll be providing more updates there in the next few weeks!
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+P.S. If you like/comment/repost any of our Campus Tour events, you will enter 3 $100 Dormify Gift Card raffle! :v: >
+maybe just direct them to our instagram post to enter?
 
 P.S. If you like/comment/repost any of our Campus Tour events, you will enter 3 $100 Dormify Gift Card raffle! ✌️