Update back-to-school-campus-tour-2024

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 [HackMIT](https://hackmit.org) (Sep 14-15) is a weekend-long hackathon where students from around the globe come together to design and build innovative technology projects.
 
-Find Sonny, Naomi, and Jackie at the Codédex booth in the mentor / career fair section of the hackathon on Sat, 9/14 - we’ll have FREE swag and film street-style interviews! 
+Find Sonny, Naomi, and Jackie at the Codédex booth in the mentor / career fair section of the hackathon on Sat, Sep 14 - we’ll have FREE swag and film street-style interviews! 
 
 **Note:** To participate in HackMIT, apply via [their website](https://hackmit.org).
 
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 *You must apply to participate in DivHacks via their website. Any current college student (undergrad or grad) can apply! Not just Columbia students.
 
-**[Thu 10/10 Back to School Finale @ Wix Playground](https://lu.ma/tvwccbhp)**
+**[Thu 10/10: Back to School Bash @ Wix](https://lu.ma/tvwccbhp)**
 
-Codédex Back to School Bash (Thu, Oct 10) at Wix Playground in Manhattan. You can expect:
+Our Back to School Bash (Thu, Oct 10) at Wix Playground in Manhattan. You can expect:
 
 - 🎤 Fun and interactive panel with Hiring Managers and Interns
 - 📸 LinkedIn headshots
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ If you find us at any of the five events, ask us for a QR code or a code to get
 
 #### Sponsors & Friends!
 
-Snaps & slays to our sponsors Emmy + co at [Wix Studio](https://www.wix.com/studio), Juan at [GitHub Education](https://github.com/education), Ivanha at [Jam.dev](https://jam.dev) for sponsoring the event! 
+Snaps & slays to our sponsors Emmy at [Wix Studio](https://www.wix.com/studio), Juan at [GitHub Education](https://github.com/education), Ivanha at [Jam.dev](https://jam.dev) for sponsoring the event! 
 
 Shoutout to the HackNYU, Beavers Code, DivHacks, HackMIT teams as well!
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ Shoutout to the HackNYU, Beavers Code, DivHacks, HackMIT teams as well!
 
 Come say hi! We’ll be filming on-the-street style interview videos and bringing the new Fan Made merch collection, and chatting with everyone!
 
-You'll get to meet the team, grab free stickers, learn all about Codédex, and for a chance to be in our new **Codédex College Ambassador Program**. 🔥
+You'll get to meet the team, grab free stickers, learn all about Codédex, and for a chance to be in our new **College Ambassador Program**. 🔥
 
 See you on the [#CodedexCampusTour](https://x.com/search?q=CodedexCampusTour&src=typed_query&f=live)!