using a screenwriting format and some small edits #5
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using a different format: http://www.finaldraft.com/mm_media/mm_pdf/How_to_Format_a_Screenplay.pdf
Edits
-still some work on how Erica should respond to Tobin. I want to show that Tobin's personality can be self-important and focused on work, but not deliberately malicious