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elijames-codecov · Aug 20, 2024 · 78a2606 · 78a2606
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diff --git a/src/pages/about.astro b/src/pages/about.astro
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ import GeoRight from '/images/background-images/geo-right.svg?raw';
 import dospImage from '../assets/about/dosp.webp';
 
 const seoMetaData = {
-  description: 'Fair Source is an alternative to closed source for safely sharing access to your core products. Fair Source Software (FSS) can be used with minimal restrictions, and becomes Open Source after a period of time.',
+  description: 'Fair Source is an alternative to closed source, allowing you to safely share access to your core products. Fair Source Software (FSS) can be used with minimal restrictions, and becomes Open Source after a period of time.',
   slug: 'about/'
 };
 
@@ -43,8 +43,9 @@ const seoMetaData = {
         <p
           class="text-[1.75rem] font-[500] leading-[135%] tracking-[-0.0375rem] pb-[1.25rem]"
         >
-          Fair Source is an alternative to closed source for safely sharing access
-          to your core products. Fair Source Software (FSS):
+          Fair Source is an alternative to closed source, allowing you to
+          safely sharing access to your core products. Fair Source Software
+          (FSS):
         </p>
         <ol
           class="text-[1.75rem] font-[500] pb-[3.25rem] pl-[3.25rem] list-decimal"
@@ -111,12 +112,12 @@ const seoMetaData = {
 
           <p class="pb-[1.5rem]">
             The purpose of Fair Source is to legitimize the practice of
-            companies meaningfully sharing access to the code for their core software
-            products while retaining control of their roadmap and business
-            model, without confusing this with Free and Open Source Software.
-            <a href="/companies/">Fair Source companies</a> value user freedom
-            and developer sustainability. Quite often, we maintain and
-            contribute both financially and in other ways to genuine
+            companies meaningfully sharing access to the code for their core
+            software products while retaining control of their roadmap and
+            business model, without confusing this with Free and Open Source
+            Software. <a href="/companies/">Fair Source companies</a> value
+            user freedom and developer sustainability. Quite often, we maintain
+            and contribute both financially and in other ways to genuine
             community-governed FOSS projects alongside our commercial Fair
             Source offerings.
           </p>

diff --git a/src/pages/faq.astro b/src/pages/faq.astro
@@ -32,9 +32,10 @@ const seoMetaData = {
           <div class="relative flex flex-wrap">
             <div class="w-12/12 pb-[3.75rem]">
               <p>
-                Fair Source is an alternative to closed source for safely sharing
-                access to a company's core software products. The two basic features
-                of Fair Source <a href="/licenses/">licensing</a > are:
+                Fair Source is an alternative to closed source, allowing you to
+                safely sharing access to your company's core software products.
+                The two basic features of Fair Source <a href="/licenses/">licensing</a
+                > are:
               </p>
             </div>
             <div class="w-full flex flex-wrap pb-[3rem]">

diff --git a/src/pages/index.astro b/src/pages/index.astro
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ import fairSourceImage from '../assets/home/fairsource.png';
 import heroImage from '../assets/home/homeHeroImage.png';
 
 const seoMeta = {
-  description: 'Fair Source is an alternative to closed source for safely sharing access to your core products. Fair Source Software (FSS) can be used with minimal restrictions, and becomes Open Source after a period of time.',
+  description: 'Fair Source is an alternative to closed source, allowing you to safely share access to your core products. Fair Source Software (FSS) can be used with minimal restrictions, and becomes Open Source after a period of time.',
 };
 
 const mobileSectionCommonClasses = 'z-0 pb-0 pt-[12.31rem] sm:pt-[9.12rem] sm:pb-[1.56rem] sm:px-[3rem] md:pt-[6.69rem] md:pb-[7.44rem]';
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ const mobileSectionContentClasses = 'z-10 pt-[1.5rem] pb-[1rem] relative w-12/12
         <h1 class="text-black mb-4">
           Software Sharing for Modern Businesses
         </h1>
-        <p class="text-balance text-black text-[1.5rem] xl:text-[2rem] leading-[130%] font-sans font-[500] mb-6">Fair Source is an alternative to closed source for safely sharing access to your core products.</p>
+        <p class="text-balance text-black text-[1.5rem] xl:text-[2rem] leading-[130%] font-sans font-[500] mb-6">Fair Source is an alternative to closed source, allowing you to safely share access to your core products.</p>
         <div class="flex flex-wrap gap-4">
           <Button type="primary" url='/join/' color="teal" cta="Join Fair Source" />
           <Button type="secondary" url='/about/' color="black" cta="Learn More" />