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applications/knockout_wars_game.md

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 This is a proposal to build & launch Knockout Wars Game on EOS EVM
 
-### Overview
 
-> Please provide the following:
+### Overview
 
 - **Name:** Knockout Wars, a Mobile Multiplayer Fireball Fighting Game
 - **Brief Description:** We want to be the 1st Mobile Skill based fighting game on EOS EVM that is set up for mass adoption.
@@ -37,11 +36,12 @@ All the above will result in EOS EVM gaining new exposure to new gaming communit
 - **Relationship to EOS Network / Antelope:** Enhance the EOS Gamefi ecosystem via EOS EVM 
 - **Reason for Interest:** I have been a member of the EOS community since 2018. Unfortunately, due to the instability caused by Block One I decided to launch the project on BSC. Now that we as a community have taken over from Block One and after discussing with Yves La Rose, I want to do my bit to contribute towards making Gamefi on EOS EVM flourish and ultimately highlight the exceptional technology underlying the EOS blockchain.
 
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 ### Project Details
 
 GAMI is an Influencer centric Web3 gaming studio set-up for onboarding the next 100 million gamers. 
 
-Our debut game ‘Knockout Wars’ (link) is a Mobile Multiplayer Fireball Fighting Game inspired by Street Fighter & Dodgeball. Currently in closed beta testing with the community.
+Our debut game ‘Knockout Wars’ <https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.gami.knockoutwars> is a Mobile Multiplayer Fireball Fighting Game inspired by Street Fighter & Dodgeball. Currently in closed beta testing with the community.
 
 
 Most Web3 games are finding it difficult to gain mass adoption. 
@@ -50,17 +50,17 @@ We believe the solutions are as follows:
 
 1. Remove Web3 wallet barrier
 
-Gamers are alienated when required to adopt a Web3 wallet to play games, this becomes a barrier to mass adoption. Our games use social logins for all players, allowing them to adopt web3 at their own pace.
+Gamers are alienated when required to adopt a Web3 wallet to play games, this becomes a barrier to mass adoption. Our games use social logins for all players, allowing them to adopt Web3 at their own pace.
 
 2. Align incentives correctly for mass adoption
 
 Web3 gaming incentives are misaligned, as they focus on paying the gamer and not the promoter. We feel gamers should be rewarded with a fun experience, and promoters (influencers) should be rewarded financially.
 
-Our innovative #Influences&Earn program, incentivises Influencers to host captivating Tournaments, attracting audiences and boosting engagement, opening the doors to mass adoption. 
+Our innovative #Influence&Earn program, incentivises Influencers to host captivating Tournaments, attracting audiences and boosting engagement, opening the doors to mass adoption. 
 
 3. Sustainable economy
 
-Web3 games that require more paying users to sustain the Play2Earn economy are designed to fail, similar to pyramid schemes. Our economy uses NFT sales and sponsorship revenue to bring new money into the ecosystem to fund our onboarding strategy powered by our innovative #Influences&Earn programme, making it a sustainable economy setup for mass adoption.
+Web3 games that require more paying users to sustain the Play2Earn economy are designed to fail, similar to pyramid schemes. Our economy uses NFT sales and sponsorship revenue to bring new money into the ecosystem to fund our onboarding strategy powered by our innovative #Influence&Earn program, making it a sustainable economy setup for mass adoption.
 
 Note: Our solidity smart contracts will be open source but our unity game will not be open source.
 
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 - What need(s) does your project meet? Mass adoption of Web3 gaming. Mass awareness of EOS EVM via the #Influence&Earn program
 - Are there any other projects similar to yours in the EOS Network / Antelope ecosystem? We are not aware of other projects similar to this in the EOS ecosystem
 
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 ## Team
 
 ### Team members
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 ### Team Experience
 
-Junayd Miah - Over 15 years of experience growing an international influencer based fast fashion brand & 5 years of creative & B2B experience in the Web3 space
-Azad Uddin - 20 years of development experience, with 4 years blockchain experience
-Eric Odi – 9 years of Unity game development experience
-Abdul Fattah – 8 years communications and community management experience
-Ammar Vohra - 7 years of Unity backend game development experience
-Rahmat Ali - 6 years of product management experience, with 3 years in web3 product management
-Eleni Kouraki - 3 years of experience as a 3D artist 
+- Junayd Miah - Over 15 years of experience growing an international influencer based fast fashion brand & 5 years of creative & B2B experience in the Web3 space
+- Azad Uddin - 20 years of development experience, with 4 years blockchain experience
+- Eric Odi – 9 years of Unity game development experience
+- Abdul Fattah – 8 years communications and community management experience
+- Ammar Vohra - 7 years of Unity backend game development experience
+- Rahmat Ali - 6 years of product management experience, with 3 years in web3 product management
+- Eleni Kouraki - 3 years of experience as a 3D artist 
 
 
 ### Team Org Repos
@@ -116,23 +117,24 @@ Eleni Kouraki - 3 years of experience as a 3D artist
 ## Development Status
 
 - The game is in closed early beta testing. 
-- Link to google play store. 
+- <https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.gami.knockoutwars> to google play store. 
 - Use EOSEVM as invite code.
 
 ## Development Roadmap
 
-The roadmap is seperated in to 4 distict deliverbales
+The roadmap is separated into 4 distinct deliverables
 - EOS EVM Token development
 - DEX Launch with liqudity
-- Integration of EOS Token and wallets to knockout wars game
-- Launch the EOS EVM backed competitions of knockout wars 
+- Integration of EOS Token and Wallets with Knockout Wars Game
+- Launch the EOS EVM backed competitions of Knockout Wars Game
 
 ### Milestone Summary
 
 - **Total Estimated Duration:** 3 months 
 - **Full-Time Equivalent (FTE):** 1 FTE
 - **Total Costs:** 35,000 USD
 
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 ### Milestone 1 — EOS EVM Token development
 
 - **Estimated duration:** 1 month
@@ -141,8 +143,7 @@ The roadmap is seperated in to 4 distict deliverbales
 
 Develop a new Token with new features
 
-Features include: 
-Transaction fee will be split into the following 
+Transaction fee feature will be split into the following 
 - Reflection to Token holders
 - Burning
 - Liquidity 
@@ -167,40 +168,40 @@ Development Costs: 7,000 USD
 
 Launch on an EOS EVM DEX
 
-Audit Cost 2,000USD 
-DevOps Token Launch Costs: 1,000 USD
-Liquidity for the EOS DEX Cost: 10,000 USD
+- Audit Cost 2,000USD 
+- DevOps Token Launch Costs: 1,000 USD
+- Liquidity for the EOS DEX Cost: 10,000 USD
 
 
-### Milestone 3 — Integration of EOS Token and wallets to Knockout Wars Game
+### Milestone 3 — Integration of EOS Token and Wallets with Knockout Wars Game
 
 - **Estimated Duration:** 1 Month
 - **FTE:**  1
 - **Costs:** 6,000 USD
 
-Integrate EOS EVM to Knockout wars
-Unity Game Integration
-- Integrate EOS wallets to knockout wars
+Unity Game Integration: Integrate EOS EVM to Knockout Wars Game
+
+- Integrate EOS wallets with Knockout Wars
 - Unit test code
-Development Costs: 6,000 USD 
+- Development Costs: 6,000 USD 
 - The annual salary for calculation 72,000 USD
 - (72,000 / 12) * 1 month
 
 
-### Milestone 4 — Launch the EOS EVM backed competitions of Knockout Wars 
+### Milestone 4 — Launch the EOS EVM backed competitions of Knockout Wars Game
 
 - **Estimated Duration:** 1 Month
 - **FTE:**  1
 - **Costs:** 9,000 USD
 
 EOS Sponsored Competitions 
 - Prepare and organise 4 weekly competitions for Knockout Wars 
-- Each week a different Influencer will host the tournament. 
+- Each week a different Influencer will host the tournament
 
 The campaign will market EOS 
 - Market to our community, including AMAs 
 - Youtube, Twitter and Telegram campaign 
-- Banners in knockout wars 
+- Banners in Knockout Wars Game 
 
 Influencer Costs: 4,000 USD 
 - Mid-level influencer 1,000 USD