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 title: Hololens and BT300 VR/AR Addon
 date: Thu Mar 02 2017 15:28:39 GMT+0700 (ICT) 
 author: Pupil Dev Team 
-subtitle: "We are happy to announce that we have added the Microsoft Hololens and Epson Moverio BT-300 VR/AR addons, now available on the store!"
+subtitle: "We are excited to announce new AR eye tracking add-ons for Microsoft Hololens and the Epson Moverio BT-300 - now available on the store!"
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 <img src="../../../../media/images/blog/addon_hololens-light.jpg" class='Feature-image u-padBottom--2' alt="Hololens Addon">
 
-We are happy to announce that we have added the Epson Moverio BT-300 and Microsoft Hololens VR/AR addons, now available on the store! 
+We are excited to announce new AR eye tracking add-ons for Microsoft Hololens and the Epson Moverio BT-300 - now available on the store!
 
-You can easily augment these VR/AR hardware with Pupil Labs eye trackers that can run up to 120hz and have a latency of 5.7ms, without compromising your VR or AR experience. Fast enough for interaction applications and detection of saccades and quick fixations. And With our [open source software](https://github.com/pupil-labs/pupil/releases/latest) and direct access to the raw eye video feeds you are never locked into a platform.
+You can easily add eye tracking functionality to the Hololens and the BT300 - no tools required! Our cameras run at 120hz and give you access to a low latency eye tracking pipeline. Fast enough for interaction applications and detection of saccades and quick fixations. 
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+You get direct access to raw eye video feeds and all data from our software. We have [open source building blocks](https://github.com/pupil-labs/hmd-eyes) that you can use to integrate eye tracking into your application. 
 
 Head over to the [store](https://pupil-labs.com/store/#vr-ar) and check them out.