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 # What is Fluent Bit?
 
+[Fluent Bit](https://fluentbit.io) is an open source telemetry agent specifically
+designed to efficiently handle the challenges of collecting and processing telemetry
+data across a wide range of environments, from constrained systems to complex cloud
+infrastructures. Managing telemetry data from various sources and formats can be a
+constant challenge, particularly when performance is a critical factor.
+
+Rather than serving as a drop-in replacement, Fluent Bit enhances the observability
+strategy for your infrastructure by adapting and optimizing your existing logging
+layer, and adding metrics and traces processing. Fluent Bit supports a
+vendor-neutral approach, seamlessly integrating with other ecosystems such as
+Prometheus and OpenTelemetry. Trusted by major cloud providers, banks, and companies
+in need of a ready-to-use telemetry agent solution, Fluent Bit effectively manages
+diverse data sources and formats while maintaining optimal performance and keeping
+resource consumption low.
+
+Fluent Bit can be deployed as an edge agent for localized telemetry data handling or
+utilized as a central aggregator/collector for managing telemetry data across
+multiple sources and environments.
 
 
-[Fluent Bit](https://fluentbit.io) is an open-source telemetry agent specifically designed to efficiently handle the challenges of collecting and processing telemetry data across a wide range of environments, from constrained systems to complex cloud infrastructures. Managing telemetry data from various sources and formats can be a constant challenge, particularly when performance is a critical factor.
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-Rather than serving as a drop-in replacement, Fluent Bit enhances the observability strategy for your infrastructure by adapting and optimizing your existing logging layer, as well as metrics and traces processing. Furthermore, Fluent Bit supports a vendor-neutral approach, seamlessly integrating with other ecosystems such as Prometheus and OpenTelemetry. Trusted by major cloud providers, banks, and companies in need of a ready-to-use telemetry agent solution, Fluent Bit effectively manages diverse data sources and formats while maintaining optimal performance.
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-Fluent Bit can be deployed as an edge agent for localized telemetry data handling or utilized as a central aggregator/collector for managing telemetry data across multiple sources and environments.
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-[Fluent Bit](https://fluentbit.io) has been designed with performance and low resource consumption in mind.
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