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Co-authored-by: Liza Mock <[email protected]>

docs/product/issues/issue-details/breadcrumbs/index.mdx

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 title: Using Breadcrumbs
-description: "Learn about using breadcrumbs on the Issue Details page to debug."
+description: "Learn about using breadcrumbs on the Issue Details page to help debug faster."
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 Sentry uses _breadcrumbs_ to create a trail of events that happened prior to an issue. These events are very similar to traditional logs, but can record more rich structured data.
 
-SDKs automatically start recording breadcrumbs by enabling integrations. To learn how to do this for your platform, select the platform from the dropdown at the top of the page, then review the breadcrumbs documentation for that platform.
+SDKs automatically start recording breadcrumbs by enabling integrations. To learn how to do this for your platform, select it from the dropdown at the top of the left hand nav. You'll be taken to the breadcrumb documentation specific to the platform you use.
 
-If an error event provides a trail, [sentry.io](https://sentry.io) displays the breadcrumbs on the **Issue Details** page.
+If an error event provides a trail, you'll see the breadcrumbs on the **Issue Details** page in [Sentry.io](https://sentry.io/orgredirect/organizations/:orgslug/issues/) displays .
 
 ![Breadcrumbs section](../img/issue-breadcrumbs.png)
 
 ## Breadcrumbs Display
 
-On the main issue details page, you'll only see a portion of the breadcrumbs that may be available for the event. To access the rest of them, click the 'View All' button at the bottom of the section. This will open a slide out drawer where you can search, filter, sort and change the time display for all the breadcrumbs. To close this drawer, click 'Close' or press the escape key.
+You'll see a few of the breadcrumbs that may be available for the event in the issue "Details" tab. To access the rest of them, click the "View All" button at the bottom of the section. This will open a slide out drawer where you can search, filter, sort, and change the time display for all available breadcrumbs. 
 
-In the drawer the following controls are accessible:
+Here are all the ways you can narrow down what you see:
 - **Search**: Shows only breadcrumbs that match the query. Matches can occur on `type`, `category`, `message` and `data`.
-- **Filter**: The list of breadcrumbs can be filtered by the associated `type`.
-- **Sort**: Determines how breadcrumbs will be ordered, either Newest first or Oldest first. Your sort preference is saved to the browser.
-- **Time Display** Determines how breadcrumb timestamps will be displayed, either as absolute timestamps (respecting user preferences for 24-hour clocks/timezone), or relative to the first breadcrumb in the list. Relative timestamps that appear negative indicate they took place before the event first breadcrumb. Your time display preference is saved to the browser.
+- **Filter**:  Filters by the associated `type`.
+- **Sort**: Determines whether breadcrumbs are shown by Newest or Oldest first. (Your sort preference will be saved to the browser.)
+- **Time Display:** Determines how breadcrumb timestamps are displayed, either as absolute timestamps (respecting user preferences for a 24-hour clocks/timezone), or relative to the first breadcrumb in the list. If a relative timestamp looks negative, it means that it took place before the event's first breadcrumb. (Your time display preference will be saved to the browser.)
 
 ![Breadcrumbs drawer](./img/breadcrumbs-drawer.png)
 
 
-## Breadcrumbs Attributes
+## Breadcrumb Attributes
 
-Each breadcrumb is composed of the following details:
+Each breadcrumb is composed of the following:
 
-- **Type**: A semi-internal attribute `type` can control the type of the breadcrumb. By default, all breadcrumbs are recorded as `default`, but Sentry provides other [types](https://develop.sentry.dev/sdk/event-payloads/breadcrumbs/#breadcrumb-types) that influence the color/icon associated with the breadcrumb in the UI.
+- **Type**: `type` is a semi-internal attribute that controls how breadcrumbs are categorized. If left unchanged, all breadcrumbs are recorded as `default`, but Sentry provides other [types](https://develop.sentry.dev/sdk/event-payloads/breadcrumbs/#breadcrumb-types) that each have their own color/icon in the UI.
 
-- **Category**: The category of the event. This data is similar to a logger name, and helps you understand the area in which an event took place, such as `auth`. In the UI, period characters are replaced with space (e.g. `ui.click` becomes `UI Click`)
+- **Category**: The event category. This data is similar to a logger name and helps you understand where an event took place, such as `auth`. In the UI, period characters are replaced with space (for example, `ui.click` becomes `UI Click`)
 
 - **Message**: A string describing the event, rendered as text with all whitespace preserved. It's often used as a drop-in for a traditional log message.
 
-- **Data**: A key-value mapping of breadcrumb's arbitrary data. Useful for attaching structured information related to the breadcrumb, like IDs or variable values.
+- **Data**: A key-value mapping of a breadcrumb's arbitrary data. This is useful for attaching structured information related to the breadcrumb, like IDs or variable values.
 
-- **Level**: The severity of an event. The level is set to one of five values, which are — in order of severity — fatal, error, warning, info, and debug.
+- **Level**: The severity of an event. The level is set to one of five values: fatal, error, warning, info, and debug, in order of severity.
 
-- **Time**: A timestamp representing when the breadcrumb occurred. The format is either a string, as defined in [RFC 3339](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3339), or a numeric value representing the number of seconds that have elapsed since the Unix epoch.
+- **Time**: A timestamp showing when the breadcrumb occurred. The format is either a string, as defined in [RFC 3339](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3339), or a numeric value representing the number of seconds that have elapsed since the Unix epoch.
 
 
 Learn more detailed information about breadcrumb data in the [Breadcrumbs Interface developer documentation](https://develop.sentry.dev/sdk/event-payloads/breadcrumbs/).