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           <p>Atatürk's reforms transformed the country into a secular republic. The sultanate
           (political role of the Sultan) was abolished to be replaced by a president. Women
-          were granted full universal suffrage in 1930. The alphabet was changed from Arabic
-          letters to latin ones. The Hagia Sophia went from being a mosque to a museum in 
-          1934. Atatürk required that the Islamic call to prayer (ezan) be done in Turkish 
-          because he belived that if a person follows a religion, he should understand the 
+          were granted full universal suffrage in 1930. The writing system was changed from an
+	  Arabic script to a Latin one. The Hagia Sophia went from being a mosque to a museum in 
+          1934. Atatürk required that the Islamic call to prayer (ezan) be recited in Turkish 
+          because he believed that a follower of a religion should understand the 
           words being expressed. The previous two reforms would later be reversed.
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-          Despite having its offical name change to "İstanbul" by 1930, the city was
-          no longer the largest in an Islamic state. From then on, Türkiye has remained a 
-          secular Muslim country rather than an Islamic one because there is no mention of
-          Islam in the Turkish constitution.</p>
+          As the offical name of the city changed to "İstanbul" in 1930, it was no longer
+          the largest in an Islamic state, but a country undergoing westernisation. From then
+	  on, Türkiye has remained a secular Muslim country rather than an Islamic one because
+	  there is no mention of Islam in the Turkish constitution.</p>
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