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docs/guides/file_sharing/transmission_daemon.md

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 ---
 title: Transmission BitTorrent Seedbox
 author: Neel Chauhan
-contributors:
+contributors: Steven Spencer
 tested_with: 9.4
 tags:
   - file transfer
 ---
-# Transmission BitTorrent Seedbox
 
 ## Introduction
 
-BitTorrent needs no introduction at this point but if you're unaware, BitTorrent is a peer-to-peer file sharing protocol. BitTorrent relies on multiple peers sededing (uploading) the requested file to you but you also seed back to future downloaders.
+BitTorrent needs no introduction at this point but if you are unaware, BitTorrent is a peer-to-peer file sharing protocol. BitTorrent relies on multiple peers seeding (uploading) the requested file to you but you also back to future downloaders.
 
-Transmission is an popular open source BitTorrent client which has multiple frontends and backends. We will be installing the headless "daemon" backend.
+Transmission is an popular open source BitTorrent client with multiple frontends and backends. Here you will be installing the headless "daemon" backend.
 
-In today's mobile-centric world, it makes more sense to run Transmission as a headless server than directly on a laptop or even a desktop. This way we can seed files 24/7 while not consuming battery life on a mobile device if used for downloading.
+In today's mobile-centric world, it makes more sense to run Transmission as a headless server than directly on a laptop or a desktop. This way you can seed files 24/7 while not consuming battery life on a mobile device if used for downloading.
 
 ## Installation
 
-To install Transmission we first need to install EPEL:
+To install Transmission you first need to install EPEL:
 
 ```bash
 dnf install -y epel-release
 ```
 
-Then we will install Transmission:
+Then install Transmission:
 
 ```bash
 dnf install -y transmission
 ```
 
-## First Setup
+## First setup
 
-Unlike most Linux daemons Transmision sets up the configuration upon first startup. Let's start up and stop Transmission:
+Unlike most Linux daemons Transmission sets up the configuration upon first startup, so start and stop Transmission with:
 
 ```bash
 systemctl start transmission-daemon
 systemctl stop transmission-daemon
 ```
 
-After these steps, we will have a configuration file. You will need to stop Transmission as you cannot edit the configuration file while Transmission is running.
+After these steps, you will have a configuration file. You will need to stop Transmission as you cannot edit the configuration file while it is running.
 
 ## Configuration
 
-Now, we will configure Transmission:
+Configure Transmission:
 
 ```bash
 cd /var/lib/transmission/.config/transmission-daemon
@@ -56,7 +55,7 @@ Navigate down to the `"peer-port"` JSON entry and if desired, replace the stock
     "peer-port": 51413,
 ```
 
-I'll change it to `12345`:
+Here, the author is changing it to `12345`:
 
 ```bash
     "peer-port": 12345,
@@ -68,43 +67,43 @@ Subsequently, navigate to the `"rpc-password"` JSON entry and change the passwor
     "rpc-password": "{9cfaaade11d56c8e82bfc23b696fa373fb20c10e4U2NXY3.",
 ```
 
-Enter your plaintext password here. If you are worried about security, fortunately Transmission will encrypt the password upon the next restart
+Enter your plain text password here. If security is a worry, note that Transmission will encrypt the password upon the next restart.
 
-If you want to allow access from other IP addresses, navigagte to the `"rpc-whitelist"` entry:
+If you want to allow access from other IP addresses, navigate to the `"rpc-whitelist"` entry:
 
 ```bash
     "rpc-whitelist": "127.0.0.1,::1",
 ```
 
-For instance if you want to allow access to your desktop on IP address `192.168.1.100` we can add it to the comma separated value:
+For instance if you want to allow access to your desktop on IP address `192.168.1.100` you can add it to the comma separated value:
 
 ```bash
     "rpc-whitelist": "127.0.0.1,::1,192.168.1.100",
 ```
 
-Alternatively if you don't desire an IP whitelist we can disable it by setting `"rpc-whitelist-enable"` to `false`:
+If you do not want an IP whitelist, you can disable it by setting `"rpc-whitelist-enable"` to `false`:
 
 ```bash
     "rpc-whitelist-enabled": false,
 ```
 
-When you're done configuring we will start and enable Transmission:
+When finished configuring, start and enable Transmission:
 
 ```bash
 systemctl enable --now transmission-daemon
 ```
 
-## Firewall and Network Configuration
+## Firewall and network configuration
 
-Subsequently, we will need to allow the respective ports `12345` (for BitTorrent) and `9091` (for Transmission's control panel) in our firewall:
+Subsequently, you will need to allow the respective ports `12345` (for BitTorrent) and `9091` (for Transmission's control panel) in our firewall:
 
 ```bash
 firewall-cmd --permanent --zone=public --add-port=12345/tcp
 firewall-cmd --permanent --zone=public --add-port=9091/tcp
 firewall-cmd --runtime-to-permanent
 ```
 
-If you are not behind a NAT-PMP or uPNP-enabled router or connected without NAT we will need to forward the BitTorrent port (`12345` in our example). Each router is different but as an example on the author's MikroTik router:
+If you are not behind a NAT-PMP or uPNP-enabled router or connected without NAT you will need to forward the BitTorrent port (`12345` in our example). Each router is different but as an example on the author's MikroTik router:
 
 ```bash
 /ip firewall nat add action=dst-nat chain=dstnat dst-port=12345 in-interface=ether1 protocol=tcp to-addresses=SERVER_IP to-ports=12345
@@ -114,10 +113,10 @@ Replace `SERVER_IP` with the IP address of the server running Transmission.
 
 ## Testing Transmission
 
-Navigate to the IP address running our Transmission server. As an example we can download the torrent of a Linux distribution such as Ubuntu:
+Navigate to the IP address running our Transmission server. As an example, you can download the torrent of a Linux distribution such as Ubuntu:
 
 ![Our Transmission downloading Ubuntu](../images/transmission.png)
 
 ## Conclusion
 
-BitTorrent was designed in the early 2000s when most people connected to the internet via a desktop PC. And while it's impractical to run BitTorrent on a laptop or phone it's perfect to run it on a headless server via Transmission. This way we can seed files 24/7 and yet our downloads will always be available to us.
+BitTorrent was designed in the early 2000s when most people connected to the internet via a desktop PC. While it is impractical to run BitTorrent on a laptop or phone, it is perfect to run it on a headless server via Transmission. In this way you can seed files 24/7 and yet our downloads will always be available to you.