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       {Software Developer}{Jan 2022 - Present}
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-          {Increased repeat client bookings by 10\% at a local tattoo studio by developing and shipping a new web application to handle client consultations, custom requests, appointments, artist scheduling and payments.}
+          {Developed and launched a web application for a local tattoo studio, increasing repeat client bookings by 10\% by streamlining client consultations, custom requests, appointments, artist scheduling, and payments.}
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-          {Planned, designed, developed and shipped a consultation \& booking platform for a laser tattoo removal company, resulting in a 20\% increase in customer acquisition.}
+          {Created and deployed a consultation and booking platform for a laser tattoo removal company, boosting customer acquisition by 20\%.}
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-          {Improved monthly sales leads by 15\% at a door manufacturing and sales company by shipping a redesigned full-stack web application for the product catalogues with invoices and quotes.}
+          {Enhanced monthly sales leads by 15\% for a door manufacturing and sales company by delivering a redesigned full-stack web application with product catalogs, invoices, and quotes.}
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       {Akuma Games, LLC.}{}
       {Senior Software Engineer}{Jan 2022 - August 2024}
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-          {Planned, designed and deployed a full-stack web application with real-time chat, Twitter-style posts, rich player statistics, account linking and a storefront accepting digital and fiat currencies.}
+          {Architected and implemented a full-stack web application featuring real-time chat, social media-style posts, rich player statistics, account linking, and a digital/fiat currency storefront.}
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-          {Designed and implemented a fully-automated multi-environment DevOps pipeline that automatically built and deployed microservices to an environment-scoped Kubernetes cluster.}
+          {Developed and deployed an automated multi-environment DevOps pipeline for microservices, utilizing Kubernetes clusters for seamless environment-specific deployments.}
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       {Hypixel, Inc.}{}
       {Software Engineer}{Nov 2020 - Nov 2021}
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         \item
-          {Led a project addressing server code vulnerabilities to mitigate risks to the digital economy and achieving a 90\% reduction in incidents.}
+          {Led a security project to address server code vulnerabilities, resulting in a 90\% reduction in security incidents.}
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-          {Collaborated within a team of 30 engineers to develop, test and ship 50+ weekly updates for games played by over 200,000 CCU.}
+          {Collaborated with a team of 30 engineers to develop, test, and release over 50 weekly updates for games, supporting over 200,000 concurrent users.}
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       {Universal Music Group}{}
       {Software Engineer, Research \& Development}{Aug 2020 - Nov 2020}
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-          {Worked closely with team lead to build and test a full-stack web application allowing content creators to purchase licenses for the use of UMG music in videos.}
+          {Assisted in building and testing a full-stack web application for content creators to purchase licenses for UMG music in videos.}
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       {Hylist Games, LLC.}{}
       {Software Engineer}{Oct 2019 - Aug 2020}
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         \item
-          {Tested and rolled 50+ updates to production game servers, played by over 1,000,000 unique users.}
+          {Managed and rolled out 50+ updates to production game servers, serving over 1 million unique users.}
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-          {Utilized agile development to ship features in weekly sprints, participated in weekly meetings, daily stand-ups, and frequently pair programmed within the team.}
+          {Employed Agile methodologies to deliver features in weekly sprints, participating in meetings, daily stand-ups, and pair programming sessions.}
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-          {Migrated the codebase to utilize Continuous Integration and Continuous Deployment, saving up to 1 hour per on-boarding and improving developer experience.}
+          {Migrated the codebase to Continuous Integration and Continuous Deployment (CI/CD) pipelines, reducing onboarding time by up to one hour and enhancing developer experience.}
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